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Published: 2015-04-22 11:53:38 +0000 UTC; Views: 1519; Favourites: 17; Downloads: 3
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Japanese sense of reading!First: The First Choice - Cover
Next: The First Choice - Page 2
Here comes page 1, with clean text, in full color and in time!
Please please please tell me in the comments what you think and try to guess what the plot's gonna be about! Aaah I love these two so much!
All comments are appreciated!
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Comments: 11
I think this is well done! ^^
The drawing is nice and I wonder what the story would be like *o*
Maybe it's that....
Rin loves Makoto
but
Makoto loves Haru
but
Haru loves Rin!
(ehem ehem) >.>
Anyway, I look forward to more chapters... Please do continue your work
I'm not very good with art anyway... So I can't tell you specifically what you need to work on ^^" Sorry but I really did enjoy it! Hurry and make more chapters! >w< lol just kidding... take your time and I will be sure to keep an eye on more of your work!
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Well you've got one of three right, which is better than nothing XD
Thanks a lot for the adorable critique it was a joy to read^^ I will make more soon, don't worry. I think I'm getting a rythm now and there should ideally be one page every month for each of my comics. so that's three pages a month since I work on three comics. I really hope I can work this fast but of course I can't guarantee it for now^^ Thanks again dear^^
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I really like how his hair is draped in the bottom right corner
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Rin's hair is a joke. The fact it's his natural hair color, like he's BORN with it makes it even better, I mean worse XD But still more socially acceptable than Kuroko, I guess. When your child is born with rainbow-colored hair, you should know what's gonna happen next, there's a word for that: GAYYYYYYYYY! XD
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"When your child is born with rainbow-colored hair, you should know what's gonna happen next, there's a word for that: GAYYYYYYYYY!"
I'm gonna remember that forever now rofl! 
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XD but it's so true for Rin and Kuroko!
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Wow. La colo est parfaite, sans occulter la justesse et la précision du dessin. C'est vraiment excellent. Tout va faire la totalité de l'histoire en couleur comme ça? *-*
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Ce sera tout en couleur, mais en fait, je trouve ça plus facile que le noir et blanc. Oui je sais ça paraît bizarre mais avec la couleur tu as deux façons supplémentaires de créer du contraste: la couleur et la saturation. avec le noir et blanc il n'y a que deux options: le contraste proprement dit, du noir au blanc et les effets de textures, qui sont très durs pour moi. Je suis une quiche en texture... une texture de quiche... je suis moelleuse.
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thank you very much, dear!
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