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The Fab Four No. 11 – Enter The Ultra Sonic The winter in
Belgium was hard. Extra cold temperatures kept most kids
indoors, most of the time. That wasn't the case for teen ace,
Tecnicus. Between his daily life, school, work at an animal
shelter and his secret life as a globe hopping super heroes,
the young power house has spent nearly all of his time in
the harsh cold. So when he got the opportunity to spend
time with his new friend, and fellow super powered teen
Minick, called Nick by his friends, in the Philippines, he
didn't hesitate. The two had communicated via the internet
for months, but never met face-to-face. Both also followed
the others superhero careers, and had looked forward to
compare notes, but the call of the beach and youthful fun
got in the way. The two teens attended a beach party, and
concert, for it was one year ago on the same beach and
event that Nick's mutant powers manifested themselves.
That night, after the last of the party goers had left for home,
tiny crab-like creatures ventured out of the surf. Each
incredibly fast and stealthy. The crabs were non-living man
made devises. The last one out of the water revealed its
function, as an armored weaponized commando is trans-
ported to the devise's location. All over the island nation
the 'tele-crabs' gave access to key strategic locations all
over the Philippines: Military installations, the air port,
police stations, government buildings and even hospitals. At
sun rise the military take over of the Philippines begun. The
town where Nick lives is isolated and the invasion of the
island isn't apparent, until Nick's brother wakes both youths
with the news that no one in town has television, radio or
internet. Tecnicus notice fires in the distance, and uses his
powers to create a working satellite receiver unit. He picks
up the only local communications, from the military invaders.
Just then, a grenade is tossed next to Tecnicus' construct, and
explodes. Instinctively, the teen marvel protects himself with a
bubble shield. In a flash he emerges from the shield in uniform.
Standing at the head of the street, are a dozen armed assault
troops, with weapons drawn. Tecnicus doesn't wait to be fired
upon, instead creating a battering ram to disperse the group.
Their weapon are advanced, new wave particle pulse rifles.
Powerful enough to shatter and construct Tecnicus imagines
in time. He decides to attack using a full frontal tactic to
catch the soldiers off guard. Protecting himself with an
armored suit of his own, he tears into the invaders, being
careful not to damage the innocent towns people hiding in
their homes. The fight is mostly one sided in favor of the
young hero, until three troopers enters Nick's home. Before
Tecnicus can act, he is overcome by a piercing sound rolling
around in his head. As the sound brings the young hero to
his knees, he sees the auditory assault also affects the soldiers,
who exits Nick's home. As they hit the street, Tecnicus fires
his light beam to take them out one at a time, but the sonic
wave continues until Nick, in his guise as Ultra Sonic exits and
sees his heroic buddy on the ground. Apologizing, Ultra Sonic
explains his wave was intended to reverberate inside the troop's
armor, and not affect anyone else. He was unaware Tecnicus
had his own armor. After clearing his head, Tecnicus learned that
the troops arrived by submarine, but not how they were able to
advance onto the country was quickly and wide spread. Ultra
Sonic uses his powers to place the captured troopers in a trance
like sleep. They revealed the 'tele-crabs' gave the invaders the
means to transport anywhere in the Philippines they were programmed
to go. Ultra Sonic and Tecnicus set out to find one of these devises.
A task which was not difficult, since they littered the whole country.
Tecnicus studied the inner working, but could figure how it operated.
He did know the tele-crabs was like a receiver, with GPS. He may
be able to reverse the signal and send them back, but he would be
able to move the tele-crabs to a target. The invaders would have to
go to them. Tecnicus used his powers to create another tele-crab
based on his understanding of the one they found, Ultra Sonic monitored
the sounds throughout the island nation to located the hundreds of
soldiers. The two teen marvels set out to repel the commandos, using
their own devises. As they attacked, they freed captured police and
military personnel, telling them of the plan. Get the invaders within two
feet of the tele-crabs, which were reset to return the commandos back
to their submarine. Ultra Sonic made it possible for local communications
were restored, using captured radios of the invaders. All over the country
the invading troops are sent back to the sub, other are captured by
officials. In less than a day, the invasion is repelled. As the last of the
troops are forced back, a huge ocean explosion rocks the Philippines. It
was the enemy submarine. Military authorities report dozens of unarmed
subs surrounding the nation, but Tecnicus and Ultra Sonic's plan sent the
troopers to the same location...the one submarine. The islands were safe
for now, but the captured commandos never revealed who they worked for.
Ultra Sonic invited the Fab Four to a celebration. Tecnicus contacts the
other Fab members by phone. What treats await the team in the future?
Time will tell...in future issues of the Fab Four!
This issue is dedicated to Minick, on his Birthday! Happy Birthday Nick!
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Comments: 12
minickart [2014-04-20 05:15:30 +0000 UTC]
hehe this is totally amazing! and outstanding. haha Fab 4
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BlaineDaymon [2014-04-20 03:48:53 +0000 UTC]
ok I know this is for a special occasion and everything but i will do my usual critiquing
First man sized crabs? seems a little in excess. Next are these commandos actual men in armored suits or are they just super advanced combat drones/mechs/androids.
If the former way would they have to return to the transports once the crabs were reprogrammed. if the latter why would they be effected by the sonic screech along with Tecnicus as the frequencies would be different. also they would not likely bounce around inside a suit unless they had concussion waves with them and if that is so a lot of other stuff would be destroyed along with it.
also with would have been a great hero discovery episode like best friend finding out they are both heroes and what not.
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Captain86 In reply to BlaineDaymon [2014-04-20 10:38:43 +0000 UTC]
Okay, writer, let me break this down again...these are quick stories that I can squeeze into a tiny space, so the kids involved can have a laugh and feel special. Now the story...
The "tele-crabs" were crab size. The commandos were regular soldiers of unknown origins. The invaders used the crab things to home in on once they got to what ever destination they were programmed for. Granted this part is not clear, but the heroes uses the settings from their own crab, which was based on the one they found. They couldn't get the things to walk like before, so they moved the soldiers on to them, to make the transport. Unfortunately, Tecnicus didn't take into account that the invaders came from different locations. Based on the coordinates of the one they had, all the soldiers were sent to the same tiny sub.
I'm writing and drawing a Pyj World graphic novel. I would be more than happy if you read one of my full length tales. The ones I squeeze in for the people in the stories are merely for their entertainment.
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BlaineDaymon In reply to Captain86 [2014-04-20 16:59:06 +0000 UTC]
Hay, man lets just chill here for a second. I know your writing style is different than mine, and i am just trying to help. even if something written for the younger people, older people like you and me are going to read it. I enjoy these shorts you post with the covers, they are very creative, imaginative, enjoyable, even if they are thrown together as you say. I am only trying to offer a different perspective, and a serious one at that.
Even in shorts a writer must take it as seriously as possible every detail, facet, and corner has to be finely cut like a diamonds edge. Would you ever post one of your pictures that was blurry, pixelated, or uncolored. no you would not. your writing has to be given the same detail as your pictures are so even your next one will be taken seriously. minor improvements sure but jumping up to a higher level suddenly will leave people wondering if you really did it.
Every time I am writing one of my scripts, the singular scene I am on plays through my head over 100 times: have i explained enough here... is more detail needed there...will some understand this...or will they question the vitality of that. Every scene, even every sentence, every line a character is to say is scrupulously examained over and over again to make sure i cover everything.
I know i am bad at giving advice, I get told this a lot because my mind does not allow me to communicate empathetically very well, i am not reading it just to look for errors, but i am trying to help you become a better writer. everything i write is for entertainment but i still give the same effort, the same attention to detail as i do in everything else, even my drawings which are limited by my artistic talents in that area.
the better a person's writing on even short pieces like these the more it translates over to the longer ones because you are training your mind to look for things, analyze things and clarify things to the detail that is necessary, so that it becomes second nature almost subconscious. People say you write what you read, well in my experience you also write how you write. and if you give more effort on small pieces, the larger ones will be just that much better.
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58bluemarbles [2014-04-19 20:02:52 +0000 UTC]
Outstanding....I'm sure Nick will feel honored with such a thoughtful surprise for his Birthday...
As always a masterpiece..Bro'
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Captain86 In reply to 58bluemarbles [2014-04-20 03:01:36 +0000 UTC]
Thanks Brother Jean, I hope he likes it.
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58bluemarbles In reply to Captain86 [2014-04-20 06:54:04 +0000 UTC]
I'm sure Nick will love it... Bro'....
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Irtimidd [2014-04-19 19:49:16 +0000 UTC]
This four fabulous.....the story as the cover are.....both astonishing...outstanding....Love it
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Captain86 In reply to Irtimidd [2014-04-19 22:07:03 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so very much for your kind, comment. You always know exactly what to say, to make me smile.
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Irtimidd In reply to Captain86 [2014-04-19 22:57:36 +0000 UTC]
You always make me smile too
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Captain86 In reply to Irtimidd [2014-04-19 23:16:47 +0000 UTC]
I have to, Son. I love you, and its in the Daddy Hand Book,
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Irtimidd In reply to Captain86 [2014-04-19 23:26:40 +0000 UTC]
Hahaha....I really appreciate this Daddy...I love you too.....
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