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Haha, this is probably one of my favorite pages for some odd reason. I can't say why. I just really love how the whole thing came together so cleanly.
The first of many punches to come!
KAILANI PUNCH.
I'm trying to make Kailani look a little less anorexic like most Ambivians seem to be. Especially since she has Lanian in her. I don't want her to be fat or chubby or anything, just big-ish boned. But not too much so cause I still want her to have a curvy look.
lol I dunno I'm just experimenting.
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Favorite panel: 8/last Least Favorite panel: 6 (I reffed with a pic of myself but it still looks weird) 
Personal Crits (ones I'd prefer you not mention): -The one-take look of panels 3,4,7 & 8. Cause I made it that on purpose. That's always how I imaged the scene in my head. C:
Constructive Criticism, pointing out flaws, and spelling/grammatical help is DEFINITELY helpful!
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While reading the comments, I think this is everyones favorite page. XD It's definitely my favorite.
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Haha I'm thinking so! xD I hope I have more pages with such reaction in the future!
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xDDD
I should make a Kailani punch icon.
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yeeey the next page >w<
i absolutly LOVE Tanner xD His expression in pannel 5 is amazing. And the last pannel! Epic XD
Well, the only thing i might critique on is the redish person closest to the back where kailani and Tanner are. She is a bit too small to be that close to them.. i think unless im looking at it completely wrong D; but.. its all amazing owo cant wait for the next page!
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Thank you! xD Oh that Tanner!
Oh wow, she is :'D She's way off compared to them. Maybe I'll remove her and see how it looks.
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Your welcome ^^ oh yus, i might have to make fan art for em >w<
Alright! :]
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Oh my god. Tanner just makes me laugh every single time. <3
WIGGLE FINGERS.
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He just has that amazing ability. xD
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Make a :icontannertouchyplz: Please make one.
Or a stamp. That would also be good.
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Haha oh man, that'd be hilarious xD
I just miiiight. Maybe even an animation.
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lol PAWNCH
In the last panel, Tanner's head looks a little out of wack. On one side of his hair tuft it's angled and on the other it's flat.
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CHYEAH
Hair tuft? Where at? (lol so many tufts)
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lol oh! I see it! I shall fix! 8D
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This and the first in-colour page are my favorites. YESSS.
Panel 5 and the last one made me laugh. Every page is made better with Tanner~ |D Or Garin. Actually, this page is awesome because it has BOTH.
Mm, not to mention I can tell your art has improved a great deal since the beginning of this chapter. I'm amazed by just how nice it looks! <8D
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Sweet skittles! 8D
Oh that Tanner. Him and his awesomeness. xD
It very much has! Even I'm surprised at it! :0
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Your expressions, are the spawn of epic win. Fantastic job, as usual~ C:
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Awwwws! I try my best at them!
Thank you!
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OMG YAYZ I LURV THIS COMIC ITS AWESOME! 
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LOVE Tanner's face in the fourth panel. Great page
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awesome, i like panel 6 :3 it looks cool the hands are perfect
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Aww thanks! I was having a lot of trouble with those hands
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well it doesnt look like it X3 lol
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OMGS love it when he's like Touchy >.>
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Haha oh that touchy Tanner! (oh god that sounded wrong lol)
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If you want a good redline, you might try asking Fyvix.
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Can you simply send her anything and she'll give a crit or...?
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You can ask her to redline it for you in a note or comment.
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So its finely up xD its really cool keep up the good work filly
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Indeed! At long last! xD (lol or, ya know, a week haha)
Thank you muchly! I shall try!
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Theres No need to try harder 
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Haha gotta love Tanner. xD
Panel 5 is an epic win.
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Haha love this page
Tanner pwns xD love how his fingers are all wiggly in panel 5
Love the backgrounds *O* You amaze me xD
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wiigggglllyyyy
xDD
Thank you! <33 I am teh happy to hear it!
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