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capncraka [2010-01-04 23:51:26 +0000 UTC]

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This tutorial seems to be somewhat informative from what I could tell, but that there is the problem..it has no structure and just seems thrown onto a page. This really defeats the purpose of a tutorial since people come to learn how to master a technique then have a hard time figuring out how to even use the technique properly.

This tutorial is written fairly well and I saw no spelling errors, for the most part but I feel this deviation would benefit greatly from just a little bit more organization. Instead of a wall of paragraphs, how about breaking it up into sections. Have an introduction like you have at the top...then seperate it from the rest of the steps. If you aren't graphically inclined try finding someone willing to collaborate with you in dAmn Chats to make the tutorials main graphic while you write the content. Just a suggestion e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile)" />

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alyamaha [2010-01-04 22:21:00 +0000 UTC]

thanks it really useful to have some Tutorial form time to time
You english aare very clean i like your way of writing

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Forbiddensoul562 [2010-01-04 22:15:19 +0000 UTC]

I'm glad i already know how to work the aperature on my cameras. XD Because this comes across a little confusing when i read it. I think it's the mathmatical side that goes into this, and trying to explain it. XD Overall, though, its a good tutorial ^^ Nice job!

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