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*sighs* I'm not fond of the colours in this one. they're ok but... not what I wanted

was saying we needed more light-hearted pictures and I agreed XD but somehow "Light-hearted" turned itself into "mush". I had a hard time trying to get the poses close but still platonic. Perhaps I could've pushed it more but I was worried people'd get the wrong idea I went a little overboard with the shading as well ;___; it's too shiny, I wanted it more muted than this. *siiiiighs* I seem to be having a lot of problems with my art lately.

Late-night movie-thons are not always a good idea XDD I give Don another 2 minutes before he rolls over ontop of Raph... and you know Mikey's hiding behind the couch with camera at the ready for just that moment >3

the next picture I draw will be better I promise ;___; I hope you guys like it anyway. I like the compression on Don's cheek against Raph's shoulder, I need to learn to put flesh-compression in my pictures more.

Pls don't steal
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DonniesRealGirl [2013-02-24 20:39:58 +0000 UTC]

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I love it! This is so rare to see and just TOO CUTE! Don't misjudge yourself either! You did ABSOLUTELY AMAZING! Everyone I show this to is all like "Aww... They're so cute!" Or "This is AMAZINGLY CUTE!" And I am BOTH! I LOVE IT WAY TOO MUCH! I am almost speechless! I'm surprised I'm doing this too... Every little bit is just amazing! The shine, the pose\way it's presented, EVERYTHING!!!!!!!! e.deviantart.net/emoticons/h/h… " width="15" height="13" alt="" title="Heart"/> it! a.deviantart.net/avatars/b/i/b… " alt=" " title="bigheartplz" /> Need more love!!!!! e.deviantart.net/emoticons/l/l… " width="43" height="97" alt="" title="Llama...an important part of life"/> You deserve it! e.deviantart.net/emoticons/l/l… " width="19" height="19" alt="" title="La la la la"/>e.deviantart.net/emoticons/l/l… " width="19" height="19" alt="" title="La la la la"/>e.deviantart.net/emoticons/l/l… " width="19" height="19" alt="" title="La la la la"/> - We sing, we sing, your art IS AWESOME!!!!!
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~DonniesRealGirl

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KnightGainax [2009-08-30 15:34:04 +0000 UTC]

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You asked for it, so here it is.

The colours are nice and sleepy, so it suits the subject matter quite nicely. The poses are clear and it's pretty obvious what's going on.

The only thing I can suggest, according to your description of the piece, is perhaps a bit more of a harsh TV glow, since you said that they did pass out in front of the TV. Maybe some sharper shadows where applicable - from the TV glow. Anyway, that's the only suggestion I have.

When I look at this, I keep expecting Raph to wake up and push Donny away with an expression of mildly digusted annoyance.

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C-Puff In reply to KnightGainax [2009-08-30 19:50:51 +0000 UTC]

Ok I accidentally deleted the comment on this to mark it fair so it's not gonna show up on the picture sorry about that.

I'm glad the colours work because as I said I'm not very fond of them (That's what you get for starting a picture without a colour scheme in mind) I agree with you on the TV thing, I was going more for mood than reality but I do agree.

XD as for Raph, he probably would but since it's Donny I'm not too sure. Raph isn't as rough with Don as he is with the others for some reason.

8D; I was actually hoping this one'd slip by you cause I thought it'd be too sugary for you XD

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KnightGainax In reply to C-Puff [2009-08-30 20:06:02 +0000 UTC]

Normally I might have let it slip by, by the critique request pulled me in - and there was enough technique in there for me to comment on - and I had one suggestion too.

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C-Puff In reply to KnightGainax [2009-08-30 21:17:53 +0000 UTC]

XD I don't mind the critique, I just know you're not really one for mush.

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KnightGainax In reply to C-Puff [2009-08-30 21:43:45 +0000 UTC]

Not constantly, no.

But it has it's place. Even in stuff that I work on.

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rosewitchcat [2018-08-05 22:31:02 +0000 UTC]

 

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RoseDuelistBBSHM [2013-02-23 20:10:52 +0000 UTC]

Yay, platonic love!!
Great work!

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awesomestarz In reply to RoseDuelistBBSHM [2013-08-25 02:28:47 +0000 UTC]

What does platonic mean?

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RoseDuelistBBSHM In reply to awesomestarz [2013-08-26 05:31:27 +0000 UTC]

Basically: an intimate companionship or relationship that is characterized by the absence of sexual involvement; a spiritual affection. <-- dictionary entry

Hope that helps!

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awesomestarz In reply to RoseDuelistBBSHM [2013-08-29 01:55:07 +0000 UTC]

It does! Thanx!

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C-Puff In reply to RoseDuelistBBSHM [2013-02-24 10:19:46 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much

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skylandercynderspyro [2013-02-09 01:45:55 +0000 UTC]

Can I plz use as my webcam?

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TakeNoShit [2011-08-17 14:31:11 +0000 UTC]

Wow, awesome! And cute Is it alright if I use this pic in an RaphxDon AMV I'm making? Of course I'll give you credit for the picture, and if you want I can send you the link to the video once it's uploaded so you can see that I did credit you ^__^

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C-Puff In reply to TakeNoShit [2011-08-17 19:21:55 +0000 UTC]

It's not really suppose to be a slash picture but ok just credit me please.

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Whitestormfox [2011-02-02 20:59:22 +0000 UTC]

thats awesome! i want this picture now!

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keyboardfreak [2010-09-13 01:11:41 +0000 UTC]

Honestly, I don't see anything wrong with it. It's still light-hearted and it's not badly shaded. I think it looks like the TV is still on and is making them look shiny.

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Shell-Mel [2009-09-22 04:35:57 +0000 UTC]

Awww... they look so cute... and sleepy. *Carefully places a blanket over them before leaving them in peace.*

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C-Puff In reply to Shell-Mel [2009-09-24 03:08:33 +0000 UTC]

X33 thank you~

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marylune [2009-09-08 18:45:34 +0000 UTC]

aww..mignon^^ raph looks comfortable
that make me want to sleep x)

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C-Puff In reply to marylune [2009-09-08 19:42:13 +0000 UTC]

XDD *nodnod* me too~

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artisticrainey [2009-09-03 15:29:03 +0000 UTC]

Absolutley lovely! I think the colouring and shading works well as is seems to reflect the idea of them watching TV. Even before I read your artist's comments I had guessed that was what they had been doing. This is really sweet and not really mushy. Just calm and nice. Great!

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C-Puff In reply to artisticrainey [2009-09-03 18:33:49 +0000 UTC]

thank you very much X3 and that makes me very happy to hear 8'D It's always important to me that my ideas read clearly. and I'm glad it's not overly mushy XD I have my limits when it comes to mush.

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IsisConstantine [2009-09-02 02:44:51 +0000 UTC]

lovely job!

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C-Puff In reply to IsisConstantine [2009-09-02 02:51:54 +0000 UTC]

thanks!

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IsisConstantine In reply to C-Puff [2009-09-02 03:47:22 +0000 UTC]

welcomes

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RaaSet [2009-09-01 20:45:28 +0000 UTC]

Hahaha X3
Yeah I see Mike's doing that
>3
Hah I said that - and I'm working on some not so light story again. ^^'
I need to catch up with you on that! XD;;;;
Nice pict - I really like the warm feel

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C-Puff In reply to RaaSet [2009-09-01 21:20:13 +0000 UTC]

XDD you don't have to. I just wanted to draw this after I spoke to you
and thank you~!

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RaaSet In reply to C-Puff [2009-09-04 15:20:19 +0000 UTC]

I DO have to! D=
People need more comforting light pictures - and it's OUR duty to make for them! D=

Very welcome. ^_^

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Pimpypants [2009-08-31 14:35:16 +0000 UTC]

You know Don's totally drooling on him XD

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C-Puff In reply to Pimpypants [2009-09-01 00:35:39 +0000 UTC]

XDD but it's love-drool~!

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Pimpypants In reply to C-Puff [2009-09-01 01:15:03 +0000 UTC]

hahaha XD THE DROOL OF LUUURVE

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C-Puff In reply to Pimpypants [2009-09-01 01:21:19 +0000 UTC]

XDD SHAZAM!

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Pimpypants In reply to C-Puff [2009-09-01 05:32:00 +0000 UTC]

BWHAHAH! XD

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GemiDonnie [2009-08-31 05:20:23 +0000 UTC]

*melts into a puddle of goo*

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*re-forms again*

Um.
You know that I am a turtlecest fan, and I prefer RaphDon. But even to me, this is a brotherly moment! Also, love EVERYTHING about this picture.
How Raph's build is more 'muscle teen', and Donnie's is more 'awkward teen'. How Donnie's cheek is against Raph's shoulder, how Raph's head is resting on Donnie's head...
And Raph seems to have more scars than Donnie :3

I bet that if he woke up, and it was Mikey or Leo, he would throw a fit or something. But we all know, even those not into turtlecest, that he has a soft spot for Donnie! I mean, the geek DID build him that motorcycle. He is doomed to have one.
Also, I would pay Mikey for a picture of this moment.
... And why do I sense that even Splinter would take a picture of this? XD

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C-Puff In reply to GemiDonnie [2009-08-31 07:27:00 +0000 UTC]

XDD Hurray! I have nothing against Tcest personally (I mean I don't like it for me but I see no point in spoiling other people's fun besides, I've faved a few Tcest pictures~) But I am happy this reads as pure platonic if only because that's how I wanted it to come across 8'D
Raph having more scuff-marks than Don wasn't on purpose, but I agree it's nice! I didn't even think of that XD must've been subconscious.

XDDD if it was Mikey he'd shove him off, if it was Leo he'd probably shrug him off less harshly, but seeing as it's Donny, I don't think he'd move him, or if he did he'd do it carefully because you're right. it doesn't take a genius to see Raph has a soft spot for Don.

As for Splinter I don't think he'd snap a picture XD but he's log the mental image away that's for sure. And if Mikey did take a photo Splinter wouldn't need to >3 silly Splinter. You're so wily!

Anyway I'm really glad you like XDD I know there are a lot of people who FEED off Raph/Don moments and this one's for youuuuu~!

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GemiDonnie In reply to C-Puff [2009-08-31 07:32:59 +0000 UTC]

Well, Raph IS the one that always jump in and save Donnie's shell... XD
A very good subconscious decision

I think he would only move Donnie if he saw the others in the room... and even then, he would do it slooooowly, so he wouldn't wake Donnie up ^^
Yup. He got the biggest soft spot in the whole wide world! And it is all dedicated to Donnie-boy~!
*slipping into fan-girl mode*

True. But if Mikey did take a picture, Splinter would be forced to save it before... you know... Raph rips it to pieces ^^'

All too true! I would starve without RaphDon moments... there is something special with the two tiger cubs X3
And yes, that is how I see them in my mind.

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C-Puff In reply to GemiDonnie [2009-09-01 01:02:22 +0000 UTC]

XDD I agree. Raph would move Don, but carefully. Don hardly sleeps as it is D<

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GemiDonnie In reply to C-Puff [2009-09-01 05:23:59 +0000 UTC]

Yeah! Didn't he stay up three nights straight once? O__o
A ninja lacking sleep... not a good thing. <__<;

... But Raph can brew him coffee! Because Leo has the inside joke that he can't handle anything mechanical or kitchenical (new word!) and Mikey would probably put a lot of sugar in it. ^^'

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C-Puff In reply to GemiDonnie [2009-09-01 17:53:00 +0000 UTC]

XDD yeah he did! Silly Donny. that's when he became super aggro for a while .___. before eventually crashing XD

XDDD where did this come from that Leo spells death to technology? I've seen more than one person refer to this. is it Fanon or is it actually something that shows up in the canon in the oldtoon or comics or something that I'm not aware of?

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GemiDonnie In reply to C-Puff [2009-09-01 18:08:09 +0000 UTC]

Yeah! They... they played too loud or something, and he snapped. I find angry Donnie very amusing XD

I have no idea. XD
I guess that since he seems pretty perfect in every thing else, maybe the fans wanted to give him one, big, giant flaaw that we could laugh at? Like Donnie's coffee addiction... though if I remember correctly, Leo is the one who always ask the most questions. ^^'

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C-Puff In reply to GemiDonnie [2009-09-01 18:16:49 +0000 UTC]

XDD the coffee addiction thing is hilarious, but I only incorporate fanon in my own stuff if there's a good reason for it. (Like Mikey being the youngest which is has never technically been stated ANYWHERE in canon. It's just something the fans have created and which makes so much sense if you change that fans will tell you you're wrong XDDD)

Angry Donny IS very amusing XDD although he makes me want to hug him when he's mad... which I don't think is his intention.

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GemiDonnie In reply to C-Puff [2009-09-01 18:22:50 +0000 UTC]

Ah, true! Though I never write which one is the oldest or youngest; though in my mind, I think it is Don, Raph, Mikey and Leo. I don't know why, though. I just do. XD
Granted, I think it is at most 1-2 weeks apart between them... X3

No. I want to hug him too then, but I would take my chances with Raph instead ^^'

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C-Puff In reply to GemiDonnie [2009-09-01 18:26:36 +0000 UTC]

XDD I'm pretty uncreative with age. From < Mikey, Don, Raph, Leo. (Only Leo being oldest is canon, every-one else is left up to the fans) I agree with you though XDDD at most their a few weeks apart.

Donny can be scary I agree D8

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GemiDonnie In reply to C-Puff [2009-09-01 18:29:21 +0000 UTC]

Well, if they are only weeks... how important can it be? XD

Oh, yes. Very scary! I bet that if he was forced to go without coffee for a week, he would go mad scientist on the world O__o

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C-Puff In reply to GemiDonnie [2009-09-01 18:36:04 +0000 UTC]

XDDD or he'd go all axe murderer on his family.

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GemiDonnie In reply to C-Puff [2009-09-01 18:40:38 +0000 UTC]

*seriously thinking about it*

... Nah, I rather have the mad scientist than the family murderer XD

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C-Puff In reply to GemiDonnie [2009-09-01 18:44:03 +0000 UTC]

XDD the only thing is mad scientist requires thinking, and if he's sleep depraved for long enough he'd just go ape-shit!

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GemiDonnie In reply to C-Puff [2009-09-01 18:48:49 +0000 UTC]

Oh, yeah. XD
Then I vote for dropping him off at Shredder's place!

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Arwing [2009-08-31 00:57:07 +0000 UTC]

Awww thats so sweet. I guess Donnie is the only one he would allow to do that. Leo wouldn't as he would see it as intrusive and Mikey would just drool everywhere. Still this is a side to raph thats rarely shown anyways, onto the pic.

Lighthearted doesn't necessarily mean mush. This is a bit of brotherly love. You can really see how musculey Raph is compared to Donnie. The colours are nice and warm as befits the pic. It makes me feel all warm and fuzzy myself. When i first saw it, I thought that Raph was Mikey. Looks like the scanner ate the red and made it look orange. Casting it in the light that it is in makes it look very calm and relaxed. And just them being brothers and not ninjas. Also it's rather nice to see Raph look so calm. A nice change and something that is rare for him. He's letting some of his emotions out. Donnies cheek compressed on Raphs shoulder is a nice little addtion. I wonder if the next pic is going to be light-hearted or are qwe back to the hard nosed grit. Also I think I might use this in the fic. Would be a crime not to.

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