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Dawn and the Chocolate Factory

Chapter Seven : The Chocolate Room and A Pig's Defeat

Discord was showing the group to the hallway and stopped at a small door. Discord announced it, "There it is...the entrance to the most important room in the factory." Alvin exclaimed in shock, "We'll never fit in there!" Jonathon nodded, "It's too small!" Discord smirked, got out a key, and opened th door. Upon opening the door, it revealed the most beautiful room yet. It had a chocolate waterfall and looked like a meadow, filled with candy-trees and goodies of sorts. Dawn smiled, "Awesome!" Gian muttered, awed, "Wow..." Discord announced, pride in his voice, "Behold, damas y caballeros...the Chocolate Room!"

Discord then began to explain, "The waterfall is the most important though. Mixes the chocolate, churns it up, makes it light and frothy. By the way…no other factory mixes its chocolate by waterfall and you can take that to the bank." It was then Haruhiko noticed some pipes overhead. It began to suck a bit of chocolate and took the chocolate to the room. He asked, "Discord, what are the pipes for?" Discord explained, "Those pipes suck up the chocolate and carry it away all over the factory. Thousands of gallons an hour. And do you like my meadow?" Batty said, in a coaxing tone, "Heck, try some of the grass."

Sunset said, surprised, "You mean the grass is edible, too?" Discord nodded as he smiled, "Why, everything in this room is edible, dear Sunset...except us..." Batty butted in, "That's canibalism. It's sick and very taboo. Don't do it." This concerned the kids as Batty said it. Discord noticed the uneasiness in the kids at Batty's comment before saying, "Still enjoy..."

This gave a greenlight to the tour as they happily began to sample the candies in the Chocolate Room. Then, with a snap of his fingers, Discord got to to rain....but rain chocolate milk, as he began to sing.

Discord : Chocolate Rain...some stay dry and others feel the pain

Chocolate Rain...a baby born will die before the sin

Choco-

"Wrong song!" Someone said, to Discord, making him pause, realizing that they had a point. Then, Discord began to sing again, this time the right song for this scene.

Discord : Come with me and you’ll be....In a world of pure imagination

Take a look and you’ll see...Into your imagination

We’ll begin with a spin....Trav’ling in the world of my creation

What we’ll see will defy...Explanation

The tour scattered off into different directions. Brittany went to a tree filled with gummy bears as she got a cherry-flavored one and began to eat it. Dawn was eagerly getting candy apples as she happily munched on one. Dawn noted, "Ooh, sure has a sweet taste..." She then put a small candy apple on her pocket, allowing Trent, Gwen, Soul, and Maka to eat a bit. Maka said, smiling with nostalgia, "I remember eating those candy apples when I was younger..." Sunset began to take another of those candy apples, but not before shooting a dirty look at Dawn.

Discord : If you want to view paradise....Simply look around and view it

Anything you want to, do it...Want to change the world

There’s nothing to it

There is no life I know....To compare with pure imagination

Living there, you’ll be free....If you truly wish to be

Haruhiko began to eat a mushroom, a candy one, though. Then, he gave some to Dawn and Jonathon, who eaggerly began to eat in happinness. Haruka was eating a candy cane, enjoying the flavor. It would be perfect for Christmas. Doug was munching politely on a chocolate ros. Gian was gobbling everything in sight, like Godzilla attacking Tokyo, even eating some bits of the grass. Mel cam up to Gian, and said out loud, "Well, the Chocolate River sure looks delish, Gian." Daphne watched in concern as Alvin started to beat a candy pumpkin with his leg. Dusk smiled wistfully as he started to eat a licorcioce.

Discord : If you want to view paradise....Simply look around and view it

Anything you want to, do it...Want to change the world

There’s nothing to it

There is no life I know....To compare with pure imagination

Living there, you’ll be free....If you truly wish to be

Discord began to stop at a bush of candy flowers as the song began to end. Discord started to drink from one of them. After they finished their cups, Discord ate the cup, much to Dawn's shock. Discord shrugged at the shocked girl, "Hey, the cup's edible." Dawn narrated, "Grandpa was right. Discord truly was a magician of sorts." Then, Jonathon noticed a group of creatures working around the factory. Jonaton asked Discord, "Who are they?" Mel came up, with a witty smirk, "I see you've met the Munchkins." Dawn said, cocking her head in surprise, "Munchkins?" Discord smiled, " They're my workers...they're very charming but, I must warn you, mischievous." Batty came in, smiling, "Yeah...and high-pitch voiced."

Then, Discord noticed Gian drinking like a pig from his chocolate river. This concerned Discord as he shouted at Gian, warningly, " Oh, Gian...please...I beg you don't do that. My chocolate must never be touched by human hands!" Gian stuck his tongue out. Dawn came up to Gian. Dawn said, "Uh, Gian...I think you should..." But then, Gian pushed Dawn causing the girl to fall on the river. Gian smirked, "Yes!" as he, Alvin, Brittany, and Sunset high-fived each other. Unfortunately for them, Dawn blindly grabbed Gian's legs, trying to get out. Gian snapped, "Hey! Let go! You little b-!" However, Gian, the clumsy oaf he was, fell down the Chocolate River and Dawn was able to get out on dry land.

In Dawn's pocket, the four shrunken friends were coughing out, except for Gwen, who was motionless. Trent ran up Gwen in concern, shouting, "Gwen!" He got her and began to shook her gently. Then, Gwen started to cough, regaining consciousness. Trent smiled, relieved to see his crush okay, and hugged her. Soul gave a discreet thumbs-up to Trent. Maka smiled at Gwen, "Gwen! Thank God!" Wide-Eyed, Gwen muttered, "I've never been so scared of Chocolate Milk before."

Dawn shook herself, drying herself up. Jonathon, Haruhiko, and the others ran up to Dawn as Haruhiko said, concerned for his oldest granddaughter, "Dawn! Are you okay?" Dawn nodded. However, Haruka shouted in fear, "My baby!!!" The tour looked at the chocolate river as Gian was starting to be sucked into the pipe. However, he got stuck into the pipe. Alvin said, concerned, "Think we can get him out?" Sunset winced, worried for the portly boy, "Don't know..." Then, to their shock, the Munchkins began to sing...much to the tour's shock. Brittany asked, confused, "They're singing...but why?" Discord said, "Oh, don’t worry, kids. It’s just them giving you a musical number for your dining pleasure." Then the Munchkins began to sing as they dropped their tools and danced around.

Munchkins : Gloop in soup, thar she blows, slowly up the pipe he goes.

To the mixing room he rises, hope that pipe can take all sizes.

If he listened he would not be heading for the fudging pot but he was
not obedient

Now he is an ingredient.

Cut, dice, mince, slice, time to make the fudge.

Churn, chop, pound, pop, time to make the fudge.

Snap, snip, whisk, whip, let your stomach be the judge.

Boil, Beat, hey, turn up the heat cause everyone loves fudge.

Haruka screamed in alarm as Gian shouted, "I'm stuck! Get me outta here!" Alvin shouted, "Try to release some gas, big guy!" Gian farted...unfortunately, it only got him more stuck and Brittany was disgusted.

Munchkins : Sayonara, Gian, it's time to say goodbye.

You great big greedy nincompoop it's time to fudgify.

You never tried to make a friend but now we'll have some fun.

For though your tour is at an end our joy has just begun.

Once ground, twice pound, time to make the fudge.

Stretch, strain, cause pain, time to make the fudge, I'm telling ya.

Sift, shake then we bake and stick it with a fork.

Don't throw away the scraps today cause we love candy pork.

As everybody, including Gian in his pipe prison, watched on in worry, the Munchkins began to dance with their tours and they started to swim safely on the Chocolate River.

Munchkins : Sayonara, Gian your tour is now complete.

You show the meaning to your group of you are what you eat.

It was then that Discord butted in, as he himself sang :

Discord : So mother courage you must show but please don't hold a grudge

'Cause as a boy he was so-so

Munchkins : But he makes tasty...

Then the Munchkins began to tap-dance an impressive moves as the pipes got worse and finally Gian was sent shooting up from the pipe to who-knows-where as the Munchkins did the finale.

Munchkins : Yes, he makes tasty..... (Haruka : GIIIIAAAAAN!!!!) Fudge!

Haruka shouted in alarm as the pipes left with her son, "What's happened to my baby boy?!" Batty said, rather bluntly, "Well, to the Fudge Room...to be made into fudge." Haruka fainted, dead on. Discord turned to a Munchkin as he said, "Munchkin. Take Mrs. Gouda to the Fudge Room to find her son."

Munchkin nodded and took Haruka, still unconscious, with him. Mel suggested, "On with the tour, Discord dear. We can't let one naughty kid ruin it for the other nice children." Discord nodded, "Okay, then, let's boogie." As the tour group went on, Jonathon said to Dawn, "Dawn, are you okay?" Dawn nodded, "Yes, don't worry. I am..." She looked at her pocket in discreet. Soul, Maka, Trent, and Gwen were sitting, recovering from their ordeal. Dawn sighed worriedly as the four friends shot concerned looks at Dawn. Dawn narrated, "Something wasn't right...something was going on...Gian tried to drown me and/or get me into trouble. Why? Maybe...they could be behind why I'm now a werewolf?"

Author's Notes:
Hey, guys. I'm on a roll here, which is pretty good in my opnionon. This could be my streak for now.
The songs that were presented in this chapter were Chocolate Rain sang by Tay Zonday...appareantly that song talks about racism of sorts..Pure Imagination from Willy Wonka and the Chocolate Factory and a parody of the original song "Auf Weidershcien, Agustus Gloop" from the Musical Version of Charlie and the Chocolate Factory.
The Munchkins are from the Wizard of Oz franchise.
Something fishy is going on...
I don't own the characters nor the songs. Dawn and Jonathan both belong to CherryGirlUK19.

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Dawn and the Chocolate Factory

Chapter Seven : The Chocolate Room and A Pig's Defeat

Discord was showing the group to the hallway and stopped at a small door. Discord announced it, "There it is...the entrance to the most important room in the factory." Alvin exclaimed in shock, "We'll never fit in there!" Jonathon nodded, "It's too small!" Discord smirked, got out a key, and opened th door. Upon opening the door, it revealed the most beautiful room yet. It had a chocolate waterfall and looked like a meadow, filled with candy-trees and goodies of sorts. Dawn smiled, "Awesome!" Gian muttered, awed, "Wow..." Discord announced, pride in his voice, "Behold, damas y caballeros...the Chocolate Room!"

Discord then began to explain, "The waterfall is the most important though. Mixes the chocolate, churns it up, makes it light and frothy. By the way…no other factory mixes its chocolate by waterfall and you can take that to the bank." It was then Haruhiko noticed some pipes overhead. It began to suck a bit of chocolate and took the chocolate to the room. He asked, "Discord, what are the pipes for?" Discord explained, "Those pipes suck up the chocolate and carry it away all over the factory. Thousands of gallons an hour. And do you like my meadow?" Batty said, in a coaxing tone, "Heck, try some of the grass."

Sunset said, surprised, "You mean the grass is edible, too?" Discord nodded as he smiled, "Why, everything in this room is edible, dear Sunset...except us..." Batty butted in, "That's canibalism. It's sick and very taboo. Don't do it." This concerned the kids as Batty said it. Discord noticed the uneasiness in the kids at Batty's comment before saying, "Still enjoy..."

This gave a greenlight to the tour as they happily began to sample the candies in the Chocolate Room. Then, with a snap of his fingers, Discord got to to rain....but rain chocolate milk, as he began to sing.

Discord : Chocolate Rain...some stay dry and others feel the pain

Chocolate Rain...a baby born will die before the sin

Choco-

"Wrong song!" Someone said, to Discord, making him pause, realizing that they had a point. Then, Discord began to sing again, this time the right song for this scene.

Discord : Come with me and you’ll be....In a world of pure imagination

Take a look and you’ll see...Into your imagination

We’ll begin with a spin....Trav’ling in the world of my creation

What we’ll see will defy...Explanation

The tour scattered off into different directions. Brittany went to a tree filled with gummy bears as she got a cherry-flavored one and began to eat it. Dawn was eagerly getting candy apples as she happily munched on one. Dawn noted, "Ooh, sure has a sweet taste..." She then put a small candy apple on her pocket, allowing Trent, Gwen, Soul, and Maka to eat a bit. Maka said, smiling with nostalgia, "I remember eating those candy apples when I was younger..." Sunset began to take another of those candy apples, but not before shooting a dirty look at Dawn.

Discord : If you want to view paradise....Simply look around and view it

Anything you want to, do it...Want to change the world

There’s nothing to it

There is no life I know....To compare with pure imagination

Living there, you’ll be free....If you truly wish to be

Haruhiko began to eat a mushroom, a candy one, though. Then, he gave some to Dawn and Jonathon, who eaggerly began to eat in happinness. Haruka was eating a candy cane, enjoying the flavor. It would be perfect for Christmas. Doug was munching politely on a chocolate ros. Gian was gobbling everything in sight, like Godzilla attacking Tokyo, even eating some bits of the grass. Mel cam up to Gian, and said out loud, "Well, the Chocolate River sure looks delish, Gian." Daphne watched in concern as Alvin started to beat a candy pumpkin with his leg. Dusk smiled wistfully as he started to eat a licorcioce.

Discord : If you want to view paradise....Simply look around and view it

Anything you want to, do it...Want to change the world

There’s nothing to it

There is no life I know....To compare with pure imagination

Living there, you’ll be free....If you truly wish to be

Discord began to stop at a bush of candy flowers as the song began to end. Discord started to drink from one of them. After they finished their cups, Discord ate the cup, much to Dawn's shock. Discord shrugged at the shocked girl, "Hey, the cup's edible." Dawn narrated, "Grandpa was right. Discord truly was a magician of sorts." Then, Jonathon noticed a group of creatures working around the factory. Jonaton asked Discord, "Who are they?" Mel came up, with a witty smirk, "I see you've met the Munchkins." Dawn said, cocking her head in surprise, "Munchkins?" Discord smiled, " They're my workers...they're very charming but, I must warn you, mischievous." Batty came in, smiling, "Yeah...and high-pitch voiced."

Then, Discord noticed Gian drinking like a pig from his chocolate river. This concerned Discord as he shouted at Gian, warningly, " Oh, Gian...please...I beg you don't do that. My chocolate must never be touched by human hands!" Gian stuck his tongue out. Dawn came up to Gian. Dawn said, "Uh, Gian...I think you should..." But then, Gian pushed Dawn causing the girl to fall on the river. Gian smirked, "Yes!" as he, Alvin, Brittany, and Sunset high-fived each other. Unfortunately for them, Dawn blindly grabbed Gian's legs, trying to get out. Gian snapped, "Hey! Let go! You little b-!" However, Gian, the clumsy oaf he was, fell down the Chocolate River and Dawn was able to get out on dry land.

In Dawn's pocket, the four shrunken friends were coughing out, except for Gwen, who was motionless. Trent ran up Gwen in concern, shouting, "Gwen!" He got her and began to shook her gently. Then, Gwen started to cough, regaining consciousness. Trent smiled, relieved to see his crush okay, and hugged her. Soul gave a discreet thumbs-up to Trent. Maka smiled at Gwen, "Gwen! Thank God!" Wide-Eyed, Gwen muttered, "I've never been so scared of Chocolate Milk before."

Dawn shook herself, drying herself up. Jonathon, Haruhiko, and the others ran up to Dawn as Haruhiko said, concerned for his oldest granddaughter, "Dawn! Are you okay?" Dawn nodded. However, Haruka shouted in fear, "My baby!!!" The tour looked at the chocolate river as Gian was starting to be sucked into the pipe. However, he got stuck into the pipe. Alvin said, concerned, "Think we can get him out?" Sunset winced, worried for the portly boy, "Don't know..." Then, to their shock, the Munchkins began to sing...much to the tour's shock. Brittany asked, confused, "They're singing...but why?" Discord said, "Oh, don’t worry, kids. It’s just them giving you a musical number for your dining pleasure." Then the Munchkins began to sing as they dropped their tools and danced around.

Munchkins : Gloop in soup, thar she blows, slowly up the pipe he goes.

To the mixing room he rises, hope that pipe can take all sizes.

If he listened he would not be heading for the fudging pot but he was
not obedient

Now he is an ingredient.

Cut, dice, mince, slice, time to make the fudge.

Churn, chop, pound, pop, time to make the fudge.

Snap, snip, whisk, whip, let your stomach be the judge.

Boil, Beat, hey, turn up the heat cause everyone loves fudge.

Haruka screamed in alarm as Gian shouted, "I'm stuck! Get me outta here!" Alvin shouted, "Try to release some gas, big guy!" Gian farted...unfortunately, it only got him more stuck and Brittany was disgusted.

Munchkins : Sayonara, Gian, it's time to say goodbye.

You great big greedy nincompoop it's time to fudgify.

You never tried to make a friend but now we'll have some fun.

For though your tour is at an end our joy has just begun.

Once ground, twice pound, time to make the fudge.

Stretch, strain, cause pain, time to make the fudge, I'm telling ya.

Sift, shake then we bake and stick it with a fork.

Don't throw away the scraps today cause we love candy pork.

As everybody, including Gian in his pipe prison, watched on in worry, the Munchkins began to dance with their tours and they started to swim safely on the Chocolate River.

Munchkins : Sayonara, Gian your tour is now complete.

You show the meaning to your group of you are what you eat.

It was then that Discord butted in, as he himself sang :

Discord : So mother courage you must show but please don't hold a grudge

'Cause as a boy he was so-so

Munchkins : But he makes tasty...

Then the Munchkins began to tap-dance an impressive moves as the pipes got worse and finally Gian was sent shooting up from the pipe to who-knows-where as the Munchkins did the finale.

Munchkins : Yes, he makes tasty..... (Haruka : GIIIIAAAAAN!!!!) Fudge!

Haruka shouted in alarm as the pipes left with her son, "What's happened to my baby boy?!" Batty said, rather bluntly, "Well, to the Fudge Room...to be made into fudge." Haruka fainted, dead on. Discord turned to a Munchkin as he said, "Munchkin. Take Mrs. Gouda to the Fudge Room to find her son."

Munchkin nodded and took Haruka, still unconscious, with him. Mel suggested, "On with the tour, Discord dear. We can't let one naughty kid ruin it for the other nice children." Discord nodded, "Okay, then, let's boogie." As the tour group went on, Jonathon said to Dawn, "Dawn, are you okay?" Dawn nodded, "Yes, don't worry. I am..." She looked at her pocket in discreet. Soul, Maka, Trent, and Gwen were sitting, recovering from their ordeal. Dawn sighed worriedly as the four friends shot concerned looks at Dawn. Dawn narrated, "Something wasn't right...something was going on...Gian tried to drown me and/or get me into trouble. Why? Maybe...they could be behind why I'm now a werewolf?"

Author's Notes:
Hey, guys. I'm on a roll here, which is pretty good in my opnionon. This could be my streak for now.
The songs that were presented in this chapter were Chocolate Rain sang by Tay Zonday...appareantly that song talks about racism of sorts..Pure Imagination from Willy Wonka and the Chocolate Factory and a parody of the original song "Auf Weidershcien, Agustus Gloop" from the Musical Version of Charlie and the Chocolate Factory.
The Munchkins are from the Wizard of Oz franchise.
Something fishy is going on...
I don't own the characters nor the songs. Dawn and Jonathan both belong to CherryGirlUK19.