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Published: 2003-10-14 18:26:39 +0000 UTC; Views: 33; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 14
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a journal entry... a free write type thing where one line just lead to another.Related content
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free writing can sometimes come up with some cool stuff...take this for example...it is totally random seeming at first, but after reading, it takes on a rhythm and tells some kind of story. I also enjoyed the visual aspect, as the lines start short, get longer towards the middle, then became short again...it makes the poem read as if it is a thought, starting out small, getting more detailed, then trailing off as your mind moves on to the next idea...
all in all, great poem!
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thank you! you're the first to comment on this poem. i thought it just wasn't good, because it came out so randomly. i was just typing up a journal entry, and it turned into this.
thank you for your support.
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