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Published: 2020-03-24 17:47:37 +0000 UTC; Views: 3429; Favourites: 50; Downloads: 3
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Who could it be knocking at the door?Cover Image:
Part II:
Mature Content
Setting: the Slayer's Academy Annual Tech Convention
Characters: Alistar Stirling (blonde)
Lance Vromali (long haired brunet)
They've been roommates for five years, so yeah, they're close.
Shout out to my dear friend who was kind enough to proof read the draft dialogue <3 Thanks mate, that really helped ^^
Okay, so that took me longer than I anticipated to get the first part on here XD (September?! Seriously?! What the hell me?!) I've been obsessed with this for too long. XD
If anyone has links to tutorials on how to color webcomics, I'd love to see them!!!! And or links to free online 3d modeling software would be cool.
Comments, Questions or Constructive Critiques are greatly appreciated ^^
Characters and Story (c) AlexandeNight
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I can strongly relate to giving people slaps out of care :'DDD
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This had me in stitches XD
Sounds like you and Lance would get along famously!
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Attacking a sick boy... Not very brave of whoever the attacker is :/
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And what would you say if that attacker was a group?
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I wonder why they would attack him. It is in revenge for something he did to them? (maybe? because of the title?)
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I appreciate that you are giving this serious thought!
Part II is up, perhaps it has more clues
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XD Thanks mate! It was so helpful
I got so tired of looking at this thing that I had to work on something else, anything else. But web-comics are good for social distancing! 
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XD aie.
There was also an interesting episode of the podcast, Hidden Brain, discussing deep thought. Basically, if you isolate yourself without distractions, you're gonna be hella productive and creative because you can dive deep into your mind without interruption. It's super interesting.
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Funnily enough, I heard a similar thing discussed on a serial killer podcast. lol
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Actually that's not surprising. Since premeditated thought basically implies a lot of planning, and their antisocial behaviors would probably indicate isolation. Hmm. Well...I guess serial killers got an edge on the rest of us.
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lol, the Uber Driver.
Charisma and cleverness is generally thought to be key to antisocial personality disorder. When in actuality, charisma and cleverness is what makes them the most dangerous. They are like any population, some are brilliant, some are idiotic, but many don't give a damn about consequences. Their ability to form empathetic links has been severed. If you get someone who is very smart, charismatic and cruel; you have a very dangerous recipe.
Yes, cruelty to animals and rape can be foreshadowing of things to come if people are not paying attention to this person's psyche. My mother, for example, seemed to be fond of kittens, but would get rid of them as soon as they became adults (I don't know how). But she was fine doing damage to others and manipulating their emotions. Luckily, she was always playing a short game and never did things for the long haul (did I mention that she gave me a blood stained Diagnostic Statistical Manual back in the first grade with a notation on the personalty disorder page "evidence of conduct disorder before the age of 15" XD). Normal people have very little defenses to this type of behavior as they tend to project their own ideals onto other people.
See this is why I believe that castration is an appropriate response to rape. Also why I believe that there needs to be more behavioral health information and interventions. For most of these people, the goal is to make them less dangerous, and you can do that through therapeutic interventions. Punishing without behavioral interventions is foolish and can increase toxic behaviors.
I find personality disorders (particularly the darker ones) utterly fascinating.
Ohh, interesting that you brought up TBI. I know little about TBI's in relation to Serial Killers and Antisocial Personality Disorders, but damn, that makes sense!
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She was my first case study XD yeah, he is ^^
Research on TBI and concussions has been stunted in the past, both by major game players like the military/sports and by our limited technology. I think you will find this podcast interesting www.revealnews.org/episodes/la…
Also, here's the link to the Hidden Brain episode on deep work: www.npr.org/2017/07/25/5390926…
Reveal and NPR program, does in depth investigative reporting on a new story every other week or so. This episode focuses on student athletes and the dangers of concussions. One kid ended up getting his bright future dashed after a major concussion. He just wasn't the same after it. This makes sense because the brain is where your personality lays. If that's damaged, then there is a chance that it will change who you are on a fundamental level. It's not like everyone who receives a traumatic brain injury is going to suffer those types of consequences, but it can happen in some cases if the conditions are right.
Bruh, this is cool, I started to dig through the data basses on Psych Info and got several hits like
"Premorbid antisocial personality and substance use disorder in traumatic brain injury: A case report and review of literature."
5 months after his TBI he came to the emergency room with suicidal and homicidal ideation.
Here's a book "Head injury and externalizing behavior."
That looks at the links between traumatic brain injuries and externalizing disorders, ADHD, disruptive Behavioral Disorders, Behavioral change and Antisocial Personality Disorder.
Another book "Personal injury litigation in the United States and India: Acquired psychopathy"
Where it looks at TBI and the development of psychopathy
and there are several other hits. They seem to be pointing to damage in the prefrontal cortex, which makes sense as it is the decision making center of the brain.
The logic is an interesting thing. You also have to put yourself into a different mindset to dissect it. A lot of people get hung up on morals and values and it bars their understanding. I've had some of these discussions in my classes, and it was surprising to me to find how many people struggled with the idea that empathy is not universal. Yet alone how that changes motivations when Empathy is not present.
What Is This Program You Listen To?!!!!! It sounds super interesting!
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Poor Alistar and I hope he will be alright and very amazing work
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Thanks! I'm glad you like it ^^
Pretty sure that this is the high point of his day
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O__________________________O Oh..... No......!!!
*dies at*: "Stop stocking your boyfriend" XD
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Says something about Lance that he's still teasing Alistar even though he looks like he's going to collapse XD
For context, Alistar made sure that he was on Razen and Lilly's protective detail during their exhibition at the Academy's convention.
And yeah, it's a big "Oh no"
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D: Are you going to make a Part 2!!!!!
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I layed out all the sketches, there's going to be a part 6
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O__O OOOHHHH I'm staying tuned!!
Is he going to be okay??? I just gotta know!!!!
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Haha, thanks!
The next part should be out soon. I just have to do shading and final touches
I mean he's alive but it's a new plot point in story; I have no idea what the lasting effects of this are yet
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Sweet ^___^
kind of like me I may have created my world but I don't always know what's going to happen from one minute to another since it kid of just comes to me as I go or in dreams
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and part II is up!
Aie, it is like that! Mine tend to come in daydreams though XD It's not something I can directly interfere with, just lightly tug at the edges to expand the view. If I'm lucky, I get to ask questions and the scenario will unfold.
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Same!!! Though my stories can come in both night dreams or day dreams, and for me it like I can play around with different outcomes to see which one fits better or if it tells me THIS is what happens next. It's like a feeling that just seems right and you go with it!
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It sounds super cool to have dreams about them! My dreams just take me on a wacky ride when I remember them. Like this one time I was hanging upside down being clubbed by a severed zombie arm with a disembodied voice saying "stop hitting yourself" XD I woke up and couldn't stop laughing.
Yeah, right now I'm flirting with the idea of using a tournament arch in The Mists. They're not my favorite things to watch, but I really want to find out more about the characters and their strengths. Besides, I want to know how Razen would deal with a tournament. I think he'd be super cute <3 I also think he'd get roasted pretty early on...but I'm not sure hehe Alistar would do well if he were up against other slayers. It would be really fun to see how the others would respond too! There are a lot of characters that I want to flesh out more, and that may be a good way to do it
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I can have wired dreams like that sometimes XD but given that
i don't have real friends to do anything with and all i got are my
people, it's like that is ALL i see, think about, talk about, therefore
dream about... sounds kind of sad really 
Ooooohhh that would be awesome to see 
you about Razen being cute doing a tournament 
that once i have a character named Jason Hatch who dose NOT
like Darren one bit, (okay well he does... sorta... but he has almost
an evil way of showing it) and i thought, "What would it be like if
Jason was separated from the group (his friends, which makes up
his team as he's a skateboarder) and Darren was too. Would they
get along or would Jason be trying to kill Darren (in his usual mean-
playful way)" XD because to be honest, Jason is also in love with
Virmont, but so is Darren and they both know V has a place for
them in his heart, yet since him and Darren are in an open-relationship,
Jason knows that V would chose Darren over him if given a choice,
which is one of many reasons why Jason doesn't like Darren.
So yeah it's fun to play around with different thoughts
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