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ExplodedPineapple — Path to Chaos Chp 1 Pg 7

Published: 2013-02-22 17:13:55 +0000 UTC; Views: 3659; Favourites: 27; Downloads: 0
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Description Guess what? Page time! Had been a while since the last page. Reason this took so long: Re-sketched several times, scrapped, started over, loosing motivation, no time, style-change. Oh well. But here it is! The next page! The next one will probably have another background-style. At least, that s what I m hoping!
So, here we have some childish playing around - and a bunch of irony!

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ExplodedPineapple In reply to ??? [2013-02-25 16:19:49 +0000 UTC]

"I shouldn t listen to myself, I m drunk!" - Oh Homer, you will never learn your lesson! (well, that s what will keep us laughing!)

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BigMaleforFan In reply to ExplodedPineapple [2013-02-25 17:36:50 +0000 UTC]

just watched the episode where marge forces everyone to go to church , and everyone's falling asleep , and then marge herself falls asleep !!!!!!

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ExplodedPineapple In reply to BigMaleforFan [2013-02-25 18:07:19 +0000 UTC]

Haha, is that the one with the bible-dreams?

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BigMaleforFan In reply to ExplodedPineapple [2013-02-25 18:47:22 +0000 UTC]

no it's the episode in which marge becomes the new reverend .

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ExplodedPineapple In reply to BigMaleforFan [2013-02-26 19:04:01 +0000 UTC]

Ah, that one! Okay, I m mixing things up again!

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BigMaleforFan In reply to ExplodedPineapple [2013-02-26 19:49:20 +0000 UTC]

hey you mixing things up has introduced me to somethings entirely new !!!! it's not so bad !!!

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ExplodedPineapple In reply to BigMaleforFan [2013-02-26 19:52:22 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, my brain is a big, messy library: There is lot s of information there, but mostly sorted by topics, not the actual belonging.

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BigMaleforFan In reply to ExplodedPineapple [2013-02-26 19:55:09 +0000 UTC]

yay for the otherly sorted yet no less cool brain of you !!!!!
( even i can't understand what i wrote !!!! )

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ExplodedPineapple In reply to BigMaleforFan [2013-02-26 19:57:13 +0000 UTC]

haha, but at least, it s working on full capacity again! I have some real boring work right now, so I spend most of the time day-freaming. A few nice ideas are already forming!

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BigMaleforFan In reply to ExplodedPineapple [2013-02-27 09:53:19 +0000 UTC]

amen to that !!! a few nice ideas eh ? can't wait to see them in action !!!

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ExplodedPineapple In reply to BigMaleforFan [2013-02-27 16:42:53 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, but they will all be in the last chapters, so patience with that

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BigMaleforFan In reply to ExplodedPineapple [2013-02-27 18:21:27 +0000 UTC]

remember asuka's face when she's told what she doesn't want to hear ? " haaaaaaaaaaaa ? " that's my face right now !!!!

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ExplodedPineapple In reply to BigMaleforFan [2013-02-27 18:27:37 +0000 UTC]

Haha, but I have a few ideas that will be added in earlier - like what happens next at the forest!

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BigMaleforFan In reply to ExplodedPineapple [2013-02-27 18:42:52 +0000 UTC]

hehehe i hope all of them are as cute !!!! although i assume it can't be anywhere near cute if it's going to be added in the final chapter ( malefor's death ? )

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ExplodedPineapple In reply to BigMaleforFan [2013-02-27 21:01:55 +0000 UTC]

Well, the final chapter is gonna be pretty hardcore, indeed. Everything is going pretty much down there, you will see that when you see my version of Warfang and the Dawn of the dragon-version of Warfang in the next chapter. It is at least supposed to look different.
Hm, Malefor s death: Can t and wont say more about the final chapter, because of spoilers (except, you want some hints!): But I think, I got a good script that also explains, why Cynder needed those Guardian-powered crystals to re-open the portal in convexity.

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BigMaleforFan In reply to ExplodedPineapple [2013-02-28 03:34:39 +0000 UTC]

hey !!!! you're a fast learner did you know that ? you're doing the exact same thing to me that i did to you with evangelion !!!!!
and you know my opinion , a good plot is a complete plot !!!!

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ExplodedPineapple In reply to BigMaleforFan [2013-02-28 15:46:35 +0000 UTC]

Those mean, little hints you just can t get behind ! That s also my opinion, take more time to write a story, but make it good then instead of hasted with a lot of plot-holes.

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BigMaleforFan In reply to ExplodedPineapple [2013-02-28 16:33:31 +0000 UTC]

exactly !!! and then when the audience sees how you put all the hints together ... their faces can't , nay , mustn't be missed !!!!

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ExplodedPineapple In reply to BigMaleforFan [2013-02-28 16:48:06 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, I just got my hang on it! having different strings that you slowly put together - what a joy!

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BigMaleforFan In reply to ExplodedPineapple [2013-02-28 17:09:24 +0000 UTC]

just like hercules poirot !!!!! and i know the joyous feeling !!! i've done somethings like that in my life !!!!

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ExplodedPineapple In reply to BigMaleforFan [2013-02-28 17:11:50 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, confusing people with different storylines and characters that all somehow are linked together is fun !

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BigMaleforFan In reply to ExplodedPineapple [2013-02-28 17:13:58 +0000 UTC]

the only thing that takes the fun out of it is a smart enough person to figure it out !!!!!

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ExplodedPineapple In reply to BigMaleforFan [2013-02-28 17:18:27 +0000 UTC]

Oh yeah! Well, let s see if I can manage to surprise you with Path to Chaos and so on!

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BigMaleforFan In reply to ExplodedPineapple [2013-02-28 17:24:22 +0000 UTC]

we'll see about that !!! i usually try to decipher before the end , let's see if you can get the best of me !!!!!

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ExplodedPineapple In reply to BigMaleforFan [2013-02-28 17:32:13 +0000 UTC]

Who knows! It s the first time for me, to write something that complex - my first real try on serious story-writting.

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BigMaleforFan In reply to ExplodedPineapple [2013-02-28 18:07:28 +0000 UTC]

it's too soon to judge now ( we only know mali's made a friend , if you're story is a cliche , this can be his future girlfriend !! ) , but i think you'll do fine ( you like mystery more than plain action , you like evangelion , you like complex matters , so by all logic you should do fine )

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ExplodedPineapple In reply to BigMaleforFan [2013-02-28 18:59:14 +0000 UTC]

Well, let s see! Artia is a character, that isn t supposed to be a complete role-model. Let s wait for the next scenes, they will clear everything up, or make it even more messy to understand, who she really is! (whoooo, this is fun!)

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BigMaleforFan In reply to ExplodedPineapple [2013-02-28 19:09:47 +0000 UTC]

i personally go with more complex ( not messy !!!!! messy is not fine !!!! ) . and let's hope your story gets so complicated that my brain freezes !!!!

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ExplodedPineapple In reply to BigMaleforFan [2013-02-28 19:12:50 +0000 UTC]

Oh sorry, that was the word I ve meant! (Never text me after eight - I m loose 30% of my English thesaurus there!) No serious: I m googleing words, I normally know because I just can t remember them!

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BigMaleforFan In reply to ExplodedPineapple [2013-02-28 19:14:56 +0000 UTC]

hey it's ok !!!! but when is 8 o'clock ? our countries have difference in time zone you know .

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ExplodedPineapple In reply to BigMaleforFan [2013-02-28 19:17:25 +0000 UTC]

Don t know, my brain is slowly shutting down at that time (after 10, it s the worst XD ! ) Right now, it s 8.17 pm here.

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BigMaleforFan In reply to ExplodedPineapple [2013-02-28 19:19:24 +0000 UTC]

so we are exactly 2:31 hours ahead of you !!!! it's 10:49 here !!! and i was just about to prepare for bed !!!

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ExplodedPineapple In reply to BigMaleforFan [2013-02-28 19:21:59 +0000 UTC]

Ah, Nice to know! Yeah, when I check my contacts and see the online-statuses it sometimes really surprised me, you were on!

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BigMaleforFan In reply to ExplodedPineapple [2013-02-28 19:30:54 +0000 UTC]

well some of my work has to come home with me , so i have to stay up late !!!! but since it's mostly nothing too serious , i can spare a few minutes of typing !!! but why did it surprise you ?

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ExplodedPineapple In reply to BigMaleforFan [2013-02-28 19:41:35 +0000 UTC]

Some persons from my family are also studying. They normally come home between 5 and 6. I come home at 4.30, and when I lock on, I see "last activity: 3 hours ago", I completly forget about the different time-zones!

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BigMaleforFan In reply to ExplodedPineapple [2013-02-28 19:45:28 +0000 UTC]

yeah , sometimes it surprises me too !!! specially if i have to talk to americans ( 12 hour difference , so 3 lines mean 36 hours of wait !!! )

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ExplodedPineapple In reply to BigMaleforFan [2013-02-28 19:50:05 +0000 UTC]

Oh yeah! Well, americans are online at the weirdest times - Sometimes, they re online at 3 am (at least, the persons I ve texted with)

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BigMaleforFan In reply to ExplodedPineapple [2013-02-28 19:57:21 +0000 UTC]

well i've been awake at 3 am too !!! but only when i needed to study 500 pages for tomorrow's exam , remember ? but yeah !! i've seen them awake at 2 , 3 , 4 , 5 am !!!!!

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ExplodedPineapple In reply to BigMaleforFan [2013-02-28 20:05:16 +0000 UTC]

Boah, then you surely remember this feeling: Your brain can t study anything more, because it s so tired - you can t sleep because you should be studying!
That s the insane part about uni and studying at all! But it went pretty well, right?

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BigMaleforFan In reply to ExplodedPineapple [2013-03-01 04:09:23 +0000 UTC]

oh please don't remind me of that particular feeling !!!!!
no actually it went pretty bad !!! i got a very low grade ( i barely passed ) . but since more than half of the class failed , i think i was one of the top grades ( lousy professor !!! ) .

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ExplodedPineapple In reply to BigMaleforFan [2013-03-01 15:02:53 +0000 UTC]

Oh come on, I know that feeling! In elementary-school it was "2?! Oh, I m so bad!", secondary school it was "yay! Managed to get a 3!" and at college/Uni it s "passed with 60%? Let s celebrate!"
I think, you ve managed that lousy prof before. That was the guy that made even Guido struggle with his grades, right?

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BigMaleforFan In reply to ExplodedPineapple [2013-03-01 15:16:31 +0000 UTC]

how did you know ? i got exactly 62.5 % !!!!!! but no , the professor you mentioned knew what he was talking about . he was extremely skilled when it came to teaching . the professor i'm talking about is a very lousy one and his monotonic voice doesn't help at 2pm right after lunch !!! he's the kind of professor who knows no one is interested in his subject thus tries to make it hard !!!
in the classroom : " ok kids , how many is 2+2 ? "
on the exam : " log10( sinh( arctan( x ) ) ) = ? if x is 4.53564543 e+108 " !!!!!!
it was bad enough to take his subject , but worse when i found out he's also guido's professor !!! i already feel bad for him !!!
ps : i mentioned i study math right ? since most our teachings come in handy with computers or in computer science , i take half my subjects with guido .

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ExplodedPineapple In reply to BigMaleforFan [2013-03-01 15:24:44 +0000 UTC]

I think, you ve never mentioned what you study exactly, but I already thought it was something like that! Bah, and that s so mean! We had something similar: We had one teacher, everybody liked: His lessons and exams were pretty easy. Well, in the next year we had another teacher and that showed us, that the stuff we had learned really only was 2+2, what wouldn t help us on the final exams.
Hm, Computer and math are really some kind of brothers.

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BigMaleforFan In reply to ExplodedPineapple [2013-03-01 15:41:49 +0000 UTC]

well it's called " math in practice " !!! trust me you don't want to know what it's exactly about !!!
man i hate those teachers !!! most of them don't know what they're talking about . that's why they have to make it so hard for everyone else !!!! we had a teacher who gave us all his projects and asked us to do it for him ( of course he never said it was his projects but it was clear )
yep !!! brothers in arms !!! but it's kinda sad that most mathematician and computer scientist tried to use their skills for war and destruction don't you think ?

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ExplodedPineapple In reply to BigMaleforFan [2013-03-01 15:47:46 +0000 UTC]

Oh, it sounds like a complete brain-freeze to me!
Yeah, it s really sad. Have you ever played "Metal Gear Solid 3"? That game points that out quite well.

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BigMaleforFan In reply to ExplodedPineapple [2013-03-01 16:59:26 +0000 UTC]

metal gear solid 3 ....... was it the game where you were a spy in USSR ? and there was a giant tank called " shagohod " i think ?

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ExplodedPineapple In reply to BigMaleforFan [2013-03-01 17:55:28 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, that s the one. Well, the plot developes around that former space-rocket-engineer, that was forced to work on ballistic missiles and later the Shagohod. Just came into my mind. Well, the whole Metal Gear-series is about that topic, to be serious.

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BigMaleforFan In reply to ExplodedPineapple [2013-03-01 18:08:03 +0000 UTC]

yep , i played it but that was 5 years ago !!! now that you mention it , you're right . it's always about a super scientist making warcraft ( maybe you will be in the next game ? ) !!!

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ExplodedPineapple In reply to BigMaleforFan [2013-03-01 18:12:49 +0000 UTC]

MGS5, here I come, hahaha! Well, Metal Gear Rising just had it s release here - not sure, if I should get it. It doesn t look like the typical MG-game + I don t like Raiden. - But I will get Ground Zeroes.
I think, MGS3 was from 2006 or 08 if I recall right, so it s already pretty old.

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BigMaleforFan In reply to ExplodedPineapple [2013-03-01 18:34:37 +0000 UTC]

raiden ? who's raiden ? i only played mgs3 , is it a character from another game ?
i didn't get it though , your enemies included a zombie ( the bee guy or as i call him the bumblebeeman !!!! ) a spider , a plant , an alien , a spirit , and an insane colonel . what was the game trying to accomplish ?

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