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Niv was on land when the violent storm hit. - TO BE CONTINUED - featured with Niv More ARPG Art art © AmaranthineRain aka Kiri Rabina Ramdeo
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- Day 9: Whisper -
336 word count
Floodwaters spilled over from the rivers of the region in such mass that Niv and a doe searching for her fauns were swept into a large lake. Niv allowed the squabbling currents to roll her, glad to be submerged in water again, though it did not feel the same as her marine biome.
While watching the storm clouds Niv spotted a black, bird-like esk that moved slowly across the water’s surface. Something about the way it walked seemed hitched, almost mechanical, and there was an eerie air to the thing that penetrated the water and sent a chill down Niv’s spine. Out of nowhere ringing started in her mind and Niv hunched against it. The sound became distorted and rose above the dull thunder of both the floodwaters and the storm. Niv suspected the discord originated from the esk – and there was something peculiar happening at the end of its tail… When a current pulled Niv closer to the surface she undulated out of it until she was carried deeper and away from the deeply disturbing esk.
A doe tumbled through the water, carried closer to the slender esk by the flood. Niv had only a moment to predict their collision before a burst of energy from the great glowing mask of the dark esk forced her to turn away. When she looked back there was a new esk below the slender one. It was palest purple with a dark mask and built vaguely like a reindeer. Its tail was dark, much longer than Niv’s own, and pale flowers grew along the marking on its flank.
The new esk hung frozen in the water for a moment and when Niv turned to observe the dark esk she found it had disappeared! Just like that she had lost track of the creepiest esk she had met yet, though she was glad the ringing had faded to whispers – or perhaps those were the whimpers of the newly transformed esk…
Playing catch up! Aaaaaah!
Are you participating in esktober this year?
GP Breakdown (1454 & 951):
Base Score: 4 GP (Shaded Illustration)
+2 GP (Full Body Bonus)
+6 GP (Full/Scenic Background)
+3 GP (Writing: 336 words)
Total GP: 15
AP Breakdown:
Base Score: 10 AP (Shaded Illustration)
+5 AP (Full Body Bonus)
+20 AP (Full/Scenic Background)
+5 AP (Personal Work Bonus)
+10 AP (Other Esk Bonus: 10 AP * 1)
+20 AP (NPC Bonus)
+20 AP (Esk Interaction Bonus: 10 AP * 2)
+6 AP (Writing: 336 words)
Total AP: 96
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REFERENCES & CREDITS
underwater storm
1454 Niv belongs to AmaranthineRain
951 Anik belongs to LIFE0N
000 Seventh belongs to ThoseWhoWentMissing
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Comments: 8
Dokebhi [2018-10-14 01:28:12 +0000 UTC]
man the description really makes this way more amazing and the impact of it gave me chills!
ahhh you did such an amazing job with this one!
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AmaranthineRain In reply to Dokebhi [2018-10-14 01:33:37 +0000 UTC]
Thank you, and thank you for taking the time to read the comments! I try and work stories and illustrations together and I'm hoping the combination makes the story more interesting to read.
I'm so behind though lol
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LIFE0N [2018-10-11 23:24:28 +0000 UTC]
LOve thisss, the little story with it is so fitting, not all esk are happily created and this is one hell of a way for your esk to see that oh boii
Thank you so much for including Anik!
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AmaranthineRain In reply to LIFE0N [2018-10-12 03:36:59 +0000 UTC]
Yay I'm happy I did your baby justice! I just assumed it wasn't pleasant for Anik because of the nature of Seventh's transformations You're so welcome, thank you for sharing him with me on Discord so I could explore this idea.
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runeowl [2018-10-11 22:17:20 +0000 UTC]
I think this is my fav of your esktober pieces so far, well done
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AmaranthineRain In reply to runeowl [2018-10-11 22:22:44 +0000 UTC]
Aaaah thank you! *bows* I definitely applied a lot that I learned since starting this line-less style for Inktober. Thanks for taking the time to check in and comment on my work. I feel like sempai is praising me for hard work xD
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runeowl In reply to AmaranthineRain [2018-10-14 22:47:14 +0000 UTC]
Aww haha, I'm just happy to see your improvement and efforts for esktober! <3
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AmaranthineRain In reply to runeowl [2018-10-15 00:23:38 +0000 UTC]
I'm happy I'm improving, too! It's nice to feel like you've got friends beside you for improvement. <3
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