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Published: 2003-12-01 19:10:43 +0000 UTC; Views: 53; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 17
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a prose/poem thing i just wrote this morning.pretty easy to interpret.
please comment...
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Comments: 6
FallonOfInverness [2004-01-25 07:03:16 +0000 UTC]
A cup of coffee for me? AWWWW thanks! Although you probably don't want to see me on caffine. It's slightly scary...
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FallonOfInverness [2004-01-21 06:11:13 +0000 UTC]
Absolutly amazing! Yet again another wonderful piece, you have such a grasp for images and the perfect place for your words. As a fellow poet I am enthralled and worship your ability.
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apollo2003 In reply to FallonOfInverness [2004-01-21 22:37:43 +0000 UTC]
awww. that's such a wonderful compliment. thank you so much!
here's a coffee cup for you -
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livingpoetsociety [2003-12-31 23:35:52 +0000 UTC]
This is a wonderful piece. I am placing it in the LPS journal, if that is all right with you? If not, you can note me and I will take it out. Oh yeah, By the way... you are the poet of December, congradulations.
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ArtofChase [2003-12-01 20:37:53 +0000 UTC]
Wow! Just... wow! ^_^ Great piece. I think the coffee alliterations were my favorite. they flowed so naturally... Anyway, I'm not sure if alliterations is ever the right word. Can't find my dictionary. You get the point, though.
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apollo2003 In reply to ArtofChase [2003-12-01 23:23:28 +0000 UTC]
THANKS!
yes, they are alliterations! i didn't even notice. you always do that - point out aspects of my pieces that i never realized were there, but help build it up.
Thanks for your continual support. :hugs:
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