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Published: 2011-03-29 01:47:56 +0000 UTC; Views: 6338; Favourites: 109; Downloads: 28
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I'm kind of proud with this drawing, I think that the girl looks great, I just messed up her right leg a bit...This will be part of my portfolio, alongside with two others and some upcoming pieces
Constructive comments please! tell me what I should improve!
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Great! But the cello kinda looks more like a bass. Try making the top (where the wood enters the neck) a little less triangle and rounder. But you could always just rename the picture "Mini Bass" if that would be easier.
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Thanks about tge advice! I guess i should've done a bit more research on te instrument I was drawing ^^
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Nice! I like the depth a lot. Also the way you drew her hands make them look very delicate which I like a lot. Good work!
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really lovely! what to improve... feet aren't quite right, big toe should be on the side closest to the cello. Big toes of each foot point in.
I'm being really picky, but you may want to double check the bow hold that the cello player is using.. not quite right. I spent 12 years playing the violin, so I know how tough such things can be
It's really a very beautiful drawing. I love your style, very gentle and whimsical.... you would be good as a children's author
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thank you very much for the critisism, i appreciate it
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I love the colors you used.
Though I agree that the right leg could use some work, especially the ankle. It looks too thin compared to the left leg.
But overall it's still a great drawing!
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I think you should do some bolder coulering but rather than that it is really good!
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Very well done! I really like the soft shading with the colors.
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Oh It's preety nice. I very like the background.
Don't worry about leg becouse it still looks great
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That is really good, but there are few things that might be corrected, first the structure of the cello is a little bit wrong, I do not know if it is intentional, you mentioned about the legs so I am gonna skip that, and the hand that holds the string (I do not know if it is the correct word for English) has a little bit of problem, but as I said overall it is a really good job!
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Not much to say here. The only thing that needs improvement would be her right ankle.
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This is a really beautiful piece
I really can't find any complaints
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It'd be cooler if it had mysticla unicorns prancing in the bg and she had a horn too~ Lol Anywais. It looks great ;3
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what a lovely illustration, you did a great job on this.
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Love your style and very gorgeous coloring! The only thing I'd suggest is using thicker lines for the girl so she stands out more~ ♥
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very beautiful, i like traditional drawings <
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I like the shading with the colors. Looks like an illustration from a storybook
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Reminds me of Gauche the Cellist.
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Great composition, great drawing altogether.
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You might need to work a little on foreshortening and perspective, but the color is really good. the whole mood of the pic seems muted. Is that what you intended?
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I love her expression, and the way you colored this. Great work
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This is really really cool. It has a really medieval-esque feel to it. And the shading is perfect. I envy this picture, no joke
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Cool idea you had! I think the cello is well drawn :3
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like the way you didn't take the colour right to the edges
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my constructive comment is this: the cello is a bit fat on the bottom.
Her ankles are thin... extremely!
on the bright side, I like the color, and the background! :3
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i dont think you messed up at all my friend it looks great
keep it up
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I love the soft colouring and the composition
Background is also ver well worked and the main figure stands out beautifully.
The only thing I would change would be the size of the cello, which looks a bit fatty maybe, but the rest is really good!
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I'm not sure if anyone has said this yet, but it looks like the elbows are a little too sharp, and the ankles are a little too thin... At least ,that's what I've noticed...
Other than that, really good work :3
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you have a signature style my friend!!!!the faded edges added to the beauty of the piece!!!!!
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Nice work on the pose and the coloring. I'd have to say this is a good piece, with nice blending of colors and an interesting subject.
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I really love the airy and expressive feel of all you work, but this especially is quite beautiful. Wonderful job.
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I enjoy the lovely coloration on this one! I really dig how you didn't draw the whole scene, that way it kind of looks like a memory or an imagination.
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Great job on the detail and perspecitve~! I love the story book quality the illustration has :3
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This drawing definately has a unique style, mainly becouse the girl is made of sharp straight lines so it indicates, that you know what you're doing
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The girl looks great, indeed. Especially her face. Very expressive.
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Holy Carpa! That's soo good! I absolutely adore the coloring and the whole idea of it! It's brilliant! I love ittt!
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