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bioniclop18 — Aizahi and Smurt
#night #pyramid #star #temple #fire
Published: 2019-11-23 18:56:19 +0000 UTC; Views: 318; Favourites: 31; Downloads: 1
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Another drawing of my character Aizahi (again, I should really draw the other too). with smurt and some children from her tribu.
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I like that you used a nice bright colour o the clothes to stand out against the night background. The colours you chose, help the characters stand out in the darkness. Another thing that I like about this is the perspective. You have the fire in the corner off the picture, giving it a look of some one looking through the fire sitting across from them. I also think you did a pretty nice job with light and shadows being cast from the fire onto the people and the ground. I can see quite a bit of little details in this to. Like, the little kabob of meat sticking out of the fire, the buildings in the background and the stars. Nicely done.
If I would say one thing that might be a little off is the positioning of the main characters by the fire. From what I can see, they are sitting crossed legged and leaning back on their hands. But, from this angle, the legs look a bit off? It looks like you were doing a foreshortening affect on the legs. From this angle the way the legs are positioned, they look smaller and don't quite match the size of the body. The back leg that is under the front view leg, looks pretty good and the tip of the shoe also looks like it is a bit larger to show that it is coming closer to the viewer. But the other leg sitting on top look a bit too short and pulled back from the position. The knee would be a bit more forward and the foot would be angled more and away from the body. But, that is from my perspective.
Over all its a cool picture with a lot of good colours, details and nice facial expressions. Keep up the good work!
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WOW! So toxic!
Dear my friend my English is low and that's why I usually use art to say something.
It is well known when an artist makes a comment to another artist they find insulting maybe it is the ego who will know
If you find my comment as mocking, than I do not have nothing to say to you.
I will hide my comment or edit with nice comment.
I do not care about my art to promote cuz when I finish my art for my book will be deleted.
Do you know how much I have watchers? 0 and they won't be.
DO you really think I care anymore for promoting my art?
Was a time when I was thinking that will be nice to promote my art and to have watchers but just read your comment and you will find just negativity.
I even didn't have a wish to comment your work cuz is well done just wanted to give you my suggestion on some details.
And yes I make a lot of mistakes dear professor and as you notice my English suck and that's why I apologize, and I was hope that you will understand my comment as positive but ok
Obviously I am not worthy to leave a comment on your work!
I wish you every good!
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I am adult woman and I try with some kind nice aproch cuz I know how you all react when someone tries to give suggestion.
Did I say is bad art? NO!
Did I try to give my suggestion on art? Yes!
You return with toxic respond how I try to promote my art!
Yes my English sucks but there is no reason to mock me for that.
I leave my group cuz I am not good on English and not worthy to give comments.
I never rude you or your work.
I write that I love it, not hate it.
I apologize if you felt bad about my comment, that was not my intention.
Its just comment, all here usually love my comments you are only one who didn't love my comment.
And I make comment and I regret doing it.
Anyway, I won't respond on this, you are a great artist and you deserve a nice comment but not mine!
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Hello I found this work through and am commenting on a contest that is currently in place. I love how you made the fire look it just looks really cool! But might I suggest putting a little more detail into the background such as the 2 characters with giving them some more color that makes them 'pop' from the rest of the background. I really do enjoy this though and hope you continue with your work
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You're very welcome! Keep believing in yourself, it's doing wonders~
You too!
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