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Description -Hull breach on Decks Five, Six, Seven and Eight!- Ensign Charlotte Ainsworth shrieked- We're venting atmosphere!
-Casualties are being reported from said decks!- Lieutenant Heimann swallowed hard, his earpiece shaking in his palm.
-Emergency bulkheads!- Captain David Metlesits said, grinding his teeth- Evasive manouvers!
-Aye, sir.- Lieutenant Jiménez said, calmly as ever. His long fingers danced over his console, fircing the damaged starship to turn for a better fighting angle.
-Skip, Kzinti battlecruiser approaching from starboard. They're locking weapons.- Vasily Nussbaum said, turning back from his chair to face his Captain.
-Proximity blasts, Vasya!- Metlesits hissed, his fungers pressing into the leather covering his chair's arms- Full spr...
Before he could finish the order, something shook the Polaris with such immense a force which held the promise of shaking the ship apart. The ship moaned and groaned under the force. On the bridge, all screens flickered... and then all lights went out.
-Skip?- Nussbaum's voice tore through the tangible silence enshrounding the bridge.
-Damage report!- the Captain barked. As if to answer an unvoiced wish, the lights came back online. Damage indicators blinked red on the engineering console, un-manned now, with the Chief Engineer being down in Engineering.
-Heimann, get me Engineering.- Metlesits said- I want to know what happened and I want to now it now.
-Sir, all comm channels are overflowed.- Rochus Heimann said, wiping his forehead with his hand- Damage reports are coming in from all decks.
-Give me something useful.
-Aye.- Heimann nodded. He activated a search filter on his console and after a few seconds, he nodded- Got it.
-On speakers.- Metlesits nodded as well. The speakers came alive with a static hiss.
-This... this is Crewman Zhivanovich. Is... is anyone there?
-Calm down, Crewman.- Metlesits said in a steady, encouraging tone- This is the Captain speaking. Are you from Engineering?
-No, sir. I'm stationed at the cosmology lab, Deck Fourteen.
-Crewman, do you know what has just happened?
-Sir...- his voice sounded hesitant- I... I think we've lost our starboard nacelle.
-Basszameg!- Metlesits cursed, his Hungarian syllables a hiss.
-Captain, Engineering is reporting.- Heimann said.
-Patch them through.- the Captain nodded- Big Chief, are you alive down there?
-Barely.- the Native American's voice came as a tired sigh- Sir, the starboard Warp nacelle is gone. We stabilised all EPS junctions and the core, but...
-No buts, we're still flying.- Metlesits made a mental note of congratulating his Chief Engineer once this is over... and they are still alive. His thoughts were interrupted by Nussbaum's cry:
-Skip, the enemy cruiser is turning back!
-Fire photon torpedoes, maximum yeld!- the Captain shouted, his eyes fixed upon the magenta saucer shape of a Kzinti warship filling the viewscreen. Nussbaum pressed the launch button, a chain of five torpedoes erupted from the Polaris' lower saucer. The next instant saw the destruction of the enemy vessel.
-They didn't see that comming, the meshuggeh!- Nussbaum laughed, earning a war cry from his comrades.
-We're still flying, ladies and gents!- Metlesits shouted, veins pulsing on his temples- Mr. Jiménez, turn us about. Vasya, pick a new target and fire at will.
After two quick "Aye!"-s, the Polaris turned, her damaged frame quivering. But it was war and it was no time to stop. The next few minutes made the light cruiser fly through blazing hell, and also evoking it upon her enemies. Hulls burned under particle beam fire and torpedo impacts, but the Kzinti... they still came.
The Federation never listened to Earth when debates emerged on the Kzinti. When the attack on Cait began, they thought a small flock of light and medium cruisers will be more than enough to deal with them. They were wrong.
-Captain, incoming message from the flagship.- Heimann said.
-On screen.- Metlesits said. The main viewing screen's image switched to that of a bony-faced man's.
-This is Commodore Coulter. All ships, retreat! I repeat: all ships, retreat! We cannot hold back the invasion. We are to re-group at Starbase 15.
Amongst the noises of machinery and other equipment, silence filled the bridge of the Polaris. Metlesits saw Ainsworth and Heimann exchanging a glance and Jiménez hovering his hands over his board, ready to type in the new coordinates.
-If we leave now, Cait is good as dead.- the Captain whispered.
-Skip, if we don't leave now, we're as good as dead.- Nussbaum said.
As if to confirm his words, another particle beam lashed over the charred hull of the Polaris.
-It's God-damned Elizabethtown all over again!- Metlesits whispered, looking down at the floor- We... I...
-David!- Nussbaum's cry hit the Captain like as if the tactical officer had slapped him on the face.
-Mr. Jiménez, full reverse!- he said- Set a course to Starbase 15. Or someplace where there is a drydock for us. We'll have a devil of a time putting the ship together again. By Jove! We must put her back together again!


Meshes by me
Photon torpedo effects by Prologic9
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Comments: 75

Crimsonguard477 [2016-02-11 01:39:11 +0000 UTC]

Dude, your story telling skills are as great as your other art skills. You should be making new Trek TV or movies, not JJ Abrams.

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Kevinwinner [2014-02-25 03:14:31 +0000 UTC]

Tell u about the Kzinti phasers

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DalekOfBorg [2013-03-18 18:45:48 +0000 UTC]

Ouch! Severed nacelle!

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GregStitz [2010-05-31 13:36:20 +0000 UTC]

"Sir we lost something!"
"Don't worry we are still flying half a ship."

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davemetlesits In reply to GregStitz [2010-05-31 16:42:20 +0000 UTC]

That's our fighting spirit.

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GregStitz In reply to davemetlesits [2010-05-31 16:46:35 +0000 UTC]

lol

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ogrebear [2010-05-27 20:31:23 +0000 UTC]

Nice backstory.

We need this battle animated!

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davemetlesits In reply to ogrebear [2010-05-27 21:22:17 +0000 UTC]

I wish I could to this level of animation.

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PaladinArtea [2009-12-09 02:40:21 +0000 UTC]

great story Dave, but i think you need to spell check lol. Other than that, it was epic. Poor Caitians...

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davemetlesits In reply to PaladinArtea [2009-12-09 18:01:17 +0000 UTC]

Spell check is for secretaries

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PaladinArtea In reply to davemetlesits [2009-12-09 22:47:28 +0000 UTC]

lol

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dantrekfan48 [2009-12-05 01:52:30 +0000 UTC]

The Messiah drops from warp into orbit. Beyond the bow of our own ship, the Polaris was taking heavy fire from the Kzinti ships. I turned around an dlooked on Will's face. He was worried if not terrorfied. I would be too if my hero commanded that ship. "Open a channel to the Kzinti vessels." I heard Justin order. Xan did so and the channel whistled on. "This is Commander Justin St. Esprit of the U.S.S. Messiah." he announced. "You are ordered to break off your attack on the polaris immidietly." One ship turned on us and fired to are port bow sheilds. The ship rocked from the impact to one side.
"Will." I called, "Arm phasers and torpedoes. Target the lead ship."
"With pleasure." he said proudly.

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davemetlesits In reply to dantrekfan48 [2009-12-05 17:47:19 +0000 UTC]

Thank you for the help, Messiah. Situation acknowledged.

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dantrekfan48 In reply to davemetlesits [2009-12-05 18:23:34 +0000 UTC]

Justin: Do you need an escort captain? Seeing as how your starboard nacelle was blown clean off.

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davemetlesits In reply to dantrekfan48 [2009-12-06 01:57:14 +0000 UTC]

Thank you, Messiah, everything's under control. We're ready to retreat and head for repair docks.

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dantrekfan48 In reply to davemetlesits [2009-12-07 23:46:31 +0000 UTC]

Understood. Stay outta trouble.

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QAuZ [2009-12-02 02:36:54 +0000 UTC]

This has been featured [link]

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davemetlesits In reply to QAuZ [2009-12-02 19:01:20 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much!

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QAuZ In reply to davemetlesits [2009-12-03 05:22:44 +0000 UTC]

youre always welcome

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tangerinewarning [2009-11-30 16:25:04 +0000 UTC]

Nice.
Activate the self destruct and use it to take them out.

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davemetlesits In reply to tangerinewarning [2009-11-30 19:25:34 +0000 UTC]

Wo way! We'll fight ourselves out!

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Biglew14 [2009-11-29 01:48:04 +0000 UTC]

cool lasers did you make them in photo shop? i like the fighting scenes!

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davemetlesits In reply to Biglew14 [2009-11-29 13:42:50 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

The beams were rendered in ParticleIllusion and retouched in Photoshop.

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Biglew14 In reply to davemetlesits [2009-11-30 01:17:29 +0000 UTC]

oh ok

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CaptainBarringer [2009-11-28 21:58:07 +0000 UTC]

oh snap we'll get u beam up to direct my bridge lol

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davemetlesits In reply to CaptainBarringer [2009-11-29 00:38:01 +0000 UTC]

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CaptainBarringer [2009-11-28 21:58:04 +0000 UTC]

oh snap we'll get u beam up to direct my bridge lol

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overseer [2009-11-28 20:05:01 +0000 UTC]

Nice and dynamic scene! Nice story to it as well!

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davemetlesits In reply to overseer [2009-11-28 21:12:53 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much!

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Sci-Fi-Society [2009-11-27 21:09:26 +0000 UTC]

Very nice work!

Can we add this to the SFS?

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davemetlesits In reply to Sci-Fi-Society [2009-11-27 23:58:19 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

Bring it on. But lease add the little story as well, just for the flavour

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Sci-Fi-Society In reply to davemetlesits [2009-11-29 04:52:44 +0000 UTC]

No problem.

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GhostRider2007 [2009-11-27 17:09:21 +0000 UTC]

You really need a VALHALLA for this...oh wait...what is the Vulcan Science Academy's stance on time travel again...?

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Wolfman-053 In reply to GhostRider2007 [2009-11-30 15:19:39 +0000 UTC]

What about a Sovereign-class?

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GhostRider2007 In reply to Wolfman-053 [2009-12-01 00:47:27 +0000 UTC]

Hmmm...or that

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Wolfman-053 In reply to GhostRider2007 [2009-12-01 15:06:55 +0000 UTC]

Heh, heh, heh...

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davemetlesits In reply to GhostRider2007 [2009-11-27 17:11:38 +0000 UTC]

Valhalla?

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GhostRider2007 In reply to davemetlesits [2009-11-27 17:14:30 +0000 UTC]

A VALHALLA-class command battlecruiser...but that a liitle far into the future.

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Trance-Master [2009-11-27 08:43:51 +0000 UTC]

Er...I thing its time my DS9 Polaris got involved here, or we all will be spitting out furballs ad infinitum!

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davemetlesits In reply to Trance-Master [2009-11-27 17:12:03 +0000 UTC]

Don't worry, after this comes the Phase II refit.

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Trance-Master In reply to davemetlesits [2009-11-27 20:34:25 +0000 UTC]

Ah, yes of course! My ship is still available to join the fight if you need her!

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Camro-XXVII [2009-11-27 08:10:06 +0000 UTC]

I'm sure they can buff that out.

Great pic.

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davemetlesits In reply to Camro-XXVII [2009-11-27 17:12:09 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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Coresk [2009-11-27 07:05:56 +0000 UTC]

Eeeeepic!

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davemetlesits In reply to Coresk [2009-11-27 17:12:17 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much!

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herr-garrett [2009-11-27 06:35:16 +0000 UTC]

Spelling. De amúgy thumbs up!

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davemetlesits In reply to herr-garrett [2009-11-27 17:12:51 +0000 UTC]

LOL

Igazából csak begéeltem, nem nagyon ellenőriztem. Az áldóját, Jim, orvos vagyok, nem titkárnő!

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herr-garrett In reply to davemetlesits [2009-11-27 18:13:25 +0000 UTC]

McCoyt lopni aljas dolog

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davemetlesits In reply to herr-garrett [2009-11-28 00:00:36 +0000 UTC]

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Dirty-Charisma [2009-11-27 05:40:53 +0000 UTC]

It's just a minor scratch no big deal.

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