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The General FMA OC Guide.

This guide covers only the most basic stuff.

Here's the list of the tutorials we are working on:

-OCxCannon: Make it Work Out.
-Cannon - OC Interaction.
-Alchemists.
-Chimeras.
-Homunculous.
-Military Personel
-Civilians & Others

And more... feel free to suggest anything.

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The characters belong to us, group founders. Some of the pictures found in this tutorial were drawn by the other founders. See if you can tell.


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tansyuduri In reply to ??? [2012-03-01 17:17:26 +0000 UTC]

what did you make this with?

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Bitter-Cherry In reply to tansyuduri [2012-03-01 19:52:56 +0000 UTC]

What do you mean?

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tansyuduri In reply to Bitter-Cherry [2012-03-01 22:59:33 +0000 UTC]

what program

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Bitter-Cherry In reply to tansyuduri [2012-03-01 23:03:44 +0000 UTC]

Uhm... flash?

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tansyuduri In reply to Bitter-Cherry [2012-03-02 18:26:52 +0000 UTC]

Adobe flash maker?

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Realm1993 In reply to ??? [2012-02-29 17:36:54 +0000 UTC]

You should make a simple guide on each race. Like one for Cretans, one for Ishvalans, one for Amestrians, etc.

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Bitter-Cherry In reply to Realm1993 [2012-02-29 19:43:17 +0000 UTC]

That cannot be done because there is very little info on the countries even Amestris is the country where everything happens. We only know amestrians are arian people, it is mentioned by Miles I think, that pure blood amestrians have blonde hair and eyes. It's also said Ishvalans have red eyes, white hair and dark skin, and we know these genes are really strong because of Miles. Xingese characters simply look asian, the only notable difference is that they can have various eye colors but that they always come in dark or dull shades. Like Mei's dull blue eyes and Fuu's olive green eyes. All we know about the other countries is that Creta = France, Aerugo = Italy and Drachma = Russia. One can simply use the actual cultures for reference on how a character from each country would look like, but one is also allowed to make things up when it comes to that. In my headcanon for example, red hair is a common trait in Aerugo, but this is not official, it's made up by me.

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Realm1993 In reply to Bitter-Cherry [2012-02-29 19:58:25 +0000 UTC]

Oh! You have a good point! My OC was going to be from Creta, so I was hoping to find out something specific about Cretans. But I can use France as a refrence. That's a good idea! Thanks!

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NativeGirl2000 [2012-02-27 21:15:14 +0000 UTC]

That ''lost twin'' Winry looks messed...up o.O

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NativeGirl2000 In reply to NativeGirl2000 [2012-02-27 21:18:39 +0000 UTC]

Or somethin Wendy Bellrock XD

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Deus-Lux [2012-02-26 18:16:34 +0000 UTC]

Interesting fact, Amestris was based on England. Hiromu Awakuwa (sp?) admitted to that in an interview.

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Bitter-Cherry In reply to Deus-Lux [2012-02-26 20:14:58 +0000 UTC]

It's in the comments, and it's based on both Nazi Germany and England but Germany has to be the most obvious.

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Deus-Lux In reply to Bitter-Cherry [2012-02-26 20:32:13 +0000 UTC]

Okay.

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silver-maple-leaf In reply to ??? [2012-02-26 11:10:59 +0000 UTC]

what if my chimera is a ninaxander chimera?

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Bitter-Cherry In reply to silver-maple-leaf [2012-02-26 20:15:10 +0000 UTC]

Then that's not an OC.

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rinrei In reply to ??? [2012-02-22 17:21:14 +0000 UTC]

Does Ametris have albinos, I don't think so but I'm doing a thing online and I need to confirm it.

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Bitter-Cherry In reply to rinrei [2012-02-22 17:24:10 +0000 UTC]

Albinism happens everywhere hun, it's not a race thing.

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rinrei In reply to Bitter-Cherry [2012-02-22 17:34:43 +0000 UTC]

Sorry, it's just because I never saw it in the show and I didn't know how to respond. I thought that some people would use it to make their characters stand out.

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GoddessofAlchemy26 In reply to ??? [2012-01-29 04:19:33 +0000 UTC]

damn, now my oc is busted...

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MadeCheaply [2012-01-22 23:22:30 +0000 UTC]

Isn't Midori Japanese?

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Bitter-Cherry In reply to MadeCheaply [2012-01-23 00:12:28 +0000 UTC]

Midori is only half Amestrian.

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MadeCheaply In reply to Bitter-Cherry [2012-01-23 01:54:26 +0000 UTC]

Oh Okay ^^

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AlphonseElricsWife In reply to ??? [2012-01-20 12:00:08 +0000 UTC]

This is a great guide.I definately needed it!
thanks so much!
I'll wait till some more of your guides come out I think I need to improve my oc.XD

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game-addict111 In reply to ??? [2012-01-06 02:00:42 +0000 UTC]

Another thing on the names is that a lot of military personelle have their last names shared with military equipment from World War II.

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Bitter-Cherry In reply to game-addict111 [2012-06-24 05:25:21 +0000 UTC]

Oh yeah some of them do.

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Kiraaii In reply to ??? [2012-01-01 02:40:16 +0000 UTC]

ok i will be working on the Registration form right away

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SnowAngelRika In reply to ??? [2011-12-31 22:37:54 +0000 UTC]

I love this

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Bitter-Cherry In reply to SnowAngelRika [2012-06-24 05:25:04 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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misslalariot [2011-11-24 15:21:41 +0000 UTC]

Well I this and its really well done(give yourself a pat on the back)and the Ed twins made me lol hehe...anyway I was wondering I have an oc "Robin Tucker"and as you can see by the name she is related to Shou and Nina Tucker......she is Ninas sister.I was just wondering is it a bad thing to have Robin related to the Tuckers.....what if I make the story work I dont want my oc to be a mary sue.

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Bitter-Cherry In reply to misslalariot [2011-11-24 18:53:58 +0000 UTC]

Heh thanks.

Well you see, there's no "sue trait" that instantly makes a character a Sue (unless we're talking about a FMA OC with wings and mermaid magic...), all OCs and Canon characters have them, they need them or they would be plain and boring. You have to find out which work better for each character and hoe many to give them as well as making sure you give them flaws.

It's possible to pull off pretty much everything, but it takes a lot of work and creativity, and you have to analyze the story and make sure there are no loopholes, and there will be as you are adding a character that's related to a canon and you can find these even when this is not the case.

Perhaps you'd want to join our club? I've noticed you have to chase people around to get critique. We have one spot left for this period.

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misslalariot In reply to Bitter-Cherry [2011-11-24 18:57:17 +0000 UTC]

Really I would love to join!!!!

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Bitter-Cherry In reply to misslalariot [2011-11-24 18:59:14 +0000 UTC]

All you have to do is fill out one of our Registrationg Forms, send it along with you join request and you're in. Just make sure you read the rules first. :3

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misslalariot In reply to Bitter-Cherry [2011-11-24 19:01:23 +0000 UTC]

Sure so is there a base for the registration form???

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Bitter-Cherry In reply to misslalariot [2011-11-24 19:10:17 +0000 UTC]

Yes, you can find it in the club, I think it's also in my gallery.

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misslalariot In reply to Bitter-Cherry [2011-11-24 19:17:51 +0000 UTC]

Ok thanks amigo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Bitter-Cherry In reply to misslalariot [2011-11-24 19:26:14 +0000 UTC]

Hahaha XD no prob.

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katkitoshi [2011-11-20 16:17:17 +0000 UTC]

LOL I love the "derp" Ed clone twins XD. That really made me laugh, out loud, for real.

This is all good stuff to note ^_^.

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Bitter-Cherry In reply to katkitoshi [2012-06-24 05:24:59 +0000 UTC]

XD I'm glad.

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infectitious [2011-11-20 14:18:13 +0000 UTC]

Uhhhh what if my character is dead...and she's like a shinigami....and that's why her name is japanese ish...o-o

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Bitter-Cherry In reply to infectitious [2011-11-24 06:18:51 +0000 UTC]

Then I don't think this character belongs in FMA.... ._.

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infectitious In reply to Bitter-Cherry [2011-11-24 16:49:25 +0000 UTC]

..... ._. uhhh well she's from Japan and then moved to Germany and dies and is sent to Amestris....so idk o-o

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Bitter-Cherry In reply to infectitious [2011-11-24 18:56:02 +0000 UTC]

Dieing in Germany doesn't mean you're gonna end up in Amestris, and there is no such thing as "Shinigamis" in FMA.

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infectitious In reply to Bitter-Cherry [2011-11-24 19:05:12 +0000 UTC]

..............I guess I'll make a different plot then...o-o

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Bitter-Cherry In reply to infectitious [2011-11-24 19:11:53 +0000 UTC]

Yeah try something else, if you want a Japanese OC you can make up Amestris's Japan equivalent just make it realistic, like how Xing characters look chinese and whatnot.

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infectitious In reply to Bitter-Cherry [2011-11-25 20:34:16 +0000 UTC]

Hmm I guess so... guess I'll throw away the shinigami idea and make it a crack fic later XD thanks for the help

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ChibiKohai In reply to ??? [2011-10-22 06:55:07 +0000 UTC]

Haha this was really fun to read!
i too have an issue with OC-Cannon pairings that dont work out along with ones that bend the storyline so much the events couldnt possibly happen. i do my best to stick with the actual storyline as much as possible (as a plus, it helps with figuring out a plotline XD) it takes more thought, but makes a MUCH better story

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Bitter-Cherry In reply to ChibiKohai [2011-10-23 20:56:04 +0000 UTC]


We have a little saying in
"There is no shame in OCxCanon, as long as it's done right."
And yes, it's not wrong to bend some things, but sometimes it gets ways too crazy and makes no sense. When you try to stick to what you have, it actually requieres more creativity, so it's better for writers, they learn.

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ChibiKohai In reply to Bitter-Cherry [2011-11-24 06:15:43 +0000 UTC]

haha I do my best XD
Raimi's storyline was made before i got to Ling getting fused with Greed and when I got to that part of the show I was like, "O.o screw you!" XD
so I added extra dimensions to it.
It annoys me when ppl create a character just for the purpose of living their fantasies with a character... like you said most of the time they just don't stay in character. Also when ppl are like "OO this person! OO that person! I'll pair them ^^" and most of the time... it just goes too far or out of character. You're right- it does take a lot of creativity. I do my best to make sure the characters are... well.. in character XD I have friends review my chapters to make sure

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rhr-forever In reply to ??? [2011-10-09 19:14:40 +0000 UTC]

YES! I love this. Thank you! This will be so helpful! :3

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Bitter-Cherry In reply to rhr-forever [2011-10-23 20:53:53 +0000 UTC]

I'm glad!

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