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Published: 2006-05-06 22:29:25 +0000 UTC; Views: 10017; Favourites: 84; Downloads: 1296
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OH MY GOD. At long last...Hey, I moved across the country, so what do you expect?
Next to last page of the comic. I already have ideas for the next one. Free time seems to be coming to me on a somewhat regular basis, too. So that's good. @.@Anyway, here Ruby explains where she comes from. Kinda shady, but ehhh... whatcha gonna do.
The idea to include Robotnik was my own decision. Eggman isn't much of a villain, he just doesn't do it for me when it comes to bad guys, so that's a nod to the Sonic adventures I love. Which, I hope, this whole comic has been alluding to. One more page to go, and perhaps some previews of things I got on the brain, for the next one.EDIT: Changed up Robotnik's suit a bit
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What does she mean by 'but it looks like i already have'?
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Leave it to ol' Ivo to screw things up back in the day eh? (If you're going by the Archie comic-line that is...which I assume you would be ^_^; ) Anyway, great twist! Can't wait for more!
-Miles
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Wohoo! Comic! I was beginning to think it was only a dream... n.n....
... next to last?... so soon?.. ToT
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Aww, what a great story and nicely done.
Static: Sweeet! Parallel worlds! 
Me: Indeed.
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Already this story is 99% better than what Sonic Team comes up with Dawn.
Any chance of an appearance from a certain purple weasel?
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Killer, might I add that I enjoy your Ruby character.
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Welcome back Dawn, wondering where you went off too. Good as always, but somebody already nailed the rushed look of this, oh well. And I also want to pet Ruby now... but I'm afraid she'd bite me! *chomp* YEOW! WHY YOU LITTLE!!
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I really would like to see whatever other ideas you've got
and I've enjoyed reading this series so far!! hate to see its gonna be coming to an end
( old Robotnik looks awesome )
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I will do another comic, promised
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Very nice comic so far, Ruby!
BTW, haven't heard fromyou in a while. What's been happening?
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Been living on the left coast, and loving it
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Cool! Have you heard about the new white hedgehog on Sonic PS3?
Many here were calling him "Terion," but I think his offical name is "Sliver."
I'm not sure yet. I just found this out from another DA artist.
I seriously don't know if that name is offical or not, but I'll have to check with him later...
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I'm glad to see another page of this comic.
Yours actually inspired me to try my own.. though it's a bit pale and weak compaired to yours.. Heh.
Hope you are happy where you've moved, and I wish you the best of luck.
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I'm liking how the story is coming along, Dawn.
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Excellent! Awesome comic page, Dawn. Great panel art and cool flow in each one. Nice touch adding old school Robotnik in the mix.
Great poseing, colors and expressions. Can't wait for the next page.
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hwdy ^^ glad you finaly made the next page
anyway, style and story are good, and my my what a big fat ASS robotnik is ^^
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Wow, the story's coming along nicely, and I like the coloring alot, I envy you ^__^
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Eggman is more of the guy who pisses everyone off and wreaks havoc on everyone, and sonic has a big bone to pick. After all he really isnt a bad bad guy, just more or less an evil scientist who's a bit loopy (and naturally dreams of taking over the world) and ends up having his own plans fail or backfire on him. (like when he tries to control chaos, or shadow, or his own creations he makes too powerful and go out of control)
Whilst robotnik is pretty much eggman, but at a more advanced stage (where he actually has control of the world)
anyway, as usual, I love the art, though eggman looks REALLY huge (height-wise) compared to ruby. My only gripe.
Though that scene would make for a funny caption:
"I'M HIGHER ON THE FOOD CHAIN! GET IN MAH BELLEH."
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Indeed. And I rather like to do size comparisons with the characters, as it just gives me more to think about, and makes the viewer take notice a bit more. You'll often see me pairing big things with little ones, just to show off my perception of difference in size. Cuz I can.
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I've found that I'm really found of Ruby.. she's so lost and sad. I like her alot. How do you like your new home?
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It's wacky, this southern California... it's a dessert, but it's got miles of beaches, and the climate is largely mediterranean. Needless to say, I'm hooked.
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"I politely declined"
Heheh, yeah right. I say you should have shown Ruby knocking his block off.
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The more I see Ruby, the more I fall in love with her character. The other dimension thing is reminiscent of oldskool Archie, which is a good thing considering what's been down with it of late. I find myself hoping there are oldskool fans trying to keep that feel and that energy of the non-soap opera-type storyline alive. You're definitely one of them.
And I love how you do such smooth and simplistic CGing/shading. It brings out a feel for the old classicness of what Archie Comics were way back when. That's always a plus in my books
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Havent seen that style of robotnic in ages OO;Looks cool!
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Pretty darned awesome. Again, I love your lighting the most. Great colouring too. Rich and textured. Nice panel work too, though the bottom left of the page feels kinda empty. But that's just a small niggle. Great work, awesome to see new stuff
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This is random, but I really love that Ruby's...er...topless. Aside from Sally, I can't think of another character who rolls like that. 
I guess I should actually read all the other pages so I'll know what's going on. Nice work on this page... Robotnik looks especially rotund.
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They don't go for overly sexual characters. Well, they do, but I was hindered largely because if it was Ken doing the inking, he'd tone down some of the curvatures I'd normally place on my characters, and sometimes redraw them. THAT was annoying... but the idea was that I was new to the scene (for 4 years apparently ^^) and he wanted to make sure I wasn't going to leave a bad impression with drawing things too sexy. I really don't know where they stand. Axer and crew certainly got away with more than I thought was possible, and it looked good and worked out well for the comic as a whole. There's a point of overdoing it, but you just obviously don't cross that line.
Oh. And this one time... Patrick got in trouble because Sally's butt was on the cover.
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... wow, did NOT see that twist comin'. Of course, that just makes it that much more awesome. Once again, great job, Ms. Dawn.
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Hmm, I believe this is awesome! However the last and second to last panels look a tad...erm rushed. Besides that deffinatley awesome.
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Yup, my last ditch effort before the actual move. It wasn't rushed... it was motivated.
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Oh I see, For being motvated you still awesomely and my comment remains the same; awesome work!
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Robotnik looks like he's going to fall over with all that extra weight. XD
It'll be interesting to see what Ruby does now. I'm sure she'd like to return to her home if possible.
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Sorry, George... ;.; ^^
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Aahh! NO! I don't get the reference! D:
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But who would address George in such a way? Astro? o.o
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jah!
rorry reorge!
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