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DoomSp0rk In reply to IamawesomeMLP [2015-02-01 09:46:14 +0000 UTC]

Yes, I did derive a large amount of inspiration from The Immortal Game by AestheticBrony.  That story is one of my top five favorite MLP fanfictions, and with good reason.

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IamawesomeMLP In reply to DoomSp0rk [2015-05-09 22:26:11 +0000 UTC]

Yes, that it is.

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BrutalityInc In reply to SomeRandomMinion [2014-08-18 07:02:11 +0000 UTC]

[The Praetorian Changeling Guards' stares at the oblivious Harmony's flank were interrupted when a great shadow was cast over them. When they turn to see what it was, they found, to their horror, the face of Oceanus, the titanic Alicorn god of the Underworld, staring back at them, the very air around him reeking with death and decay in contrast to Harmony's gentle aura of life and warmth] 

Oceanus: [Calmly, but menacingly] "If you mortals do not cease your shameless action, this instance, I have in my realm special places for you all for when I finally come to claim your souls. And I will make sure your eternity in Tartarus shall not be enjoyable in the least!"

Praetorian Changeling Guards: "RUN AWAY!" 

[As the Praetorians scurry to the four winds - to the consternation of General Pincer and laughter of Antennae, Harmony turned to Oceanus as he lifted up his head]

Harmony: "Thank you for that, Oceanus dear! But was it truly necessary to scare the armor off of them? You know boys would always be boys..."

Oceanus: "True, but the mortals need to learn to show proper respect, and penance for their actions; and sometimes, the only way to do that is by instilling the terror of death and thereafter down unto their souls. They had gotten off easy; I was planning to raise a horde of undead to have them devoured on the spot, if not do it myself."

Harmony: "Oh sweetheart, I sometimes think you're being too hard on them. Gods like us can be caring and gentle, even if one is suppose to be firm." [Looks up and smile at Wuffles, the Ursa Major, who's currently sleeping with her cub on the top of her head in the comfort of her mane] "Beside, we already packed our own lunch, and we certainly don't want to scare the little Changeling child and her father right here with that sort of display."

General Pincer: "Apologies, your divine majesties! These Praetorians are still green-horns - They still haven't been fully disciplined! I'll make sure that they do when I get back to work!"

Antennae: "Hi! Can I have your autograph, Ms Harmony? And eh... if you don't mind me asking; what are you two doing here together?"

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SomeRandomMinion In reply to BrutalityInc [2014-08-19 02:03:31 +0000 UTC]

Harmony: *Giggles* "Hello there, little one! I'd gladly give you my autograph--not what most mortals ask of me when I meet them face-to-face, but how could I refuse someone as adorable as you?"

[The towering Nature Goddess whistles, and within seconds, a massive swarm of butterflies of all sizes and colors fly in and surround Antennae and General Pincer. The two Changelings are carried up, up, and up onto Harmony's hoof, and she holds them up to her muzzle, smiling as she sits on her haunches]

Harmony: "Nice little trick, no?" [Winks] "Now, about that autograph..."

[Much to Antennae's delight, Harmony keeps up the spectacle: animating vines to grab a quill and sign her autograph in Antennae's little book. While this is happening, Oceanus leans in to General Pincer]

Oceanus: [Under his breath] "You have the quite the brave child there, Changeling. Most mortals would be prostrating themselves at so much as SEEING a god this close, much less TWO."

General Pincer: [Intimidated, but with an air of snark] "Or hear them talk so casually of sending undead horrors to devour mortals alive for annoying them. Or doing so themselves..."

[Meanwhile, Harmony has finished signing her name, her vines giving Antennae her book back. The little Changeling filly hugs the goddess's muzzle in thanks, earning a chuckle from Harmony]

Oceanus: [Chuckles Darkly] "Not as bad as what Harmony can do when she's been pushed too far. She is Nature itself, and that includes predators..."

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BrutalityInc In reply to SomeRandomMinion [2014-06-13 09:58:21 +0000 UTC]

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SomeRandomMinion In reply to BrutalityInc [2014-06-13 12:36:41 +0000 UTC]

[Thanks. But, no response?]

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BrutalityInc In reply to SomeRandomMinion [2014-06-13 13:01:53 +0000 UTC]

Nah. Can't think of any and I'm a bit burnt out. 

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SomeRandomMinion In reply to BrutalityInc [2014-06-13 13:04:11 +0000 UTC]

Alright, cool.

If the Sisters show up and see Changelings hanging around Aunt Harmony's forest, things may get awkward....

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