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Published: 2011-03-29 01:47:56 +0000 UTC; Views: 6338; Favourites: 109; Downloads: 28
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I'm kind of proud with this drawing, I think that the girl looks great, I just messed up her right leg a bit...This will be part of my portfolio, alongside with two others and some upcoming pieces
Constructive comments please! tell me what I should improve!
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Comments: 123
LadyArtsong [2011-03-31 21:26:22 +0000 UTC]
This is so neat! I love the softness and the emotion conveyed in such a simple setting.
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SemiLex [2011-03-31 20:29:13 +0000 UTC]
Omg omg! this looks so simple and yet I love it so much!
It makes me feel warm!
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Tamster224 In reply to ??? [2011-03-31 19:13:03 +0000 UTC]
Oh! Lovely piece of work, there. C:
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d4riuss4v4ge In reply to ??? [2011-03-31 18:34:30 +0000 UTC]
...Oh my, I'm blown away! lovely expression, beautiful composition and use of colourβ¦Awesome work!
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DTKinetic In reply to ??? [2011-03-31 17:00:45 +0000 UTC]
Hmm, the picture has a really nice theme to it, you don't see as much deep and clearly shown emotion represented through music nowadays.
To offer constructive criticism, I'd say that the background just over the railing could use some improvement in its composition. Just the order in which the building on the left is really close, the one on the right is intermediate...the middle is far away, etc. seems a little jumbled. Maybe next time try to arrange it so there's more of a pattern/consistency, like as you go from right to left, the buildings get smaller.
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SerpaDemon [2011-03-31 15:44:22 +0000 UTC]
It looks serious but kinda sad. I love the soft colours you used. ^^
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Ven-Drace In reply to ??? [2011-03-31 13:52:58 +0000 UTC]
nicely done! I like the details and the atmosphere!
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catopuma In reply to ??? [2011-03-31 11:26:22 +0000 UTC]
she really looks great. especially her head does (:
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ArtByKassie In reply to ??? [2011-03-29 23:31:02 +0000 UTC]
I'd offer a constructive criticism if I knew enough about color pencil (color pencil has never been my strong point). But I can tell you that I really like this piece, love the colors, the way you chose to crop it, and overall it has a nice feeling to it.
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c-osmos In reply to ArtByKassie [2011-03-29 23:40:28 +0000 UTC]
thank you very much, I appreciate it a lot
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WoodenMarker In reply to ??? [2011-03-29 02:24:11 +0000 UTC]
This is...different. I LOVE IT!
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