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New page, this time "just" a month after the last one!
If you were wondering why I didn't post anything in the past days, it's because I was working on this page (and I had countless problems finishing it, for some reason). Also, if it takes me longer than usual it's because my inbox is a real mess, sorry about that! ^^
Well, the flashback is now over, after 5 pages! We go back to the city of Iseria, where Lars is busy opening the way to Gunther and his soldiers. He tries not to kill unless it's necessary, luckily for that poor Herimash. Still, I'm quite sure his head will hurt for quite some time.
I was eager to work on this page at last, at least now we can have some action!
I hope you liked it, and as always any comment or critique to help me improve is most welcome! ^^
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As always with your comics, panel arrangement is the first thing that draws the eye. As always the panels are aranged with an establishing shop (should there be a need for one) that hooks you and draws you in. The first panel itself being beautifully rendered with those magnificent examples of Mediterranean, Middle Eastern and obviously Italian (your swallow tail merlons can't fool me! e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s⦠" width="15" height="15" alt="
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Glad you think that! 
I'll try my best to be as historically accurate as possible! I'm still quite ignorant about a lot of stuff, though, so I don't guarantee anything!
hahaha I'll draw gigantic boobs just for you one day.
Thank you so much for taking the time to write all this, I really appreciate it!
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Just for me?
Also don't forget the machiculations on your walls and towers
Anything you might need help with, go ahead and ask in the future. Who knows maybe I might be able to assist
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Thank you for the offer, I'll keep it in mind for sure!
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it's very cool and interesting, your art is also very realistic, please continue!
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That man must be silent as the grave to sneak up on a cat man like that... He might as well have brained him with a heavy blow to the back of the head with a club, it would have been more merciful... Think about it, they kidnapped a nobles daughter and killed three men... There going to kill him slow, IF they don't torture him first.
I think I'd had caved the back of his head in. Not out of hate, but mercy.Β
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This had me SO enthralled. I will go back and comment on each of this in derail later, I must seep now. This is amazing, you are truly a genius in numerous areas of artistic expression!
You inspire me good sir.
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I don't think so, I think he hit him with the flat of the blade.
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He just got knocked out, and tied up!
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And please make other pages too....
I really want to read what happens next...
I love it
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Well now I have read it, and I am intrigued the story so far I like, the medieval setting and the racial issues it faces with similarities to actual history.
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I'm glad to hear you found it interesting so far!
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I can't help but think of this world being were the Kahjiit are from.
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Okay, even if the guard is one-page character, I really love that you gave him a unique design instead of turning him into one of those βidentical face in the crowdβ. That longer cheek fur and smudged stripes and little ruff on his neck really make him stand out among the crowd! 
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Now, excluding the fact that this cat would surely make a very poor guard, I should say I was a little confused by the sceneβs location. At first I thought that the sentry was sitting on a wall, so it really surprised me when Lars sneaked up on him, as it seemed that they suddenly transferred to the streetβ¦ Only after a re-read did I realize that they were on one of those flat rooftops!
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Glad you think so!
I should have made it clearer, they were indeed on a flat rooftop! ^^
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wow just read the whole story, so cool ! I like it a lot
on what I can say, on several cases, there's a character action (movig foward for example) and it seems like frozen on the image. the feel of the move is kinda hard to find, sadly because it's beautifully drawn ! (see what I mean ?)
othewise, well its... you know i'm always blown aways with your job ^^
and I especially liked the face of the Herimash on the third square of this page ! awesome
keep on the good work mate
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Thank you a bunch! 
I know what you mean! Sadly action poses always turn out pretty static when I draw them! D: I need more practice.
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I see what you mean ! Frustrating ! May be inspire yourself of comix ? Or high action manga like dragon ball or DBZ ?
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Hi there.
I wrote some long comment with more praises than actual critiques because I like this page. And the comment was consumed by some connection error.
I'll try to be Β bit more laconic this time.
Your art style is a pleasure to look at. The way you both painted cityscape and those details at fur is awesome and feels oldschool in a good way.
I really love that beautiful sky and roofs scenery. IMO it can make some nice poster if exploited some more.
And I'm sure you are very well aware that effects of lighting supposed to be brighter than their surroundings. So there must be some perfectly reasonable explanation why you havent used wet brush to wash some paint down and why you have not darkened the fur against the lighting effect as well as why you don't feel like adjusting color values digitally, out of principle I guess.
Well, hopefully one day we'll see some lighting effects planned beforehand to be lighter than surroundings that may or may not include huge boobs.
Sorry for my poor English.
I'll go read the previous pages now, have a nice day!
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Aw, that sucks! D:
Thank you a lot, I'm glad you like it.
I'm not rally sure what you mean here, sorry, I also have problems with English sometimes.Β The light effects in this pages are not great a bit because I still need practice, and also because the paper was not the greatest this time, it absorbed the color horribly. As far as the shadow is concerned, I can only make them dark to a degree using watercolor, before ruining all the layers.
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Quite frankly, this certainly works out quite well for logic, because it does apply. Cigarrets are kind of bad for stealth outside a Metal Gear Game, as well you smell and see them a bit too well for this to actually work out. And well, now that this is done, dear Lars opens the gates for GΓΌnther (I hope using the umlaut is okay here, since his name is German) probably soon enough and he goes about it like someone who prefers a low chaos ending. Or simply is morally more on the white. Regardless, it will be interesting to see what will come.
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Cigarettes can be seen from really far away at night, it's actually surprising!
Yep, the umlaut is fine!
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This is pretty good point.
And a very good idea to point it out in the comic!
Smoking kills.
(because it makes you visible to your enemis)
I love this page and I am patiently waiting for the next one.
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Thank you a lot!
I hope to deliver reasonably soon! XD
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This is GREAT! Really great drawn effect of the cigar and background is great detailed! Awesome colors and as always in Your comic, great script!
Cool work!
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Thank you so much!
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Yay, a new page! For a moment I seriously though Lars hit Enorach, then I realized where we we in comic...
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haha nooo poor Enorach! XD He'd never do it!
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So it turns out smoking is bad for cats, too!
Looks great!
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haha yep, it is!
Thank you! ^^
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Pfff. Amateurs...
Also, I'm an idiot. Didn't realize until it was too late that that guy's one of the rebels (By the way, I love that there's no "obviously evil" character design bullshit here. Cute cats everywhere, here for all to see! No panel here's my favorite any more than number three!)
Hey, now. Don't just leave him out in the open like that! You never know when bound and gagged sentries will wake up and "do the worm" to the nearest alarm station!
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hah! Funny, this is exactly what Lars says on the next page! XD
It's been a long time since the first pages, it's not easy to keep track of what happens. And I'm glad you think that, because I also hate clichè villains! I prefer them to be (almost) normal people, with good reasons for what they do.
haha he'll have a hard time "worming" down from that rooftop!
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Who says he has that for to go?
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I love the way the gold and blue really make this one pop. Also, epic way to change feels for that cat from "generic smug guard" to "awww that poor, furry bastard" in three easy steps.
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Thank you a bunch!
haha mission accomplished, I don't want clichè villains! XD
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