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Here's the second page, I retouched it too and the colours are definitely better now. I will finally post the last page too, in a day or two
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Here it is, second page of this silly mini-comic and second attempt at making a page, and I think it came out better than the previous, mainly because of you precious advice. ^^ I made thinner page borders (so I don't waste precious space), made the speech bubbles' borders thinner as well, since apparently they were pretty annoying in the last page, and also tried to keep the text inside less cluttered. I also thought about changing font but I preferred to keep this one for consistency for the previous page, for future comics I'll probably use something else.
The colouring is a bit lazy ere and there because I was about to leave for university, and I really didn't feel like let you wait for more than 2 months (which is more than enough as it is), so I worked all day and night until 6 AM.

Again, this small comic is mostly a mean for practice to me, so any kind of advice and critique is most welcome, I really need them! Also, if you find typos or a text that looks too awkward let me know!

Description
Here's the second page, I retouched it too and the colours are definitely better now. I will finally post the last page too, in a day or two
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Previous page | Next page

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Here it is, second page of this silly mini-comic and second attempt at making a page, and I think it came out better than the previous, mainly because of you precious advice. ^^ I made thinner page borders (so I don't waste precious space), made the speech bubbles' borders thinner as well, since apparently they were pretty annoying in the last page, and also tried to keep the text inside less cluttered. I also thought about changing font but I preferred to keep this one for consistency for the previous page, for future comics I'll probably use something else.
The colouring is a bit lazy ere and there because I was about to leave for university, and I really didn't feel like let you wait for more than 2 months (which is more than enough as it is), so I worked all day and night until 6 AM.

Again, this small comic is mostly a mean for practice to me, so any kind of advice and critique is most welcome, I really need them! Also, if you find typos or a text that looks too awkward let me know!