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Axlwisp — Commish: Servants Make Good Pillows
Published: 2012-09-28 22:44:06 +0000 UTC; Views: 6381; Favourites: 129; Downloads: 238
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Granted, you have to fatten them up a little first~If you're curious, the one on the left is named Ki'ri and the one on the right is Ta'els. If I remember correctly, Ta'els is kind of like a servant to Ki'ri, so... shenanigans.
Stuffing commish for . This was loads of fun to shade, so I hope it looks good. Thanks for commissioning me :'D
These two are (c)
And since this is apparently deviation #400 for me, imma request critique because why not~ I probably should ask for it more often. Just... be gentle on my poor foot-drawing skills... (just kidding, bash em all you want ;3 )
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Heh cuuute
It's scenes like these that make me a semi-furry XP
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they won't mind being fattened up. free food for them. they just have to be a pillow sometimes
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too tired to write critique ma nigga
the foreshortened legs look more short and stumpy rather than short
i like the little lineart details though. they excite me.
bye axlwisssszzzzzzzzzzZzzZzZz...
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I still don't understand how the confangeld critique system works but dammit I don't need it.
So to Start with I'll do the characters. Now I don't know the two characters personally, so I'll just be stating it as is. First off looks to be a size difference between the two, and I don't mean in bellies, I mean in head sizes more than anything. Anatomy all seems to be looking good, fingers for the fatty on the right look more animalistic than human, not sure what your intention was. Bellies are looking quite nice, I particularly like the way the right one is looking squishing around the legs. Girl on the left has a beautiful expression on, it really captures the essence of sleeping quite well, one on the right looks more like they're just sitting there with eyes closed however. Lighting effects on both of them are looking quite nice, though im not sure if the one on the left's tail should have lighting all around it. Overall I really like the poses you chose for this and I feel they work quite nicely
Onto the BG it's interesting. I like the vine effects on the stone, and it does have a nice feel, particularly combined with the shadows except for that glowing red in the back. At first I liked it due to it's smooth color, but when I tried to figure out what it was, only thing that came to mind was an over the top sunset or something, also not entirely sure what the things poking out around the boarders are. I had assumed they may be rocks or tree leaves, either way some areas of the back ground could use a bit more refinement, perhaps more of a depth feel to them.
Overall though quite an enjoyable piece, certainly pleasing to the eye with a nice sweet feeling.
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Tis a sunset, and they are tree leaves. I may go back and work on the BG a bit.
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It's tempting, isn't it? x3
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*falls asleep on her belly*
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if I were her servant, I hope I will make a good meal
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