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Published: 2012-11-21 14:53:06 +0000 UTC; Views: 14363; Favourites: 1757; Downloads: 118
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This poem describes me completely. I have a strange obsession with sugar, and... I don't need to explain the rest.((NOTE: I didn't write this poem. This was just a piece of typography. All credit to the original author.
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wow, this is good 
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It's NOT their work. They did not make ANY of it.
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But you never notice
And it's hard to not cry
I see how you look at her
I just don't get why
My heart is still strong
Mind the pain that you've caused
And I wish that you'd see it
But life has taken a pause
When she breaks your heart
Don't come crawling to me
I'll give you no attention
Exactly what you gave me
So I'll water the flowers
And uproot the dead
Refill the sugar bowl
Clean my wrists stained blood red
I've wasted my time here
Waiting for my cue
To finally start laughing
Instead of crying over you
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I guess you were kinda fruity,
and youΒ΄ll end up all alone,
so iΒ΄ll just put some earphones
and play Call of Duty.
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I love COD! And reading all these comments... I laughed. People think I'm suicidal, and I'm stealing work. I just wanted to share my favorite poem!
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donΒ΄t worry, you never know what will ignite the mob with torches.
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lol that could use a DD too ^^
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Wow that beautiful~!
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Thank you very much~!
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A true poem of murder, roses, and suicide. Totally my poem. ^-^
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I don't really know what to say, but this is probably the most interesting simple poem I've ever read.
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This is very sweet and sad.. ;n;
But I have to agree with ~AskMontreal ...
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I believe it was originally:
"Roses are red
Violets are blue
Sugar is sweet
And so are you
But the Roses are wilted
The violets are dead
The sugar bowl's empty
And so is your head"
^This one seems to be more of a putdown XD
I like rendition though ^^
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This speaks murder and love
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I dont think adding more makes it entirely yours.
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Curious poem, I wonder where did you found it xD
In other hand, don't wish to die. I don't know what kind of problems you have, so I won't judge you. But you are alive and I'm sure you are good. And many good people who should be alive too, are unfairly dead. We all have a chance to make the world better, a chance they don't have because they are dead. If we kill ourselves... The hard work of those people will be useless.
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I really love this add-on to this well-known poem! You should defiantly write some to contribute to it! <3
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i understand it, and it is a beautiful poem but i will forever wonder why people write this sort of thing.... its depressing.
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Great poem! I can relate to it :/ Ignore the haters
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Don't care, I'm grateful for them sharing it :3
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They didn't even CREDIT the original writer, the original writer deserves the LOVE. Not this art thief!
I can't imagine you'd be very pleased if someone stole your work and posted it without crediting you, then got very popular off of it while people thought it was their 'amazing' work.
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But I rest my case.
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Yeah I totally get where you're coming from. The original author deserves recognition. But I am still grateful for them sharing this. Without them I would have never seen it ^-^
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Yes... But still, I think if they wanted to share it, they should've linked to the creator on a journal... Because y'know... It's against dA rules to upload work that's not yours >.>''
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I know right. Meh, some people won't listen. But hey, not much we can do 'bout it.
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This is a beautiful poem
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I love it~ I think it's fine the way it is but adding something else wouldn't be such a bad idea.
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I didn't realize this was a sad occasion.
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look i love to write and ...people who write write about THEIR feelings and what's going on in OUR lives... and we never care about what others say... if you think this is selfish then screw you.. because love can be either wonderfull..or as heart breaking as a world war... everyone has his or her moments ..let people talik about what they want to talk about if you don't like it .and hatters then why even pay attention to it if you don't like it???
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Don't listen to the jerks who complain about this work. I like its complex simplicity
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It's not their work. They did not make it.
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