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bite06me — Crap Poem.
Published: 2004-02-20 23:34:59 +0000 UTC; Views: 3041; Favourites: 29; Downloads: 1421
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For charliemay
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12 years old and stuck in a rut
Confused and lost- unsure of life
Led by pain to pain, it's rough
There's a lovely pain in gashes
An addiction, or attraction
The only thing I needed.
The only thing i need.
There were nights it'd be so hard
To stop the blade- the blood
But it felt so good, so calming
Like my world, crashing- stopped
I would carry blades around with me
Daily, waiting for an urge
Even when I had quit- arms clean
I couldn't stay away
Remove the image from my mind.
Even with pale whte smooth skin
Scars nearly faded
I can still see in my mind
Sites of what could be.
I was tired of hiding
Tired of them finding
Cleaning up my mess-
blood soaked rags
Broken razors on the ground.
And the hurt thats in their eyes
Stings me deep down
I can't stand to bring them pain
So with the love i have for them
i vowed to try to stop
I can't stand to see that look- expression
I want us all to be perfect
I need to stay clean.
For them, us, and me.
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and i dont know why this got on top favourite... im really sorry if you dont like this kind of writing- the depressing, woe is me type....- i dont always write this vividly and horribly. heh....
im sorry you had to read this...
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Comments: 139
ah yes this is why i disliked the being on front page top favourites- iiiiiiii dont only write this kind of thing, just take a cruise through my gallery
- and yes yes this poem was partly my experiances, it was written from a friend's as well, kind of a tribute to her-
Mmm thank you very very much for the read and ocmment, im very glad to have others out there reading my writin's besides my usuals, thanks again,
-hollyann-
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Oh hun,you're so awesome
~Charlie
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much
-hollyann-
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...do you know how they pick it? cuz this one only had like 6 favs when it got there, haha i did get freakin giddy- jumped straight outa my seat when i found out- but yes, thank you very much 
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I don't think sadistic self mutilation is exactly poetry. Oh well. Its not my bitch.
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i definetly see your point, iin a way i agree- but only to a certain extent, it can be appropiate if its written correctly, and not just angst
i actually didnt like this one, i dont get why its on top favs... but heh whatever
thanks for the comment and read
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i definetly see your point, iin a way i agree- but only to a certain extent, it can be appropiate if its written correctly, and not just angst
i actually didnt like this one, i dont get why its on top favs... but heh whatever
thanks for the comment and read
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You're right. It's not your bitch.
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hi, i dont know what your name is, who you are or what you are but i love you. i love you for everything that you have been through and everything you will go through, for the courage you had to share your story that too many fucken people can relate to.
i dont know if its strong, i really hope its not because no one should have to go through that, but if it is i want you to know that youre not alone, that ill never just be able to see scares either, its always gonna be blood its always gonna be just like it was when i did it. i want you to know that there is strength in yourself but mostly there is strength in sharing your story. the only thing that helped holocaust survivors was massage and telling their stories (being touched and touching) share your story with everyone you meet and it will be so much less of a burden.
im sorry if i got it all wrong and if you think im crazy.
you are beautiful.
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you are a wonderous wonderous person
i dont usually full out write this type of poetry, but these past few days i couldnt help it- cuz stuff right now is blah- but thats besudes my current point- you are so freaking wonderous, im extremely glad to see a great person out in the world- thank you very much, oh jeeze
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i didnt do it for me. i did it for you. you... i dunno. i think its amazing that you had the courage to write about it so vividly cause fuck ive... well ive been there too many times. you are brave. and your writting is beautiful. it made me cry.
always have faith in yourself
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and im rambling, heh
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you made my day, my week, my month. share all you can. fuck what people think. people are fucks and assholes (not you, youre an angel.)
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This captured the emotions I personally went through and some of my past friends at their attempts at stopping. It's beautifully written.
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Not something I can relate to personally, but pain I do very well relate. Great writings.
-tif
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Ee thank you, your comments are extermely appreciated
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this is awesome...I LOVE IT ALOT!
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This is awesome!!!!!! I love it!
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I really like this poem. Really emotional. Good job
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This is refreshing in my view. A poem about S.H. that is about how hard it is to give up, awesome stuff my dear. I wish I could put what I needed to write while I was 'quitting' like you can. All of my attempts were still filled with hate so much that it wasn't worth keeping them, they ended up in some landfill or incinerator somewhere. This is fucking gorgeous, bit like something else I may mention *shifts eyes* 
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Thankyou ~anitha
Miss Holly ann, I would have you know you are far FAR from
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wow very powerful stuff i can really relate
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ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
i remember so well
just remember things do change, eventually.
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