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Art by Paul Frenczlithe enterprise class as it should have been
I have been writing a piece of fan fiction set 17 years after the Domiion war. In this story the main crew encounters the Earth ship Enterprise in its five year sweep of the alpha quadrant. In this story all that time travel junk shown in the TV show Enterprise DID NOT HAPPEN.
Humans did not encounter Klingons until the augment incident, there was no planet destroying sphere (that was star wars you plagiarists) and NO F@KIN TIME TRAVELING ROMULANS WITH SHAPE-SHIFTING UNDERLINGS.
There. My opinion has been noted.
As an aside, I did like the acting and the characters. The stories, except those noted, were well written.
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Romulans never travelled through time in Enterprise. Nor did they have shape shifting underlings.
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Β . . . did even watch the show?
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The blurry guy? The shapeshifting aliens doing what he said? The temporal cold war? The one with 'an old enemy'? The fact that the voice of the blurry guy was an actor who ONLY played romulans? The interview with the producer/writer who said that the temporal cold war was mainly with the Romulans?
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"Future Guy" was never revealed, however, it was supposed to be Archer, not the Romulans. And the Actor who voiced him, never played a Romulan. ( en.memory-alpha.org/wiki/Humanβ¦)
The Temporal Cold War never involved the Romulans. ( en.memory-alpha.org/wiki/Tempoβ¦)
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Well I stand corrected. The entire time travel plot was still front loading the entire series; too much too soon.
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I strongly agree with not using "phase cannons" and "photonic torpedoes" that is just ridiculous. My vision of this ship looks more TOS like and uses plasma cannons rather than laser though. Overall an interesting concept.
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I also like it a lot, to the point of [if you don't mind] making a phisical model of it in 1/2500 scale to
go with the rest of the Enterprises I want to build. I also agree with "keiku", the navigational deflector array should go in the prow.
This hip looks more Canon than the "Ent NX-01" from the series.
Great job....
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If by "have at it", you mean, go for it? Thankz, and I'll be sure to credit you for the design.
Laterz....
Vahmp
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yea, ive wanted to see it as a 3D model for a while, but my drawing talents tend towards drafting; so have fun with it. i look forward to the finished product.
Paul Frenczli even did the final rendering work, i just had a set of plans on graph paper.
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hehehe, I'm not talking about making a 3d CGI model. I going to make a scratchbuilt real model, out of pastic and such... just like the plastic kit models you buy in hobby stores. When done I'll show pics of it ok.
Laterz....
Vahmp
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I like it! Though I would still put the navigational deflector array in the prow if it was me.
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