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Demachic — When I cannot sleep

Published: 2011-05-14 11:55:02 +0000 UTC; Views: 59661; Favourites: 3629; Downloads: 142
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Description Poem about not being able to sleep like you could when you were a kid. =]


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Wolfie-Okami [2012-01-23 04:04:18 +0000 UTC]

This always happens to me.
Great poem.

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Demachic In reply to Wolfie-Okami [2012-03-31 15:04:08 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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Sabrillian [2012-01-01 17:52:11 +0000 UTC]

I love your poems~
I'm going through a stressful time right now, so falling asleep is pretty hard for me. :/

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Demachic In reply to Sabrillian [2012-01-09 23:02:55 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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catapuss27 [2011-11-22 21:21:36 +0000 UTC]

lul love this XD

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devulheart [2011-11-17 12:44:24 +0000 UTC]

this is so me.

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JJinxx [2011-11-07 18:46:20 +0000 UTC]

i've always had difficulty falling asleep - even as a little kid!

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JJinxx [2011-11-07 18:46:15 +0000 UTC]

i've always had difficulty falling asleep - even as a little kid!

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EternalMischief [2011-11-06 03:59:26 +0000 UTC]

That is so damn true!
But Day dreaming dose help though

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ImaginationOfMine [2011-11-05 06:11:15 +0000 UTC]

Wow... I totally relate to this. Like right now, I planned to be asleep.. But, alas, I am not. hmmm

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sweetsongbird [2011-11-01 23:03:08 +0000 UTC]

Ikr ;_;

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SweetPie10 [2011-10-29 15:41:27 +0000 UTC]

This is so true!

Even when I was a kid I could hardly sleep.I was so hyper back then.

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Buckykatt42 [2011-10-21 02:00:52 +0000 UTC]

I can totally relate to this sometimes I lie awake for 2 or 3 hours before I can get to sleep.

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horselover24-7 [2011-10-21 00:04:03 +0000 UTC]

So true!

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kryzteenah [2011-10-20 07:18:35 +0000 UTC]

Oh so true! My sleep cycle is stuffed! I miss being able to sleep earlier than 10.30pm haha!

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kitty12197 [2011-10-19 19:55:08 +0000 UTC]

All your poems are so good! They're so true and easy to relate to!

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MewJenz In reply to ??? [2011-10-19 18:18:22 +0000 UTC]

One of the good things about staying as a child. And I plan to stay as one for the rest of my life( or at least try QAQ )

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CometTheVulpix [2011-10-19 06:36:24 +0000 UTC]

I had the complete opposite, to be honest. I could never fall asleep when I was a little kid, but now I'm a teenager, it takes a few minutes. Try daydreaming during the hour before you want to fall asleep, particularly when you're laying down. Apparently it forces your mind to slow down. I don't know if that's true, but it works for me. ^^"

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duskflight03 In reply to ??? [2011-10-19 03:20:05 +0000 UTC]

Lol, so I'm NOT the only one xD
Nice poem, btw(:

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BradlinaOKD [2011-10-19 02:30:11 +0000 UTC]

I understand.... o_o

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SweetSarah96 In reply to ??? [2011-10-19 01:28:34 +0000 UTC]

your an amazing poet I'm kindof jealous

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Chic53465 [2011-10-17 02:28:12 +0000 UTC]

I love your poems!
There's such an honesty to them that I find hilarious.

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Demachic In reply to Chic53465 [2011-10-18 18:36:07 +0000 UTC]

Thanks a lot!

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KristieConspiracy In reply to ??? [2011-10-07 16:05:42 +0000 UTC]

Haha, I'm about to endure this, myself. ^^

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Demachic In reply to KristieConspiracy [2011-10-15 12:26:46 +0000 UTC]

Ahww

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SpecificSleep In reply to ??? [2011-09-25 04:07:39 +0000 UTC]

I hate when this happens... :/

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Demachic In reply to SpecificSleep [2011-10-15 12:26:40 +0000 UTC]

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shortcutebubbly [2011-09-07 12:09:08 +0000 UTC]

This one made me smile, and it fits how I try to sleep exactly

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rarino In reply to ??? [2011-09-05 21:57:32 +0000 UTC]

this is totally me.
i'm a zombie

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xXSellChanXx [2011-09-05 00:43:31 +0000 UTC]

This happens to me everyday and people wonder why I look like a zombie in the morning

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Guns-n-Horses In reply to ??? [2011-09-03 10:28:54 +0000 UTC]

You're really awesome at poems

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SeikaKitsune [2011-08-31 19:15:27 +0000 UTC]

Once agin, I can completly relate..
Its like you know my life XD

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elemental-heiress In reply to ??? [2011-08-30 05:46:11 +0000 UTC]

Very relatable and cute <3

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animeafterlife [2011-08-30 03:14:15 +0000 UTC]

so true , so true

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chibijax In reply to ??? [2011-08-22 22:51:33 +0000 UTC]

I know the feeling. T.T

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StumpyTheStump [2011-08-21 23:57:00 +0000 UTC]

Feeling the same way. I love your poems.

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LaurenPixiedust In reply to ??? [2011-08-21 17:47:33 +0000 UTC]

Your poems are so cute and inspiring, I love them!

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dragonblood925 [2011-08-21 17:14:53 +0000 UTC]

how did you get your other poems in the artist comments?

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Darren-Shan-07 In reply to ??? [2011-08-21 15:04:08 +0000 UTC]

This defines my life right now. I havent slept properly in weeks. Haha. :/

On another note, I've read all your poems - you're very good at them! They're sort of unusual and very charming

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C-A-Visualizations [2011-08-21 09:02:44 +0000 UTC]

This particular piece speaks to me.

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werekitty13 [2011-08-21 07:25:30 +0000 UTC]

You must have the same problems as me.

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Laitaliel In reply to ??? [2011-08-21 05:20:30 +0000 UTC]

I completely understand! I have trouble sleeping a lot of the time.
This is good, your poems are really cute!

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Experimential-Curios In reply to ??? [2011-08-21 04:32:35 +0000 UTC]

All of your poems are just so simple, cute and pleasant . I'm usually the type to read more edgar allen poe and what not but your poems remind me of reading shel silverstien as a kid x3. I can't wait to read more.

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xgothteapartyx In reply to Experimential-Curios [2011-08-21 06:08:21 +0000 UTC]

i totally agree

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kaceycorn In reply to ??? [2011-08-21 03:46:58 +0000 UTC]

STORY OF MY LIFE!!!!

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Dancing-Kiwi In reply to ??? [2011-08-21 03:00:45 +0000 UTC]

I love the lightheartedness (If that is a word--oh well, I'm MAKING it a word) of this poem, and I have to imagine this messy-haired, exhaused girl saying in a tired, high-pitched voice: "Oh well, I hope to be out by three!"

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LesbianForRukia [2011-08-21 01:48:18 +0000 UTC]

All the time. All the time.

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mangaauthor1-20 In reply to ??? [2011-08-20 23:03:49 +0000 UTC]

haha, thats me! i never sleep.

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KikSter11XxKikixX [2011-08-20 22:17:41 +0000 UTC]

It's like you read my mind!!! I mean...I take like three or more hours trying to close my eyes...it's so tiring! Now that I'm older, I guess, I've been thinking a little bit more.

Your poems are awesome, by the way.

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Crazyblondegal In reply to ??? [2011-08-20 22:17:27 +0000 UTC]

Great poem! And i can relate to it :')

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