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Published: 2007-10-07 21:49:16 +0000 UTC; Views: 8814; Favourites: 311; Downloads: 361
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So here's the first one out of the three, Sakura.EDIT: I did some changes to this piece thanks to Seed for the very helpful critique.
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I like the colouring but ehm...is she...a little cross-eyed?
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It might be the hair covering her eye white area there.
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Yes I can see what you mean, the hair just adds a bit to the illusion of her being cross-eyed. Great update on the colouring, btw.
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hmm, I think she has allot of red in her skin so she looks pinker than I think she actually does but what really isn't working for me is her mouth. It looks as if she has just swallowed something she just didn't like and she is a bit surprised about it. I think mainly because the right side of her mouth stretches in a strange way compared to the more normal looking left side. In the sketch it looks like you have her smiling but emphasized by the color and the added lips it just changes the look completely for me.
Cool coloring job though and I like how the background blooms around her. Hopefully that helps some.
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yeah I know what you mean, it does change a bit from the lines to the color.
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Nice drawing! The colors could use some more work in my opinion
-> overpaint [link]
Hope you don't take that in a disrespectful way
Damn you got so good with that whole-artist-package. Need to practice aswell....
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neh, you're probably the only one I can count on for a useful critique.
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looks a lot better now, good job!
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Thanks for the helpful critique dude.
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God I hate your skills man. Or rather, I envy them and my own lack of keeping up the pace with my own coloring. 
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Hmmmm...normally, your work is really astonishing, but this time there's something out of place here, master Dan...maybe, the shadows at the face are too heavy, in comparison to her hair and clothing...
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I love everything you make, but here her mouth/lips expression bothers me a little...
Amazing stuff nevertheless
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Hey dude
long time no see.
Amazing, your colors are RICH dude.
Dont disappear!
People miss seeing your stuff around here.
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Wow now there's smooth shadowing to back and admire for a bit.
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Absolutely beautiful coloring, however, it's the drawing that bugs me. It's well done, but seems... horribly unnatural is all.
Well done though, just that one little thing.
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Character believability is one of the many aspects of drawing that I need to have more practice with. It's just going to take time and a lot of failed attempts to get to that point.
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Well good luck with that.
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Her face really has a nice 3D effect to it. Very nice colours!! 
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i dig a lot this smooth style u made. put some mor dan:3
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