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Sergei(Me): Well, hello there cutie. And what kind of name has, such a beautiful flower like you? *wink*
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Me: Oh, hold on, let me get her... Hey! There's a guy here who wants to talk to you!
(footsteps)
Girl: Oh ho, we've got a brave man here. Not many get fresh with me and live to brag about it. I will reward your bravery with what you ask. I am Seiryuu.
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(*evil stroking hands* Well, it's time to creat a parallel time line while the main story goes! Mhahaah!!!) (P.S I apologize for the grammatical errors, englis is not my first language. Thank you for attention.*bow*) (Oh, and last thing: **-description, ()-thoughts, Highlighted words in bold-important things, most often names.)
(Third POV)
Sergei: Heheh, thanks for the compliment! People always say that my courage did not bring anything good to me.
Sergei: So you Seiryuu? What a beautiful name! I like it....Oh! Where are my manners? *khm* *khm*
Sergei: Well Seiryuu, my name Sergei Volozhanin, but it's my old name. But for now my name is Atsushi Tatsuhi! Nice to meet you! And I hope I will not bother you, because I like to talk a lot, heheheh...
*A young 16 years old boy European origin began to scratching his head back, his brown short haircut twitching of the nervous just like he's brown eyes. The reasons why boy was so nervous, probably consisted of the beauty of his interlocutor.*
Tatsuhi: (Good job dumbass! You're finally able to talk to the really beautiful girl, but you do not give her even say a word! Good plan genius!)
*The boy outfit included: Long dark-red coat, dark-red jeans, two black belt with gray buckles,(one for jeans, one for iron sword on the back.), black fingerless gloves, black boots, white socks, white underpants, white shirt. Looks like boy was a Mercenary, or a Soldier since most of his outfit looks battered and torn. Also he has seen the scar similar to cut, on his left eye.*
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(It's cool. Your english is actually very good.)
*Seiryuu slides off her chair and walks closer. She moves effortlessly on the balls of her feet like a dancer. She soon stands mere inches away and her head comes up to Atsushi's throat. She places a hand on his left cheek and delicately brushes his scar, but her sinister eyes glow the color of burning coal. Beneath her beauty lies the impression of snake about to strike.*
Seiryuu: My, how courteous you are. Do you fear me, soldier boy? I can see you've proven yourself on the battlefield, yet even I can see your nervousness as you stand before me now. It's almost cute.
*Her lips curl to reveal a pair of fangs. Before saying another word, however, she quickly slides back unto her throne.*
Seiryuu: Still, you are only just a boy and much too young for my tastes. We will meet again once you are ready.
*She vanishes into darkness.*
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(Another important thing that, in Japan names working like that: Last Name-First, First Name-Second. Example: "Atsushi Tatsuhi", Atsushi it's Last Name, Tatsuhi is First Name. When people in Japan call you something like "Atsushi-San" they would use your last name for that, because with that they can show their respect. You probably know it already, but I need to write it for my satisfaction. )
(Fun fact: "Tatsu" in old "Japan Romaji" means Dragon, and "hi" means "fire". Funny don't you think? Because fire is most of the time refers to red color. And Seiryuu is....You know. 
(Third POV)
Tatsuhi: W-Wait! I have a lot of questions!!
*But unfortunately before Tatsuhi can ask any of his questions Seiryuu was already gone in the darkness.*
Tatsuhi:...At least I wanted to ask how to get out of here. *sigh* Dad would be so disappointed in me, when he found out about my first conversation with Seiryuu.
*Tatsuhi trying to look around the cave where he fell, but everything was so dark that he can't see anything.*
Tatsuhi: (....I was so lucky that my body does not have a bleed ing wounds, only some bruises. But they was not so bad.)
Tatsuhi: Dad was right, seamstresses from Hagan Clan do wonders with they clothes. I hope someday I can ask them to make me another instance of my clothes.
*Still Tatsuhi need find a way to get out. After several attempts to get accustomed to the darkness in which Seiryuu disappeared, Tatsuhi decided take a look on the hole where he is fall. After explore a hole in the ceiling, Tatsuhi earned that around holes was no vines, or something for what he could be cling.*
*Seiryuu face flashed through in Tatsuhi memories, her insidious smile, her white fangs that probably would have scared any other person, but not Tatsuhi, her eyes with the color of gold, her black long hair, her white skin. Tatsuhi still remember the feeling of Seiryuu cold but gentle hands, even if Tatsuhi feel like a mouse caught by a snake, then and now he can not calm this crazy feeling in his chest and adrenaline in his veins.*
*Tatsuhi kept a silly smile on his face, while thinking about Seiryuu.*
Tatsuhi: (Alright, I decided!)
Tatsuhi: I will live and train like never before! I will become a real man and a warrior like my father, order to see Seiryuu again! (I want to see her smile again....No, I want her smile for me! But for that I need to become stronger and smarter! And my first task will be-)
*Tatsuhi with determination looked at the darkness of the cave.*
Tatsuhi:-find a way out of here!
*Go back the same way will not work. Thought Tatsuhi. And fearless gait walked straight into the darkness, while thinking about some strange thinks what he found about Seiryuu. Memories about Seiryuu fangs, and glowing eyes now not leave Tatsuhi mind.*
Tatsuhi: (Hhhmmm...Maybe I just seemed, and she have just very sharp teeth.) Also what she was doing underground?
*Tatsuhi continued thinking about Seiryuu, while walking in the darkness.*
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*Tatsuhi wandered in the darkness for hours. He could tell as the light that shown through occasional ceiling cracks grew dim from the fiery color of sunset to the paleness of moonlight.*
*He kept his hand on the cavernous wall, but after a while felt engravings. He followed the ancient art to a room illuminated by blue flame. The engravings now revealed intricate patterns leading to gigantic jade double-door. On the door is a relief depicting four beasts, a dragon, tortoise, phoenix, and tiger. The dragon is the largest and protrudes out and casts shadows over the walls. The four beasts stand above a crowd of people in various states of age and attire. They bow before they four beasts. Above the beasts stands a man in flowing robes.*
*Before the door, and standing flanked by blue torches, stand two white statues. One depicts Seiryuu in intricate detail, but the other depicts a young man. He stands a head taller than Seiryuu and has long hair worn in a ponytail which reaches down his lower back. He wears a long, flowing coat atop a traditional gi and hakama. He wears sleeves on his forearms which extend over the backs of his hands and in the left he carries a sheathed katana. His arms are defined and shoulders broad, common signs of a warrior, but his face is gentle, almost feminine. He has a soft look in his eyes and his lips stretch to a friendly smirk.*
*Seiryuu's voice calls in Tatsuhi's head.*
Seiryuu: Step inside, curious child...
*The jade gates open to a dark chamber.*
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(Ooohhh, bad translation. I think that, I have misunderstood word meaning "Chamber", it's like "Prison Cell" right? Well... we'll see. Who knows maybe I guessed it right? XD )
(Oh, and would like if you write in my "notes" about the lore of you Franchise, it would help me to write a story so much. 
(Also W.A.-"Writer Application".)
(P.S-I was thiking about create a scene when: Tatsuhi enters the dark chamber, and saw Seiryuu in her Dragon form, which is her real form I guess? But then I thought,"neh I'm not THAT lazy.")
(Third POV)
*Surprised by the sudden voice of Seiryuu, but quickly restore his mind, Tatsuhi hurried to go through jade gates, but stopped for a second to look at the statue with man(?) warrior, his/her face looks familiar to Tatsuhi but he does not remember why.*
Tatsuhi: (Rgghh! Dammit, these Japanese all looks like a girls for me...Well, except some of my customers who had a mustache or beard.)
*What prompted in the mind of Tatsuhi strange think that he immediately threw it out of his mind.*
Tatsuhi: (Now when I think about it....Is Seiryuu a girl? I mean she is beautiful, but it's not like I see anything on the site of her breasts. And by age she seems at the same level with me, but still call me a child.)
...........
Tatsuhi: (FOR GOD OF LOVE!!! WHAT THE HELL I JUST THOUGH?!)...Man, how dumb I am?
*Immersed in his thoughts, Tatsuhi did not notice how he passed a dark corridor made from old jade, and went to a large but dark room. The room with four walls, the ceiling and the floor was made in the Urs Clan style,(W.A.:Japanese style in my mind.) with a combination of two colors Green(Jade) and Blue(Lazuli). The only illuminated in the room was large iron saucer next to walls that glow by blue flames, bu he still can explore the room.*
*The whole room looked old as it's already a thousand years, the room was a lot of dust on the floor and cracks on the columns. The room rested on four large columns in the center of the room, each four columns has imageof a Dragon, Tortoise, Phoenix, and Tiger, with Japanese hieroglyphs on the edges, but since Tatsuhi have a small knowledge of Japanese in general he can't read them. Also three columns with tortoise, phoenix, and tiger have a smiling shadow silhouettes reminiscent of evil people who are trying to reach out to three beasts, except column with a dragon which looks like a shadow of coming out of it.*
*The columns divide the room into two parts of two colors, columns with Dragon, and Tortoise were located on the left side of the room, and columns with Phoenix, and Tiger were located on the right side of the room. The left and right walls were made of Jade and Lazuli, the ceiling and the floor were divided between the two colors. But on the ceiling hung a dragon statue made of Lazuli. *
Seiryuu: Oh, you're already here. Sorry for the mess, I did not expect any guests so soon. And my last guest before you left me quickly.
*Tatsuhi turned toward the voice, and saw Seiryuu sitting on the big bed made in Urs Clan style. Tatsuhi was so happy and at the same time so nervous, he had a lot of questions to her. But he decided to wait until she finished speaking.*
Seiryuu: When people die and fall into the abyss, their souls are usually endlessly wander in the darkness, before the moment when I decide what to do with them.
Seiryuu: But you. You are not only able to follow me, but also able to find my chamber on such a short time. What motivates you? What makes you move forward?.....Although I think i know why....*smile*....silly child.
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(Oh my. I like your enthusiasm, but let's be careful where we take this role-play. Let's try not to go anywhere too "adult" now. Also, when it came to dialogue, let's try to talk for our characters only, please.)
*Seiryuu's flowing gown fluttered as she slid off the bed. It was a bright white that stood out in the darkness. It was a high cut dress that covered her completely from the neck down, but clung tightly to her frame due to a sash wrapped around her waist. It hinted at everything yet revealed nothing. If at least one thing were certain, it was that Seiryuu was indeed female. However, as she stepped towards Tatsuhi, blue light from torches and darkness in shadow swirled about her and morphed into the clothing she once had before by the time she stepped by Tatsuhi.*
Seiryuu: Let's move somewhere with more light.
*The two moved through the great hall and torches lit up with blue flame as Seiryuu moved past them. Eventually they came to a wooden door which Seiryuu pushed open to a lounging room. It was spacious and smelled of the wood burning in a fireplace. Portraits of landscapes lined the walls a various baubles lined the shelf above the mouth of the fireplace. The far wall was lined with book shelves filled with thick books and scrolls. On the adjacent wall, there was a window flanked by heavy red drapes, but it did not show the night sky, at least not how it should. It showed the the stars shooting through the expanse of space. Before the window was a sword stand Urs clan style. It was large enough to hold one blade, but the sword in question was gone. In the middle of the room sat a low lazy susan table made of rich, lacquered redwood and two pillows sat on either side.*
*Seiryuu started speaking in a strange language which rolled over the soothing silence as a summer breeze rolls over a grassy field. At her words the flames in the fireplace leapt small flames brought to life scurried about the room and past Seiryuu and Tatsuhi.*
Seiryuu: Come and have a seat. My pets will be back soon.
*She gracefully glided to the far side of the table and sat kneeled on the pillow which barely sunk under her light weight. She sat straight at attention and her voice was dry and formal.*
Seiryuu: Now, what is it you wished to ask?
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(Alright, so how about from this moment we will speak through "Note"? Then we will not spoil a lore for people, while creating it. Because I have a lot of things to talk about, like World Backtory, Character, TMeaning of some scene, etc. Difficult right? 
(Also, don't about "Adult Material" I'm professional(No) Lemon writer, so if we get on some "intimate moment" between characters, leave it to me! But if you don't like this stuff bruh, we can always skip this point, but we must not forget that is happened between some characters, so we do not forget about their relationship!)
(Besides Seiryuu and Tatsuhi met each other quite recently, so that they need time to build their relationship. And Tatsuhi is only 16! And he never talked with the girls, and his "sword" probably will not impress Seiryuu in this age. Poor guy. XD So we will develop their relationship slowly but correctly.)
(Third POV)
*Tatsuhi hurried to sit on a pillow which almost broke under his weight, but it was still comfortable for Tatsuhi.*
Tatsuhi: Well, yeah I have a couple of questions. But it looks like, that light who are you looking for just gone! Hehehe...
*Tatsuhi tried to make a joke to defuse the situation, but it looks like it does nothing, since Seiryuu tilted her head in question, and her face expressed clear misunderstanding.*
Tatsuhi: (Good job Tatsuhi....Good job...) Anyway, I would like to start my question, asking: "Who are you Seiryuu?" I mean after all that I saw...Your not a normal girl right?
*That was a very silly question and Tatsuhi know it, but stull he need explanation of what is happening, and learn a little about Seiryuu.*
(W.A.-Well, that was a short one. From that moment probably begins long explanation which should be in all the manga and anime.
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