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Your heart doesn't beatto the same rhythm as mine
but I want it to.
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I'm sorry, dear. It's a painful feeling.
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Thank you kindly, darling.
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Thank you! I appreciate it. I'm glad you enjoyed it. c:
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This is a wonderful haiku, you have said a lot in only a few words
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Haiku's are difficult LOL. So I really appreciate this, oh man <3 Thank you!
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You're welcome 
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If you still feel like the words aren't coming to you,
maybe you should try listening to some nice music?
If I feel like I want to help guide my imagination,
I usually listen to Industries of The Blind and similar bands,
because they choose some very imaginative titles that are like small pieces of poems,
and make really expressive instrumental songs to boot.
Listening to things like that really helps me to come up with new ideas,
and I have quite a few written down that I plan to make something out of someday.
Anyways, here's a link to one of their songs: [link]
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I listen to music constantly! Haha (':
Sometimes I just get really...blegh.
And I don't get anything. It's a little difficult to explain.
And yeah I know what you mean!
I love songs that could be read as poetry, and things.
Titles are a love of mine! Haha.
I know exactly what you mean! Reading other people's work and listening to music get me inspired the most.
But sometimes I just can't do it for a while.
Oh! Thank you. As with the other song you sent, I'll listen to them when I get home C: Music makes me happy! So thanks. x
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I'm really glad c: Thank you!
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I like the title.
And the haiku.
It all fits in my head, at least.
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Thank you so much, babe!
I appreciate it c:
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You're very welcome ^-^
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Sometimes going simple produces lovely things. Like this lovely haiku.
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I love simple things as well.
Thank you so much dearie! xx
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You're welcome!
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First line is a bit cliche (who cares? It's a great one.) but you really renewed it with the other two lines. It's completely marvelous.
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At first, before I turned it into a haiku, it was
"Your heart doesn't beat to the same rhythm as mine."
And I don't mean it to be read alone, like, it should go with the second line, you know what I mean? O: not "your heart doesn't beat"
and stuff.
But yeah, it sounds a bit cliche now that I look at it bwahah.
Thank you though! I appreciate it. (:
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Interesting.
I think it definitely sounds better as a haiku. 
I actually had a line similar to that in a poem of mine & didn't know it was cliche until it was pointed out as well. But you made something good out of it and that's all that matters. 
You're very welcome!
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