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Haha, this is probably one of my favorite pages for some odd reason. I can't say why. I just really love how the whole thing came together so cleanly.
The first of many punches to come!
KAILANI PUNCH.
I'm trying to make Kailani look a little less anorexic like most Ambivians seem to be. Especially since she has Lanian in her. I don't want her to be fat or chubby or anything, just big-ish boned. But not too much so cause I still want her to have a curvy look.
lol I dunno I'm just experimenting.
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Favorite panel: 8/last Least Favorite panel: 6 (I reffed with a pic of myself but it still looks weird) 
Personal Crits (ones I'd prefer you not mention): -The one-take look of panels 3,4,7 & 8. Cause I made it that on purpose. That's always how I imaged the scene in my head. C:
Constructive Criticism, pointing out flaws, and spelling/grammatical help is DEFINITELY helpful!
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Haha yep indeed! Antennae go off when Ambivians are angry or startled! 8D
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lol poor tanner but he kinda deserved it
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I think I know what's off in penel 1 D: Zammy and garin's legs be too short, woman! they look like midgets! D: Sorry if that was bad or.. you know. Or if anyone else has said it...
BUT IT LOOKS AWESOME, that's the only thing I spot, thier legs look a bit off to me :/
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PFFF OMG
It's truuueee xD
lol midget legs
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XDDD So you think that's what's wrong with it?
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I think that is a really good reason! I still think sooomethiiiing else is wrong though along with it. But can't figure it out D:
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D: Lemme know ifya do!
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*smacks Tanner* DD<
YOU'RE GONNA BE GAURDING THE QUEEN NEXT I BET! BECAUSE YOU ARE ACTING LIKE A RUDE FACE!
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OH MAI GAWD! FO' SERIOUS! D:<
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XD XD XD
SHE HIT HIM
XD
I do that to some of my friends at times
XD
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Violent friends are the best! xD
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HE WAZ ALL TOUCHY!!!! lol that waz epic! MOAR LOL
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lol thank you so much! 8D
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np! THIS COMIC OWNZ LIFE AND IT WILL FOREVER RULE LIFE!!!!
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Oh my gosh I LOVE the last panel! Its so funny and awesome!
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I have to agree with you, I love the last frame! Fluffed out fur and the facial expression is priceless! =^^=
I have a friend who would agree with Kailini most wholeheartedly. His older brother was mentally retarded and died an early death. To this day the "R" word is equivalent to the "N" word...
Great work! =^^=
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Haha I'm glad it came out so effectively!
Very much so. I try to avoid it myself as much as possible. I'll admit I do spout out "retarded" or "tard" every now and then when referring to someone being silly, but never in reference to a mentally challenged person. I find that a bit harsh. I just kinda say it out of habit. Like "That's so gay". Trying to break it though. So I made Kailani favor this as a reminder to me, I guess.
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Hehe, I guess Kailani has the Punchline. 
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PFFF haha A.J. made a funny! 
Thank yoouu~
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You can read it backwards and it make somewhat of since.
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PFFF
"Was he hitting on you?"
"Sir Garin and Madame Zamora? Yeah."
xDDDD
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XD
Gah Tanner is my favourite.
I picked up something different about this page.
The speech bubbles?
The coloring?
...._.
Maybe it's the curtains.
Also, did you play with Tanner's clothes?
I never noticed the collar, the swirly pattern on the jacket, and the little green beads.
XD
Gah, But I love this page~
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Nope. The collar and swirls and all that were there before. C: I did make the swirls bolder though, as they were a bit harder to see previously (and I want them to look as tacky as possible haha).
I also experimented on the shading a bit on this page. Maybe that's it?
Thank you so much! C:
By the way, your avatar is so cute. Makes me laugh. xDD
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XD
Oh ha ha.
Gah! Yeah probably. 
Hee hee! X3 Thank you~
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Their expressions... Their poses... The shading... The background... Everything is just so epic win.
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Aww thank you so much! <3
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Thanks! I've been working on that.
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oh and about panel 1, the only probltm I can see is that everyone seems tilted a bit too far to the left
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BUT HE WAS ALL....... TOUCHY
I LOVE IT. Can't wait for the next page! You're doing a real good job!
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Haha thanks! xD I'm glad my effort is paying off!
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*Phew!* Ok, not that I've finally caught up with reading this, let me just tell you that I really love your comic. ^^ It's cute, funny, thoughtful, ingenius and like nothing I've ever seen. ^^ It's wonderful. <3 And Tanner is hilarious. xD
I have a little suspicion/guess about Zammy, but I'll keep that quiet, in case you don't want anyone else guessing. I dunno, I'm probably wrong, but I just look at things and guess a lot... sorries. xD
Anyways, I love your drawings. ^^ Keep up the good work, and I'm eagerly awaiting the next page!
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(sorry for late reply!)
Wow! Thank you so much for the kind comments! <3 It means a lot to hear it!
lol I don't mind guessing. But don't expect me to confirm it. Cause I like to leave people wonderin'
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No problem. xD
And you're welcome, I understand how it takes half a second to fave, bit it takes real thought and heart to write something out. ^^ You're work deserves it greatly.
And yuppers, that's what the author has the privledge of, the fun of leaving people hanging. xDD (Does it all the time with her book, readers wanna eat me xD)
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Filly this is wonderful! I am getting so hooked on TS, its so far my favorite comic of all time! I could sit here and read it over and over again.
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Aww, that's so awesome ;o; thank you!
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ooooooooooh
what're you talkin' about?!
the pose looks freakin amazing!!
she looks pissed there!
lol
but Kailani standing up for the retards!!!
w00000t!!
lol
but i like this page too
VERY well planned out!
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Haha very pissed indeed!
Oh yes! >xD
Thank yas!
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