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Description Ok... so this is a thing I've been wanting to do for a loooong time. Potentially I might insult some people, annoy some copyright holders and other things but I wanted to at least give it a shot.

For those who don't know, there's a Ratchet and Clank comic made up of 6 issues or 1 TPB depending on what you prefer published by DC comics around 2010. I bought it simply because I'm terminally obsessed with the franchise and expected it to be a simple fan-indulgence story. ...Instead I got a really... REALLY good, emotionally charged story.

It happens about 6 months after Crack in Time (and contains heavy spoilers for that game) and perfectly bridges the games CiT and All4One as far as character's emotional states, development and various plot and universe details (like how the hell Qwark became galactic President in A4O)

It's a great comic. However the art confuses me a little bit.

The person who was commissioned to do the art, although a VERY good artist, seemed to be some-one more comfortable at drawing human characters than a furry alien and a tiny robot. This results in ALL characters looking pretty darn good.. ..except for Ratchet and Clank themselves as well as Talwyn and Sasha in certain places.

Now, I am by no means a better artist, at all. But I felt I wanted to at least TRY and draw the characters as I've grown to know them after 11 years and in certain places, change body language and where characters stand in physical relationship with each other as well as certain expressions I felt did not ring true to a character's personality.

So... I thought I'd try and redraw the thing and try to teach myself something about paneling (which I SUCK at) and getting a better grip on the whole process of comic making.

LEGALITIES:

I do not claim any ownership over the dialogue, characters, panel planning, script or anything in the writing, editing or planning department. All official persons to do with the original comic will be credited fully and I claim no artistic input from my side.

This is a fan project and no profit will be made from this in any form. It is merely for fun and educational purposes. No copyright infringement is intended. I merely wish to learn from this and give a new spin on the art associated with this story.

If you feel I am overstepping my bounds please let me know and educate me on this matter further. I do not want to cause trouble in anyway.

SO! With all that out of the way, here is a comparative page showing my art on the left, and the original page on the right.
All art was redrawn from scratch (no tracing was involved).

And finally, with all that out of the way, below I will put a link to the page itself once I upload that as well. Future pages will not be comparative pages like this. This is just my explanation page as such.


All fonts are free for personal use.


Original artists credits:
Written by: T.J. Fixmnan
Editor: Ben Abernathy
Assistant Editor: Kristy Quinn
Original art (and paneling?) by *a-archer
(original cover art by the awesome and powerful *CreatureBox )

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This took a long time to do so don't expect frequent pages or anything, especially since I have a lot of other projects I'm working on as well as a full time job etc. but I hope you enjoy this little exercise of mine.

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Comments: 23

iron-dude [2023-11-19 04:18:25 +0000 UTC]

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TotallyDeviantLisa [2016-05-28 09:10:28 +0000 UTC]

Cool remake! :3

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airbax [2016-01-14 11:47:06 +0000 UTC]

This is cool!

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Mewkuro12 [2013-11-19 21:02:28 +0000 UTC]

Like your ratchebetter cuz of his nose xD

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WildSpirit-Forever [2013-10-01 19:38:58 +0000 UTC]

I actually like your style more than the orginal.Β Β I think the orginal makes Ratchet look more like a child more than I like and yours, I don't really know, it's just have this charater that you just fall in love withΒ  Β 

So you're work is truly amazing and I hope you keep up the good work. You have some real talant there, it's time the rest of the world get to know that as wellΒ 


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C-Puff In reply to WildSpirit-Forever [2013-10-01 19:41:42 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so very much for all the kind words
I really want to start working on redoing the comic again but for a long while now I haven't had time. But a lot of people seem to enjoy my take so maybe it would be worth making time for it again
Thank you once again for your lovely comment

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WildSpirit-Forever In reply to C-Puff [2013-10-01 19:54:02 +0000 UTC]

I was only speaking the truth, but I am glad that my words have this affect one you.Β  Β 

I do believe you should have been told this much sooner, but I feel honored I got the chance to do soΒ 

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I would love to see more of your work and I know I not the only one feeling this way. But remember to take your time, greatness is not meant to be stressed, after allΒ 

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ShineBrightMaddie [2013-09-18 02:11:30 +0000 UTC]

I think I like your style better.Β Β 

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C-Puff In reply to ShineBrightMaddie [2013-09-20 12:48:12 +0000 UTC]

8'D thank you so much!

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VampireCount [2013-05-18 07:12:22 +0000 UTC]

It's weird because i like their clank better but i like your Ratchet more. If you'd put them together then i think that could be perfect.

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Ricku [2013-04-16 19:27:19 +0000 UTC]

This is very lovely! I find it quite nice that people do their own versions of the comic! I love the comic and the style in it is really interesting, but some pictures seemed a little... Strange. Especially the first picture with the two heroes, Clank's face is just...What on earth is he daydreaming about?

Still, just because the artist is really good at what he does, he can't be perfect and he will make mistakes every now and then. All respect to the artist and all respect to you for drawing your own version of this! I do like your style and if you ever were to do your own comic, I would certainly be there to fangirl over it! Keep up the good work! I only wish to be as good as you! :'3

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bagasuit091 [2013-04-16 15:05:01 +0000 UTC]

Oo, this is really cool! It was a good comic, but I agree that some panels Ratchet looked a little off.

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C-Puff In reply to bagasuit091 [2013-04-21 16:53:48 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much I agree with you, so maybe I can make myself feel better by doing this little thing.

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anime1999 [2013-04-14 20:12:55 +0000 UTC]

nice

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ArtisticAnri [2013-04-14 19:58:13 +0000 UTC]

Yeah better at drawing human characters But I still thought this page looked really nice[link]

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C-Puff In reply to ArtisticAnri [2013-04-21 17:25:37 +0000 UTC]

A lot of his pages are GREAT! but he's just... better at humans XD;; He's a great artist though. I wish I knew how he did his colouring style.

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Wolfzen [2013-04-14 06:41:24 +0000 UTC]

I really like this idea! There's nothing wrong with drawing something else in your own style, certainly, and I love your work enough already so I would only suggest that you continue this concept. I personally found the style to be charming in its own memorable way, but I can understand that it did seem a little different than what we were all used to. After all, this was the first drawn series that actually had a story, not just concept art!

I'll certainly be waiting for further panels of this! vB

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C-Puff In reply to Wolfzen [2013-04-14 16:44:16 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so very much! X3 I'm so happy you think this idea is something worth doing. I have a lot of other things I'm doing so it'll update slow, but hopefully it'll be fun and I can learn a lot

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Gashu-Monsata [2013-04-13 18:02:19 +0000 UTC]

Did you know that *a-archer did the art for the comics?

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C-Puff In reply to Gashu-Monsata [2013-04-13 18:15:35 +0000 UTC]

I did not no. Do you think he'll be mad? He's a good artist, I just wasn't too keen on his art of the two main characters ;___; *doesn't want to cause trouble*

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Gashu-Monsata In reply to C-Puff [2013-04-13 20:45:16 +0000 UTC]

Eh I dunno haha, I don't think so You can't appeal to everyone! I like the idea

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C-Puff In reply to Gashu-Monsata [2013-04-13 21:16:34 +0000 UTC]

I contacted him and asked and he says he really doesn't mind as long as I credit. Thanks for linking me to him!

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enterdragongalaxy [2013-04-13 17:53:20 +0000 UTC]

lolz you drawt it in your stile

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