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Demachic — When I cannot sleep

Published: 2011-05-14 11:55:02 +0000 UTC; Views: 59659; Favourites: 3629; Downloads: 142
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Description Poem about not being able to sleep like you could when you were a kid. =]


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AriannaTheKeybearer [2011-08-20 21:07:18 +0000 UTC]

I still get like 9-11 hours, but it seems to be more of a chore to fall asleep now. Malevolent thoughts and images go through my head and appear in small sillouettes in the dark by the way my eyes are shaping them, and scare me to death. It's those times I wish there were such thing as a little crystal you could wear around your neck to light up the area around you just so, so you can feel safe.

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LaughterLover In reply to ??? [2011-08-20 21:02:58 +0000 UTC]

This is awesome! i thought I wasw alone in the could sleep once but not anymore thing. Yay! Your poems are very beautiful.

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DemonLoveAngel [2011-08-20 20:22:13 +0000 UTC]

Oh my god XD This is too ture. *sigh* it times like these where I miss nap time in Kindergarten. XP

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tenshi-sama-konan In reply to ??? [2011-08-20 18:40:40 +0000 UTC]

if only i could get the sleep i got then.....i am lucky to get five hours somedays
great poem

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MediocreTalent [2011-08-20 07:10:49 +0000 UTC]

so true :/ great poem! Cute style!

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Demachic In reply to MediocreTalent [2011-08-20 15:24:52 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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MediocreTalent In reply to Demachic [2011-08-20 18:23:52 +0000 UTC]

you're welcome!

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komod800 [2011-08-18 01:39:48 +0000 UTC]

SOOOO true! This is a masterpiece!

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Demachic In reply to komod800 [2011-08-20 15:15:21 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much!

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komod800 In reply to Demachic [2011-08-20 19:47:04 +0000 UTC]

you're welcome!

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Alternativeproject [2011-08-10 15:04:00 +0000 UTC]

i have the same problem :/ i think except i'm usually up way past 3 i just don't stop thinking! and then i sleep too late and my internal clock is messed up, it's just a mess. this is cute btw.

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Rainbow-Specialist [2011-08-08 08:35:03 +0000 UTC]

If this was a song, I could sing it with meaning. I totally have the same insomnia d: This is awesome~

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Loobie101 [2011-08-05 01:30:59 +0000 UTC]

i love your style

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i-lie [2011-07-31 17:42:56 +0000 UTC]

You're cute I like it

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Peaniko [2011-07-31 05:31:14 +0000 UTC]

Ohhh I can never sleep haha. And I find I enjoy your poems more when I read them aloud.

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rebeccapark9 [2011-07-30 23:55:32 +0000 UTC]

stalks *watches*

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rebeccapark9 In reply to rebeccapark9 [2011-07-30 23:56:04 +0000 UTC]

where do you get the font btw? it's a really nice poem too, I like the little doodles at the ending

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cupcakeattack [2011-07-30 22:18:00 +0000 UTC]

This is exactly what I'm going through and it's all thanks to this run down beat up laptop of mine.

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Kruci In reply to ??? [2011-07-27 23:26:36 +0000 UTC]

Aww that so cute and it happens to me all of the time >:\
It's especially annoying if I can't wait for tomorrow. The little doodle at the end is also adorable <3

P.S if you don't mind me asking, how do you get the white outline around the different colors?

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Demachic In reply to Kruci [2011-07-30 15:00:03 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much!

If you have photoshop, what you do is go under 'Edit' and find 'Stroke' and just choose how many pixels, like 10px and the colour.

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Kruci In reply to Demachic [2011-07-30 20:22:22 +0000 UTC]

Thank you for taking the time to reply back <3
I always see different artists use that and I've always been curious.

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photographer7777 [2011-07-27 04:42:16 +0000 UTC]

LOL I'm about to go to sleep now. This is probably what will happen. I love your poems! I especially love that you even add color!

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Demachic In reply to photographer7777 [2011-07-27 22:13:10 +0000 UTC]

Thanks a lot!!

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photographer7777 In reply to Demachic [2011-07-28 00:06:37 +0000 UTC]

Welcome!

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Yaki-Kodauze In reply to ??? [2011-07-27 01:09:24 +0000 UTC]

Argh... this expresses my feelings these past few months to the T...

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Demachic In reply to Yaki-Kodauze [2011-07-27 22:13:01 +0000 UTC]

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peanutbutterangel In reply to ??? [2011-07-26 22:22:57 +0000 UTC]

i hate when that happens. last night, i couldn't sleep, so i read, which helps. the problem, though, is i can't stop at a good part or i'll just keep thinking about it, so i ended up reading till 3.30

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Pocky-Taichou-Chan [2011-07-26 19:19:58 +0000 UTC]

These are the cutest, most colorful poems ever. X3

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Demachic In reply to Pocky-Taichou-Chan [2011-07-27 22:12:52 +0000 UTC]

THanks a lot! C:

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Pocky-Taichou-Chan In reply to Demachic [2011-07-28 00:10:06 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome.

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veritas-found In reply to ??? [2011-07-26 01:48:34 +0000 UTC]

Dude. I love the poem, to be sure, but I love your presentation as well. I love the highlighted words, the little doodle, the font - it's a unique way to publish your poems (vs. the traditional text-only you see so often). Great job!

~ Ver

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Demachic In reply to veritas-found [2011-07-26 03:24:00 +0000 UTC]

Thanks a lot (:

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brokenwings101 In reply to ??? [2011-07-25 05:11:58 +0000 UTC]

the best way to avoid that is to just lay and clear your mind. do not think about sleeping or how much you really want to go to sleep, and don't try too hard or it'd be pointless. it works.


annnnnd i love your poems. the colors give it some character and the little pictures you draw on the bottom are too cute!

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Demachic In reply to brokenwings101 [2011-07-26 03:23:48 +0000 UTC]

Ahw thank you!! ; u ;

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brokenwings101 In reply to Demachic [2011-07-26 03:51:37 +0000 UTC]

no problem

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AvalancheGP [2011-07-15 06:46:06 +0000 UTC]

I have the same with sleeping. Just a minor noise and I'm up again.
I love the way how you visualize your poems, wonderfully done!

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Mizu-chanxthexshadow In reply to ??? [2011-07-08 02:35:51 +0000 UTC]

I know that feeling all to well

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Pandabeary [2011-07-08 01:54:01 +0000 UTC]

IKR I USED TO BE ABLEE TO SLEEP EASILY, but now fjakdsjf suckss, stupid insomnia .

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AnnieBear91 In reply to ??? [2011-07-07 23:16:39 +0000 UTC]

The rhyth in your poems remind me of a.a milne's poetry

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WolfGirl643 [2011-07-07 22:26:31 +0000 UTC]

haha, thats so me

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SparkleStars724 [2011-07-07 20:48:33 +0000 UTC]

Exactly me! haha last night i planned to fall asleep around ten, but i couldn't until almost 3 OTL

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Eragon-vs-Murtagh In reply to ??? [2011-07-07 20:44:54 +0000 UTC]

I've had trouble getting to sleep ever since i can remember. one time i stopped reading at about 2:00 in them morning and lay there for 3 hours before i got to sleep!

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Garanta In reply to ??? [2011-07-07 20:44:46 +0000 UTC]

... I hate it. I just hate it. I can't fall asleep, but I'm ALWAYS late for school, because I can't wake up. It's horrible. It made me miss a freakin field trip because I missed the bus.
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I'm still sad bout that xD

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karusazu In reply to ??? [2011-07-07 20:19:18 +0000 UTC]

i friggen love your poems :3 they make me all happy and stuff

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LakeLove In reply to ??? [2011-07-07 19:30:21 +0000 UTC]

ugh, the story of my life!

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fan-of-hinata-chan In reply to ??? [2011-07-07 16:42:52 +0000 UTC]

Lovely poem and it so true!!!

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Giffin2 [2011-07-07 15:25:26 +0000 UTC]

I used to have that problem. But not cuz of stress- I had insomnia! XD It sucked!

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froggermea96 In reply to ??? [2011-07-07 07:48:34 +0000 UTC]

same exact way happened to me yesterday. went to bed at 8 so i can fall asleep by 10 ended up falling asleep at 4

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KristyRevels [2011-07-07 07:46:39 +0000 UTC]

haha i feel like that ALL the time. great poem!

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xroxy101x In reply to ??? [2011-07-07 06:09:14 +0000 UTC]

Yeah,I have the same problem..:/

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