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Published: 2011-02-27 00:11:01 +0000 UTC; Views: 21005; Favourites: 1450; Downloads: 306
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well here it is! a lot more work then you might think but it is true that since the illustrations are simple i'll be able to pump a Dave comic out pretty quickly.a thanks goes to Dragontrap for making a pretty coherent guide on making interactive comics (you can find the guide here. )
there is a link to the website at the end but you can also find it here anyways.
so yeah, chapter 2 is on the way, should see it next month. i'd rather not stuff journal entries into anyones mailbox about progress or meaningless stuff so if you want to follow dave, check out the site. but don't worry i'll still be posting the comics here.
anyways, see you next month!
*edit*
the size is fixed now, sorry about that.
**edit**
ok NOW it's finished. god what a nightmare. there's still things im not happy about, but it will do for now.
***edit***
ok i've finally got it how i like it. i wish i could just change the resolution of the final piece but flash isn't nearly so flexible.
anyways it's good now so, whatevs.
****edit****
i have to give a big thanks to Jiakko for suggesting this for DD, if you liked dave, it would mean a lot to me if you checked his work out, or just said hi ^_^
thanks Jiakko! and thanks everyone who read my comic!
*****edit*****
now with back button and restart button, as requested (or merely suggested) by ChozoBoy.
i honestly thought about putting these 'features' in but i somehow talked myself into thinking they would harm the story some how... they will be implemented into future chapters.
Β© 2011 Aaron Lenk (b0xman)
Dave's Wurld is copyrighted Β© Aaron Lenk otherwise known as b0xman.
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At the time of writing this (Feb 8th 2012) there were only 11 chapters published. you can check how many chapters are published on the website.
there will be people mad at me for directing them towards the website, try it! it's better!
Chapter list
Chapter 1
Chapter 2
Chapter 3
Chapter 4
Chapter 5
Chapter 6
Chapter 7
Chapter 8
Chapter 9
Chapter 10
Chapter 11
Chapter 12
Chapter 13
Chapter 14
Chapter 15
Chapter 16
Chapter 17
Chapter 18
Chapter 19
Chapter 20
Dave's SHINY website
Dave's twitter
Dave's Facebook
vote for Dave!
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Comments: 450
b0xman In reply to ??? [2011-03-06 16:50:55 +0000 UTC]
plushies would be cool. i could do a plushie of the object to (heh heh heh)
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Artistic-dribbles In reply to ??? [2011-03-06 14:58:34 +0000 UTC]
This is an honest comment, not a bash on you at all.
I was interested in the beginning and it was so long and drawn out I got bored, but I liked the ending alot. So in my opinion (and thats all it is, is an opinion) is cut out much of the middle, make it shorter to not loose our interest.
I liked the flash part of it, much more interesting then just making it a panel by panel comic.
congrats on the dd *off to check out the rest of your stuff*
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b0xman In reply to Artistic-dribbles [2011-03-06 17:03:30 +0000 UTC]
no, i really appreciate an honest comment.
this comic is 25 pages long, and i believe every section is necessary. because, when i wrote the script for this chapter it was 4 pages long. i honestly dislike comics which refuse to have more then 5 panels, but that is what this comic called for. it annoys me that i am writing and drawing a comic which breaks my own guideline but it seems that's always how it works.
also as far as the whole story is concerned this is the slow start, and it will pick up in pace.
but it's interesting that you got bored. was it the 'search' that bored you? tell me more *rubs chin*.
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Artistic-dribbles In reply to b0xman [2011-03-06 17:16:31 +0000 UTC]
I think it was the middle of the search where he was getting anxiety and the walking walking walking But re reading it I can see how it is important for the story considering he has just found himself and is feeling all these new emotions for the first time. I also understand the need for the walking segment as it is showing how vast and open nothing really is.. So you can disregard my comment, I understand it better reading it for a second time
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b0xman In reply to Artistic-dribbles [2011-03-06 17:19:45 +0000 UTC]
no, it was totally valid statement, i appreciate your honesty and will try to act on it. thanks for re-reading it lol.
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TheCrystalDove In reply to ??? [2011-03-06 14:42:34 +0000 UTC]
This. is. amazing. end of story
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b0xman In reply to TheCrystalDove [2011-03-06 17:09:55 +0000 UTC]
not the end! tell me more... (hahaha)
thanks very much. ^_^
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SomeoneWhoDoodles In reply to ??? [2011-03-06 14:24:32 +0000 UTC]
This is super cool and cute! It's simple, but the concepts are very thought-provoking
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b0xman In reply to SomeoneWhoDoodles [2011-03-06 17:10:24 +0000 UTC]
thank you! I'm really glad you enjoyed it.
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jessterstudio In reply to ??? [2011-03-06 14:13:47 +0000 UTC]
Exclent, the charter remindsme the Jodorovsky work at 60's in "FΓ‘bulas PΓ‘nicas" [link]
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b0xman In reply to jessterstudio [2011-03-06 17:14:09 +0000 UTC]
whoa, that is some trippy stuff there. i see the comparison, even thought i don't speak Portuguese.
thanks!
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kayneelay In reply to ??? [2011-03-06 14:08:06 +0000 UTC]
That's kinda... (I don't have any adequate words)... but I love the common philosophy of those sentences structure.
Dave and anti-Dave reminds me myself creature and my alter ego. Just... you know... amazing!
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b0xman In reply to BluPaint [2011-03-06 17:15:31 +0000 UTC]
I'm sorry you didn't enjoy it, but thanks for reading anyways.
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Kryana In reply to ??? [2011-03-06 13:55:06 +0000 UTC]
Wow, this... Makes you think I love it!!
Congratulations for the DD
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b0xman In reply to Kryana [2011-03-06 17:17:00 +0000 UTC]
thank you. i'm glad you enjoyed it. ^_^
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thehatterschild In reply to ??? [2011-03-06 13:41:41 +0000 UTC]
So cute, and sweet
Oddly relatable
o_O
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b0xman In reply to thehatterschild [2011-03-06 17:17:23 +0000 UTC]
i think i know what you mean. thanks very much
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Abwettar In reply to ??? [2011-03-06 13:27:08 +0000 UTC]
I couldn't love Dave and his world of nothing more if I tried.
But alas, is it possible to love nothing?
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b0xman In reply to Abwettar [2011-03-06 19:08:18 +0000 UTC]
apparently it is!
thank you, i'm thrilled you loved it so much.
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Abwettar In reply to b0xman [2011-03-06 20:32:52 +0000 UTC]
Haha well thats alright then!
You're welcome
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kokodp In reply to ??? [2011-03-06 13:25:44 +0000 UTC]
this is really stupid and not the least ''thought provoking"..
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b0xman In reply to kokodp [2011-03-06 19:08:59 +0000 UTC]
that's ok
thanks for taking the time to tell me that.
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daisukekuroneko In reply to ??? [2011-03-06 12:44:26 +0000 UTC]
Amazing, DD totally deserved!
keep it up!
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TheCoolz In reply to ??? [2011-03-06 12:40:53 +0000 UTC]
"Damn"
Lolololol xD
This, in all seriousness, is very good and deep.
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b0xman In reply to TheCoolz [2011-03-06 19:09:45 +0000 UTC]
thank you, i'm glad you think so. thanks for reading! ^_^
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another-language In reply to ??? [2011-03-06 12:37:47 +0000 UTC]
Beautiful story! I love it! Cam't wait for chapter 2!
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b0xman In reply to another-language [2011-03-06 19:42:12 +0000 UTC]
i think it will be out a week from now, but don't hold me to that. i have a lot of incentive to have it out sooner now.
thanks for reading!
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another-language In reply to b0xman [2011-03-07 14:25:43 +0000 UTC]
No problem, such a funny and beautiful story just has to be read!
The Daily Deviation is very well deserved!
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LookAnOwl In reply to ??? [2011-03-06 12:34:01 +0000 UTC]
Such a funny and clever story. Can't wait for chapter 2!
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b0xman In reply to LookAnOwl [2011-03-06 19:37:06 +0000 UTC]
i hope you will enjoy it! thanks for reading!
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Neddea In reply to b0xman [2011-03-07 14:33:37 +0000 UTC]
You're welcome Keep the good work!
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