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Published: 2009-01-13 22:13:07 +0000 UTC; Views: 213; Favourites: 6; Downloads: 1
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Description Mature content for tasteful, 95%, rear nudity. No naughty bits.
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The shallow, carnal lifestyle is flimsy. Everything's falling apart, but all you care about is keeping it warm between your legs at night. Sex sells and you're leading the market.

I just wish that market would follow Wall Street's recent example. It's certainly not free of corruption, much like the jabronis that ask for bailouts.
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Comments: 11

Blazbaros [2009-05-14 02:48:05 +0000 UTC]

*whistle* Hellooooooooooooooooooooooo!

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DestinieKirby [2009-01-16 23:15:55 +0000 UTC]

Nice work. I like her earring and the side boob looks nice.

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Draslushee [2009-01-14 02:55:04 +0000 UTC]

Y'know, I have to admit that I hope stuff like this doesn't pop up too often. All this blood loss can't be good for my health.

The title certainly fits, both figuratively than literally. I doubt anyone would get the philosophical messages without those artist's comments, though. Most will likely see "OMGBOOBIES." A flaw in the system? Yes, perhaps.

You can't -see- Null's face here, but her body language certainly says everything that needs to be said. It seems like she doesn't even notice that she's come undone (again, figuratively and literally). Or if she DOES notice, she certainly doesn't care. Quite appropriate for her personality and the theme matter (though again, not everyone will notice ).

The Blanke 2.0-style hair continues to shine through. That extra shading makes it look much more detailed and realistic... and that, in turn, makes the whole piece much better. It just feels like so much more effort has been put into it... and I don't doubt that much more effort HAS been put into it.

It's hard to tell if Null's neck is too long or not... that's probably because part of it is obscured by her hair, and it's difficult to tell how much of it is. But without careful observation (though I imagine several will carefully observe this piece...), it's not something that's readily noticable or definable, so it doesn't really create a problem.

You've done a very nice job of shading Null's back. It looks a bit streaky for random reasons, especially around the center of her back, but it's nothing major. As a whole, it looks quite accurate, and the black lines indicating Null's skeletal structure look like they're in all the right places.

As a whole, Null's arms look fine, but there are a few things that probably could've been done better. First, her left elbow (her left, your... left... wow, for once, I don't have to clarify) looks a bit square, and should probably be a bit more pointed. Also, I don't see anything resembling a knuckle on her index finger, so said finger looks like one solid mass. I'm not sure how well this would translate, but knuckles are sorta like knees on your fingers, so maybe you could apply the concepts used on Skye's knees to make good knuckles... on a small scale, of course. I'm no anatomical expert, so I can't say for sure.

Null's rear is well-shaded. I refuse to say ANYTHING more on that subject.

I can't really see anything to complain about with Null's legs. They're well-shaded, well-proportioned, and the joints look natural. You've gotten good at those thanks, Cap'n.

Also, I do like Null's bracelet and leg-ornament-thing. I guess she had a bit of space left in her shoebox wardrobe for this week and decided to toss those in there. They round it out nicely, though, along with the earring... having some sort of accessory certainly makes this feel a little -less- like a show of skin. ...Just a little, though.

Finally, the background is quite appropriate. It looks shattered... which, again, fits the subject material nicely, even if no one notices it.

Overall, good work. I don't want the large amount of rear nudity to become a habit, though - it might eventually cause reputation damage or make Magna-Core seem like something it isn't. It suits Null, though, so let's keep it to this. And Dras is always looking forward to more CG awesomeness from Cap'n Blanke.

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Blanke In reply to Draslushee [2009-01-14 03:43:57 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for the critique! I kinda figured this one wouldn't be up your alley, but I assure you this sort of thing is still the exception, not the norm. It's a drawing like this which thickens the line between Null and the "good" girls.

Next submission will take to heart everything you've been pointing out about those hands. It seems like I've let myself get lazy on them so many times that now I falsely think it's hard work just to finish one.

You bring up an excellent point at the start, about how nobody would really catch the meaning without my comments. A full background(see: actual background) would probably make the concept a little bit clearer, but even then the system is stacked against it as long as we men have our instincts. So I have to rely on the power of suggestion. I'm just glad you were able to connect some of the dots when I pointed out the picture.

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Draslushee In reply to Blanke [2009-01-14 03:49:17 +0000 UTC]

Dot-connecting is what Dras does. And I'm glad I could be of help, cap'n.

And thanks for the thanks on my critique. I've actually started taking pride in these things... it feels good to be giving them again.

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RedWingsDragon [2009-01-14 02:32:17 +0000 UTC]

Flimsy he says XD Hot work here

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Jin-L [2009-01-14 00:37:04 +0000 UTC]

MmmmmPORN?

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Blanke In reply to Jin-L [2009-01-14 02:36:08 +0000 UTC]

I think it'd at least need a nipple to join that club.

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Jin-L In reply to Blanke [2009-01-15 05:14:07 +0000 UTC]

Oh dear god, no.

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Blanke In reply to Jin-L [2009-01-16 01:21:19 +0000 UTC]

At any rate, it's not a club I'd care to join, anyway.

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Jin-L In reply to Blanke [2009-01-16 21:39:43 +0000 UTC]

Same here. :c

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