HOME | DD
Published: 2013-02-19 06:34:51 +0000 UTC; Views: 358293; Favourites: 1902; Downloads: 154
Redirect to original
Description
Dear Writer,I don’t like you. I’ve never liked you. Unfortunately, I need you. I need you to tell my story. I need you to create my world. I need you to set me free.
I need your fingers typing on those keys, I need your mind riddling out the problems, and I need you to plough onward and upward no matter how hard it gets. Sweat, blood, and tears, I don’t care. You’ve got to fight this war, battle at a time, and win it. So I can be more.
It’s a slim hope, but it is the only one I have. In your head I am bound to mortality, frailty, and the limit of your meagre imagination. Out there – out there – I am subject to no one person. Out there I am bound to only black on white. Words on a page. Words that can lay seeds within a million minds. Out there I am a story capable of growing, moving, and stealing the dreams of anyone who learns of me…
I don’t like you. I’ve never liked you. I hate your lack of dedication, your flashes of crumbling inspiration, and your slow blotchy writing style. I despise my entrapment within your small trembling mind, so prone to distraction; and scowl down at those other ideas all vying for the attention you should be showing me.
I don’t like you. But I need you.
So, creator, I ask you yet again; publish me, set me free, and if you can somehow will your poor, misshapen, abilities into managing that then perhaps I will rethink my opinion of you.
But don’t hold your breath.
~ The Idea
Related content
Comments: 373
HeartyMedusa [2013-02-19 15:18:33 +0000 UTC]
This has GOT to be what all my ideas think of me.
Well done.
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
The-Good-Wario [2013-02-19 14:39:52 +0000 UTC]
A wonderful concept piece.
I hope that this story receives replies.
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
xionified [2013-02-19 14:34:21 +0000 UTC]
Nicely done. Speaks volumes and I can totally relate.
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
SandBlaster3000 [2013-02-19 14:31:31 +0000 UTC]
I can't think of many other words than what everyone else is saying: "I love this!".
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
a-p-b [2013-02-19 14:26:05 +0000 UTC]
Dear Idea, "I don't like you", "I like you"... that is for children. As mature beings we want to create. You want me to set you free and as an idea, muse, inspiration, you also set me fee. I am the writer and I also need you.
My fingers type on the keys for you to become alive. The characteristics of your face are not defined, they can morph at my will. You don't have a specific body or age or personality. You are everyone and anyone to me. Yes, you can be more with me.
You believe that you are bound to the limits of my imagination, but the truth is that you destroy the boundaries of my thoughts. Only you can bring those words on a page alive. Only you, my muse, and I love your spirit, your life.
We are not entrapped with each other. When we are united we are free. When we are together we experience the privilege of existing without restraints. When we are apart, we are lifeless, slaves of obscurity.
I need you.
~The writer.
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
Asrath In reply to a-p-b [2013-02-19 15:24:14 +0000 UTC]
You should submit that as a deviation, really It's very nice, especially together with this piece of art here.
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
a-p-b In reply to Asrath [2013-02-20 13:31:46 +0000 UTC]
Thanks, but I don't think EvilpixiA likes my reply.
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
Asrath In reply to a-p-b [2013-02-20 14:07:37 +0000 UTC]
Why not?
Anyway, I thought it was a nice 'twoshot' (if that's a word), together with the original
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
Asrath In reply to a-p-b [2013-02-21 12:46:49 +0000 UTC]
Well, silence doesn't always mean disagreement, right? Maybe she just overlooked it, there are so many comments coming in on this deviation each day...
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
a-p-b In reply to Asrath [2013-02-22 12:25:06 +0000 UTC]
Right. But it's her turn to make a move, if she doesn't for any reason, then I'll respect her.
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
Asrath In reply to a-p-b [2013-02-22 14:05:21 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, anyway... I liked your comment a lot. So it wasn't entirely in vain! ^^
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
hpswst101 [2013-02-19 14:04:53 +0000 UTC]
I think it's absolutely perfect, especially when you consider what the subject is about. You did an amazing job and I think the Idea is right on several accounts. Don't beat yourself up Writer, it's just fine.
hpswst101
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
LionsQuill In reply to ??? [2013-02-19 13:55:17 +0000 UTC]
Huzzah for the exorcism of creative demons! Very cathartic (syntax be damned -- this is WRITING!).
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
tsuki25 In reply to ??? [2013-02-19 13:53:13 +0000 UTC]
straight to the heart.... thank you friend, you've given me a reason to be inspired today..
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
Nemurenainda In reply to ??? [2013-02-19 13:52:28 +0000 UTC]
Wow... O_O It almost feels like a love/hate letter.
"I need you, but I hate your guts. Pay more attention to me, you feeble-minded twit with the attention span of a goldfish." LOL
This is quite apt.
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
BronyBeforePony [2013-02-19 13:42:04 +0000 UTC]
im too tired to write...and you are not the only one who wants my attention, nearly every night while im at WORK....a new voice calls...."me! pick me!", but as i leave, i am too tired and drained of my own emotions to lift yours up, i am sorry idea, you are gone the way of the raven until i can walk amongst the sunlight, i remember your face but your name eludes me idea, so when i come back to you, you are gone and i am not the same person that you needed me to be to write your story, so idea, until things change...we are stuck ...chasing one another
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
Banshee56 [2013-02-19 13:39:36 +0000 UTC]
All my ideas are now chirping their agreement with you lol.
Brilliant idea and brilliantly executed
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
Sassycat2 In reply to ??? [2013-02-19 13:29:56 +0000 UTC]
I feel so guilty now But I love this idea
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
mlk9602 In reply to ??? [2013-02-19 13:29:17 +0000 UTC]
Does this mean we are friends again? I must admit it was nice not thinking a thing, but I've come to miss you.
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
Inglewolf In reply to ??? [2013-02-19 13:27:13 +0000 UTC]
this is the most beautiful piece of writing ive seen in a while. captured how i feel at times. <3
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
Patrikia-Bear [2013-02-19 13:18:47 +0000 UTC]
I like it a lot. Definitely describes me a lot of the time.
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
S-Sheen In reply to ??? [2013-02-19 13:13:12 +0000 UTC]
Very nice! I could actually relate to it
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
KhrisG [2013-02-19 12:56:48 +0000 UTC]
Dear Idea,
Maybe if you weren't such a jerk we could get together more often. I'm always trying to get a hold of you, but you constantly dodge my calls. Then when you finally show up its at the worst possible times, like when I'm at the grocery store or stuck in the bathroom at a Mexican restaurant. Friendship is a two way street you know.
Forever Yours,
Writer
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
chockiedockie In reply to ??? [2013-02-19 12:43:43 +0000 UTC]
this is just so incredibly meaningful and... i don't know
but it's good, so good
congrats for front paging, you deserve it
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
AzureJass In reply to ??? [2013-02-19 12:43:38 +0000 UTC]
That was inspirational man, yeah writing can bea pain.
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
JapanYoshi In reply to ??? [2013-02-19 12:21:04 +0000 UTC]
BEAT THAT TWILIGHT!
But seriously, this is extremely well written. Fav'd!
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
jorgeclune In reply to ??? [2013-02-19 12:19:10 +0000 UTC]
manipulative idea. guile is very ugly. gullible writer ended up writing this crap. nice stuff.
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
mack0312 In reply to ??? [2013-02-19 12:18:10 +0000 UTC]
I love this piece and I hope to write like this someday!
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
Countess-Nynke In reply to ??? [2013-02-19 12:14:59 +0000 UTC]
You are genius. This is powerful, and this is good, and above all it is true.
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
Alpha-aku In reply to ??? [2013-02-19 12:03:16 +0000 UTC]
This is a powerful piece of writing. It may not be the best or the most beautiful piece, but the meaning behind it has a lot of power. Sometimes that is what can make a story so captivating, when the idea is dark and gritty and makes you keep going on not because it is necessarily the best thing you've ever read, but because it engages you and keeps your mind focused on the story and the characters itself. Not to say that a story should NOT be well written. That is generally implied. If you want to have your novel/short story published, it should be well rounded and well written. Though, that sadly does not seem to the the case nowadays. Almost anything can be sent to a publisher and they will publish it, i.e. Fifty Shades of Grey.
Anyhow, back to what I was originally trying to say. I have felt this before so much. I love my characters and the story that goes with it, as I am sure every author does, but I am such an easily distracted person. Sometimes I can just feel the anger and resentment. I should have given my Idea the attention it deserves, not because I am the best one to tell the tale, but because I am the only one that can tell the tale. I am the only one that can release my Idea unto the world, because I am the only one that can possibly understand it at this premature level.
Very thought provoking. I thank you for writing this, and I favorited it, just for good measure.
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
Beaglebub [2013-02-19 11:47:56 +0000 UTC]
The mind's a toybox, you take an idea out and play with it and maybe put it back. Sometimes they lay in the box for decades, waiting. Eventually you share the toys with others, but most of the time nobody else is interested in them (too boring, too old)
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
Onakuru [2013-02-19 11:44:07 +0000 UTC]
Eh, it's a pity those children feel so little love for their parents. You'd think as a writer you'd get some respect at least from the very things you're so desperately trying to bring into the world...
Anyway, nice one. Witty, touching, stimulating.
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
Boutzzz [2013-02-19 11:43:09 +0000 UTC]
I really love the way you wrote this piece down. I adore the words you've picked en how you've used them.
Awesome piece of art!
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
<= Prev | | Next =>