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This is for OC-TrainingI added "smug" to the emotions because it really fits his character.
Adjectives: Curious, Paranoid, Egotistical
Name: Hopkins
Species: Teillarkian Goblin
Sex: None
Gender: Male
Age: ~50 years
Height: ~3 ft (currently, still growing)
Weight: Psh I dunno about 25-30 lbs? I'm not good with weight. About a small-medium sized dog. (currently, still growing)
Weakness: Pride. Also salty things, but he really really likes Potato Chips. He also can't swim, I guess you could say he sinks... like a stone.
He can walk around on his hind legs, but not for very long. His "arms"/hands and head are too large, he has a hard time keeping his balance while at his full height.
Teillarkian Goblins are a "modern" type of Goblin that originate from the world of Teillar. Up until fairly recently in history, Teillarkian Goblins had no access to our world, and humans most interacted with Alcorian Goblins (or "traditional" goblins- like what we would see in "Lord of The Rings"). Teillarkian Goblin sightings are now considered Urban Myths, like Hopkinsville Goblins (which were mistaken for aliens), Dover Demons, and that sort of thing. Now the world of Alcor is cut off to us, so we no longer see "traditional looking" goblins.
Teillarkian Goblins live in underground caves and tunnels, and don't reproduce. Every goblin just sort of comes into existence, being formed from rocks. Not to be confused with Gremlins, who come from dirt clods.
Goblins don't have their own language, they communicate ideas to each other. For us, humans, we have ideas we must convey and then translate that into words- so other humans can understand. Goblins don't need the extra step, and can simply lock eyes with another goblin and convey their message. This way, goblins have no use for names.
In other words, if you were to directly translate Goblin Speak, it would be a little like speaking in Emoji.
- I am very excited and happy
- I love that idea!
- Sonic can't swim.
(see? I didn't need to use a name, you probably just knew is was Sonic)
(I conveyed the idea of Sonic)
However, goblins learn languages very quickly. This is because they detect the ideas people are trying to convey- and associate the words used to the ideas. They can do the same for cats and dogs and other animals, but human speak is more difficult because of all that nasty grammar.
Goblins can also see some colors humans cannot, like Beter. Beter is is very prominent color in Gremlins' fur, however to us they just look tannish-brown and aren't very visible in that sort of environment. So trying to hide a gremlin from a human would be pretty easy, like a mouse or a rat. To a goblin it would be more like trying to hide a Muppet. Beter is a very vibrant color, and gremlins stick out like a sore thumb to any creature who can see it.
Finally goblins live for much longer than humans- and never stop growing. You can tell how old a goblin is by their size, although they often only live about 250 years (which is about the size of a horse, sometimes bigger or smaller depending on the goblin). Hopkins is about 50 years old.
Now onto Hopkins!
Hopkins was found injured one day by Anna and Charlie. They took him in, nursed him back to health, and hid him from their parents. Gradually he picked up English and could speak to them, delighting Anna and surprising the heck out of Charlie. Charlie is fascinated by urban myths, but never really believed them. The creature tells them it does not have a name, and it reminds Charlie of a Hopkinsville Goblin. Thus, the creature is named Hopkins.
Hopkins claims he doesn't remember how he got injured, telling the two he was "wandering around in the caves, and the next thing he knew he was injured in a bush". Charlie has offered to try and get him back home, but Hopkins says he "doesn't remember where it is".
This of course, is bull****. But Charlie doesn't know that, and Anna is happy to have made a new friend.
Hopkins spends his time tolerating Charlie's intensive questioning about goblins, and Anna's hugging and tea parties. But when they're not around, he searches frantically for something, Charlie has caught him a few times- but Hopkins dismisses it as nothing.
It also turns out Charlie and Anna have a Gremlin Nest under their house- which after much argumentation, Hopkins finally convinces Charlie that one: there are gremlins living in the house and two: no, I am not stealing your socks- gremlins like using soft things for their nests why do you leave them on the floor that is a stupid idea.
Buuut I don't want to reveal more about the character and the story just yet. I want to leave some surprises for when I finally write the darned thing. Hopefully this was interesting/informative!
That is all!
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Comments: 48
Raqonteur [2017-07-19 13:42:44 +0000 UTC]
He's quite cute in an ugly way, isn't he. Nice job on that.
Visually, I'm reminded of Toothless from 'How To Train Your Dragon' but that's not necessarily a bad thing.
The expressions you've included here are brilliant. Very... well, expressive, I guess. There isn't really another word for them. But each is very successful in conveying their intent at just a glance, which is a great achievement in itself.
I love the amount of world-building you've obviously put into your Goblins. 'Dover-Demons' in particular makes me think of a British setting, as does the name Charlie, which is rather English sounding The idea of racial bias between the species makes them feel more real, and the creation myth just rounds the whole thing off wonderfully.
And you've obviously put as much work into the anatomy too. But there are a couple of minor points that don't quite add up...
If Goblins and Gremlins communicate solely by a kind of directed telepathy/telempathy then why develop vocal chords at all?
It also brings up a philosophical debate too. Can you have sentient thought without language? We express ourselves in words and thus, think in words too. And in turn, those words shape our thought processes. Without words or language to express or explain an idea how do you have original, creative thought?
And lastly, without names, do they have an individual sense of identity or are they like insects where each is only a part of the greater whole. Hopkins himself does seem to have an individual identity but is this natural or due to his interactions with Charlie and Anna?
I only mention these thoughts because of the sheer amount of development you've put into Hopkins and the Goblins/Gremlins.
I'm curious what age bracket this story is eventually aimed at. The style of graphic and the feel of the story makes me think it's a children's story perhaps aimed at a teen or younger market?
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Certain-Oddities In reply to Raqonteur [2017-07-19 20:08:29 +0000 UTC]
Don't ask me so many questions about my world unless you want a long, winded answer. I'm the kind of person who always feels they have to explain themself completely...
ha XD sorry for the long reply earlier?
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Certain-Oddities In reply to Raqonteur [2017-07-19 20:07:03 +0000 UTC]
Well I actually have comments on pretty much everything you've just said, because I do think about these things... and you point out things no one else has at this point
Let's start with dragons. Ah, funny you mention Toothless and dragons, there's actually a few reasons why.
1.) I love Lilo and Stitch, and I know that it has (somewhat subconsciously) been the inspiration for a lot of the story in this. (Which is called "The Goblin and The Girl"- just so you know haven't really gotten to mention that). And I believe a lot of Toothless was inspired by Stitch as well- so him and Hopkins have some common ground there.
2.) Now I'm going to get into my mythos a bit, so bear with me. Teillark was created (essentially) by two very magically powerful dragons. All of their creations were made in their own image in some way- especially the Teillarkian Goblins. The Goblins' sole existing purpose was to take (and guard) the Orb of Life (there are two others, Sky and Earth- given to Griffins and the Seipes respectively), and so the Dragons brought their rocks to life. Goblins never stop growing while their alive, and the longer they live the more and more they resemble dragons. It's just- the larger they are, the less likely they are to go to the surface. So we don't see the dragonlike ones anymore. So our view of what a Goblin looks like is skewed, no human ever sees one larger than Dover. (Unless you count Geode- but he's technically a Troll). But by the time Hopkins dies- he actually resembles something of a dinosaur.
(Side note: The Life Orb is what brings the Goblins to life- it keeps a ready supply to protect itself because they do die. But also brings to life other materials as well as "stones", creating things like Gremlins (dirt clods, clay) and Trolls (more precious minerals like gold, geodes etc)
Okay you mentioned a potential British setting, no they live in the US. HOWEVER- it is of note that Charlie and Anna's family (the Meadlows) did come from Europe, and their father Joseph briefly lived there with his father before moving back to the US. (And also names, Anna is named after her Grandmother Annie- and Charlie gets his middle name (Inedah) from a God- but that's a completely different story)
Aaand now languages. Back to the Dragons, the dragons spoke their own language- so of course they'd allow the Goblins to speak in order to communicate. But since they don't talk with the Dragons anymore, why keep the chords? It's actually a defense mechanism, among other things.
Another thing of note is that they don't exactly communicate telepathically. Not entirely anyway- they project ideas, yes but it does require a bit of eye contact/body language. Hence the necessity for having an extremely expressive face. And there is a range limit, they can't "idea project" if they're too far away- their brains can't "hear" each other after a certain distance. And if they can't catch each other's attention, they can't communicate (like with any communication). They require a vocal in the event they cannot catch another's attention or they are too far away.
Now back to it being a defense mechanism. In an alien environment it is best to be able to express yourself, and your thoughts. Goblins can feel thoughts, humans and other species cannot. If a Goblin is put into a situation- say- a ton of frightened humans surrounding it, panicking. Even if they are too shocked/scared for words a Goblin will most likely feel like it is being screamed at. But that's not really my point, my point being communication is essential especially in an alien environment. Goblins have retained their vocal ranges in the event they need to communicate with anything aside from another Goblin.
And identity, they don't need names because they convey the idea of an individual. So instead of saying: "Flatwood stole my socks" they would convey a picture of Flatwood, stealing their socks. They know who Flatwood is because they recognize them as that individual. Humans can talk about somebody they know, even if you don't know their name- we do it all the time.
So instead of referring to them as "Flatwood" they would know them as "The darkish brown Gremlin with the pale, knobbly hairless clawed long yellowish tan fingers/toes and hairless yellowish tan wobbly knees. You know, the one with the light round pinky eyes with thin black slits for pupils as well as upwards curved large pointy ears, no tail, and gray-brown manelike hair on it's back/shoulders".
We feel the need to name things for convenience and clarity, since Goblins can convey all that information with a picture (not necessarily describing them like I did) giving all that information without saying a word- without having to name them. Besides, then they won't run out of names. There will not be two Goblins named Kevin.
Finally, age bracket? I'll put it into the words of Alex Hirsch when asked who was he "making Gravity Falls for, because I'm convinced it's not for kids...": "I'm making this for me."
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RitellianCaptain [2017-07-16 00:46:15 +0000 UTC]
This is quite delightful!! I love how the goblins communicate with ideas! They really couldn't lie to each other that way! I love these goblin facts!
He is a very cute goblin!
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Certain-Oddities In reply to RitellianCaptain [2017-07-17 02:29:43 +0000 UTC]
He is isn't he? :3
Glad you like my goblin lore
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Birdhousebirdy [2017-07-11 04:33:11 +0000 UTC]
I really liked how you did multiple angles of him for the body task here! And his facial expressions are amazing.
Giving a small appreciation for using Sonic as an example!
The world around him is really fleshed out! I can tell you've been working with this story quite a bit.
So are Anna and Charlie the first ones to ever see a Teillarkian Goblin? I could imagine this may raise problems.
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Certain-Oddities In reply to Birdhousebirdy [2017-07-17 02:32:57 +0000 UTC]
They aren't the first ones, and not the first documented ones either.
Things like the Dover Demon, the Flatwoods Monster, The Mothman, and of course Hopkins' namesake- Hopkinsville Goblins were all sightings of goblins in my universe.
(In real life there were all drunk/crazy or frightened people mistaking birds for aliens- but what the hey.)
I have been working on this stuff for years now... I love worldbuilding
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Drayah [2017-07-10 18:58:24 +0000 UTC]
Hopkins is super adorable! You did a great job on this! I LOVE his design!! Those expressions are super amazing too! They really show a ton of emotion!
It seems like there is a lot that Hopkins isn't telling his friends, I wonder what it is he's looking for.... What kind of thing could he be caught up in?
Hmm.... I'm certainly interested in learning more!
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Certain-Oddities In reply to Drayah [2017-07-10 19:19:20 +0000 UTC]
Someday I'll finish writing the darned thing. Someday >.>
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Drayah In reply to Certain-Oddities [2017-07-10 20:46:11 +0000 UTC]
I totally know the feeling. I've been working on my story, the one Jastin is in for 6 years now makes me feel old, also I REALLY need to finish the dang thing.
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MegaMaeve [2017-07-08 11:25:14 +0000 UTC]
No matter what he says, Hopkins is adorable. I mean, surely he'll be terrifying when he's grown to his full size if he gets to reach 250 years, but at age 50, being rather tiny and huggable, he just looks cute. I mean, those large eyes, those small ears that express his emotional state, the cat-like mouth - he's like a crossbreed between a cat and a rock alien-like creature, which makes him strangely cute-looking.
I like how you set up his Profile drawing: the soft sketchiness and the crosshatching used for subtle shading/coloring, and the thicker line-art make for a fun, playful (and even somewhat professionally designed!) drawing to look at ^^ Hopkins has an expressive face, which is fun to look at, and you drew his animal-like anatomy well.
The amount of background information on goblins is really interesting, and I like how they are so very non-human: they see different colors from us(!!!!!!) and they communicate via thoughts! How interesting! I'm a student of linguistics, and the ongoing, massive discussion about the influence of cognition on language, or the influence of language on cognition, is a really interesting one! I think it's pretty cool you're toying with the concept of language and thought! I smiled in joy when I first read your description, and I still think it's so cool!
Hopkins seems like a fun character - with a lot of secrets, and a lot of issues He isn't the most friendly creature per se, but surely he does have a heart of gold? (Or at least, I hope that he comes to care for his human "friends" at some point, for their safety, and his own
) That being said, his human 'owners' sound like great people, and I especially like Charlie's inquisitiveness! I bet it causes Hopkins quite a bit of trouble sometimes
Wonderful work, can't wait to learn more about him! ^^
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Certain-Oddities In reply to MegaMaeve [2017-07-08 18:40:48 +0000 UTC]
He is kind of selfish at first, that's part of what got him injured in a bush in the first place. Now he has to fix his mistake, and he finally realizes the repercussions of what he did... and begins to care.
His heart is deep in there somewhere, it finally comes to surface at the end- and opens up
The inquisitiveness does become a problem... there is such a thing as knowing too much. Though it's less "If I tell you, I'll have to kill you" and more "If I tell you, I know exactly who will definitely try to kill you- and how. And it's not a pretty picture. And they'll kill me too- so there's that."
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InsaneMonkey46 [2017-07-08 02:15:02 +0000 UTC]
I totally love his design, it looks so fun to draw w @ All of the expression are really fitting and convey what they need to, but with the addition of the emoticon speak it makes sense to have clear conveyance.
The sound of his story is pretty interesting! I love the 'supernatural creature ends up like the family pet' situation XD And its nice to know he puts up with his new human friends without causing too much of a fuss. I can't wait to see more! (Though wardrobe will be an interesting challenge >o> )
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Certain-Oddities In reply to InsaneMonkey46 [2017-07-08 03:45:02 +0000 UTC]
Glad you like him! And yeah, wardrobe was interesting... but I managed! Though it's true he prefers to not wear clothing.
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Celesol [2017-07-05 01:00:33 +0000 UTC]
He's so cute! My favorite expression is def Happiness. He looks he's gonna burst, haha!
The Goblin language seems very interesting! So it's kinda like they communicate via mental images instead of words? Or am I getting that wrong?
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Certain-Oddities In reply to Celesol [2017-07-05 02:28:04 +0000 UTC]
Yes, kind of like that!
Kind of like when you're hungry, you just know you are. But in order to let somebody else know, you have to translate that idea (being hungry) into words first, and then say those words ("I am hungry") to get the other person to understand.
Goblins don't need the extra step of translating the idea into words, they can convey the initial idea to another Goblin without speaking. Kind of psychially.
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Celesol In reply to Certain-Oddities [2017-07-06 19:00:44 +0000 UTC]
Ah, I get it now!
That's really interesting. I love how none of the Goblins have names, seeing as their manner of communication has no need for them - it's a very well thought out detail.
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Certain-Oddities In reply to Celesol [2017-07-06 20:25:15 +0000 UTC]
Thank you! I love thinking about stuff like that XD
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Meghan-Dzurichko [2017-07-01 18:08:15 +0000 UTC]
Hopkins is so cute! What is the average lifespan of a Teillarkian Goblin?
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Certain-Oddities In reply to Meghan-Dzurichko [2017-07-04 19:16:40 +0000 UTC]
A few hundred years, about 250-300 years average. Although some live much longer or shorter depending on circumstance. For example: Gremlins (who are closely related to goblins) usually only live for about 100-150 years, but that's only because they like to live closer to humanity and sometimes get killed by human-caused reasons.
Hopkins lives to be very old, getting past 500- though there are other factors that cause that, but I won't get into those at the moment
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Meghan-Dzurichko In reply to Certain-Oddities [2017-07-05 19:10:45 +0000 UTC]
Makes sense. Hopkins is old!!
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Certain-Oddities In reply to Meghan-Dzurichko [2017-07-05 20:39:02 +0000 UTC]
He doesn't exactly act his age though
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mintysoup [2017-06-28 07:13:29 +0000 UTC]
And here I thought he was a Gargoyle! He's pretty cute, though~ I especially like his expressions at the bottom. He's an expressive character, isn't he? I didn't know how they communicated, I thought they had their own language instead of mental imagery. That's pretty cool~
He's happy enough to be a house pet/friend, but I wonder, what is it he's looking for at Anna and Charlie's house? What's his end goal?
Great job with the turn arounds! You're good at keeping the character consistent from all angles (lord knows that's tricky)
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Certain-Oddities In reply to mintysoup [2017-06-28 18:57:58 +0000 UTC]
Oh I know, his silly face is very difficult to get right from the side >.>
Well only Teillarkian Goblins (aka my goblins :3) have the imagery communication, I always liked that idea (a lot of creatures that come from my fictional world Teillarkian have that, it's a decent excuse for them to be able to communicate through a language barrier)
I'm pretty sure traditional goblins either have their own language or speak the local one.
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pheeph [2017-06-27 23:09:37 +0000 UTC]
Goblin, eh? Looks more like a cat... or a chubacabra...
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Certain-Oddities In reply to pheeph [2017-06-28 02:20:09 +0000 UTC]
Well if you actually look at a Hopkinsville Goblin, they don't exactly look like goblins.
They look more like Stitch with no fur and weirdly long arms.
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LordCherryPaw [2017-06-26 20:52:02 +0000 UTC]
A goblin!!!
I never ever would've guessed that...
Hee hee, he kinda reminds me of Meowth from Pokemon. *w*
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Certain-Oddities In reply to LordCherryPaw [2017-06-26 21:13:13 +0000 UTC]
He is kind of like Meowth!
Although it's funny, Sabeleye would actually be closer in a way, since both Hopkins and Sabeleye are based on Hopkinsville Goblins.
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LordCherryPaw In reply to Certain-Oddities [2017-06-26 21:48:40 +0000 UTC]
Sabeleye, huh?
Yeeaaaahhh...I can see it!
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ProbablyImpossible [2017-06-26 12:26:26 +0000 UTC]
I love Hopkins' design! And he’s so delightfully expressive. I also like that you kept his true motives a secret; it makes him mysterious and adds a very interesting extra dimension to his character.
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Certain-Oddities In reply to ProbablyImpossible [2017-06-26 21:14:12 +0000 UTC]
Why thank you! Although I will reveal his motives eventually, but maybe not over the course of the OC-Training
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Certain-Oddities In reply to JaredtheFox92 [2017-06-25 02:49:11 +0000 UTC]
Hopkins: I... what?
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JaredtheFox92 In reply to Certain-Oddities [2017-06-25 02:53:05 +0000 UTC]
Layla: COME HERE LITTLE FIEND, COME TO YOUR GODDESS.
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Certain-Oddities In reply to JaredtheFox92 [2017-06-25 04:50:40 +0000 UTC]
Hopkins: nnnoope. NOOOPE. *flees*
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JaredtheFox92 In reply to Certain-Oddities [2017-06-25 04:54:06 +0000 UTC]
*She smiles and suddenly her hand extends and turns gigantic to grab him*
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SunsetBlazer [2017-06-24 21:59:35 +0000 UTC]
Oh, how interesting! I was wondering what kind of creature he was; I thought a dinosaur kitty or something
He's still really cute. Everyone of the expressions is awesome--great job!
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Certain-Oddities In reply to SunsetBlazer [2017-06-24 22:01:21 +0000 UTC]
Thanks! He is adorable :3
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girl-n-herhorse [2017-06-24 21:24:04 +0000 UTC]
So cool! I really like the lore you've got going here
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Certain-Oddities In reply to girl-n-herhorse [2017-06-24 21:51:22 +0000 UTC]
Thank you! I really enjoy worldbuilding, I also have all these rules about interdimensional travel.
One of these days I'll finish writing a story.... one of these days.
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Joce-in-Stitches In reply to Certain-Oddities [2017-06-25 00:39:21 +0000 UTC]
You draw expressions very well! Look forward to learning more about this little guy.
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Joce-in-Stitches In reply to Certain-Oddities [2017-06-25 00:38:07 +0000 UTC]
I find this highly ironic and amusing, considering how much kicked and screamed about having to world-build with her story in its beginning.
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dragondoodle In reply to Joce-in-Stitches [2017-06-25 02:11:25 +0000 UTC]
I contend that I am STILL kicking and screaming. I'm just impressed that is quite good at it
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Certain-Oddities In reply to Joce-in-Stitches [2017-06-25 01:16:18 +0000 UTC]
I've been having kind of the opposite problem, I've been doing so much worldbuilding but haven't actually written a complete story XD
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girl-n-herhorse In reply to Certain-Oddities [2017-06-24 21:52:29 +0000 UTC]
You'd better! If not, I know where you live
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