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Description "The world reflects brightly in Pinkie Pie's smile as she trots blissfully along its round surface. With the sun in her hair, and infinite joy to bear, she holds the Earth still as it patiently awaits the jubilant sound of laughter being shared among friends."

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Part 1: [link]
Part 2: [link]
Part 3: You are here
Part 4: TBA
Part 5: TBA
Part 6: TBA

MLP © Lauren Faust, Hasbro.
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Comments: 461

Fantasyfan101 In reply to ??? [2012-03-27 23:31:22 +0000 UTC]

"It takes great courage to look at ones self honestly, and forge ones own path" - Person 3

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Haissan In reply to ??? [2012-03-27 01:15:30 +0000 UTC]

I think doing this comic last would have been best

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ExplosiveGent In reply to Haissan [2012-03-27 01:56:29 +0000 UTC]

You'll have to trust me when I say, I know what I want to end on.

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Haissan In reply to ExplosiveGent [2012-03-27 02:33:37 +0000 UTC]

okay I totally look forward to this, I was only saying so because of the others' status...

anywho, Please forgive my impertinent voice

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ExplosiveGent In reply to Haissan [2012-03-28 03:56:43 +0000 UTC]

No worries my good man.

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Haissan [2012-03-27 01:15:13 +0000 UTC]

that poem was absolutely lovely.

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13lovemillion In reply to ??? [2012-03-26 00:31:39 +0000 UTC]

don't get it? sorry, feel like an idiot, but will someone please explain?

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10605 In reply to ??? [2012-03-24 00:43:20 +0000 UTC]

if only the show was like this... wow. this was too much for me...

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Dark0592 [2012-03-23 23:49:26 +0000 UTC]

ASFLSDJKGHSDFGJKLHDGLKDF loved it. must contbnue making more

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sodacan27 In reply to ??? [2012-03-20 12:05:54 +0000 UTC]

i don't understand what happened, but if i did, i would say that's tha sweetest damn thing i've seen so far in my entire damn life. :3 keep on keeping on.

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Devi-kami [2012-03-20 05:43:09 +0000 UTC]

Nothing like being kind to your own self. Sweet!

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KaiSundethor [2012-03-20 04:14:52 +0000 UTC]

I love how "Dash was training" is automatically assumed to communicate "Dash got herself injured."

The personalization of each note was excellent.

Nice trick, using a convenient cloud to put Pinkie in dramatically depressing shadow despite the otherwise cheerfully sunny day.

I also noticed the curly lines in her hair becoming straight lines and angles, and that leaf that shows up three times.

I see that the blue bird hadn't actually gripped the branch before the explosion; he wasn't exploded into confetti, he was simply blown away.

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KaiSundethor [2012-03-19 06:09:11 +0000 UTC]

I love how "Dash was training" is automatically assumed to communicate "Dash got herself injured."


Nice trick, using a convenient cloud to put Pinkie in dramatically depressing shadow despite the otherwise cheerfully sunny day.

I also noticed the curly lines in her hair becoming straight lines and angles, and that leaf that shows up three times.


I can only guess what any of this means. Such as why the Sad Pinkie is life-size rather than small like the flying ones, or why there are dull and ragged feathers falling around her.


The one thing that isn't clear enough to interpret is the panel in which she notices the string that leads to Sad Pinkie. One of the skyward strings is pulled taught with action lines that imply suddenness. There might be other rising strings that snapped and fell, but it's hard to make out.

And there are three pink things which might be the tip of her tail wagging, or falling suddenly from a loss of tension (as from taught/snapping strings).

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ExplosiveGent In reply to KaiSundethor [2012-03-19 07:03:11 +0000 UTC]

I take it you didn't mean the accidental double post so I'll simply hid the first one for you.

Anywho:

The third leaf you see is actually a feather

"Sad Pinkie" and the flying pinkies are all the same size, as indicated by the eighth to last panel where she looks up at a group of them. The smaller ones are simply farther away.

The panel you're describing is the one where she noticed her tail twitching (In Pinkie Sense terms, it means stuff will fall from the sky) and yes it is shaking because it's being tugged on by the taught string. It was a difficult message to convey visually but basically the panel is meant to show that having noticed the twitching tail (presumably being pulled by a flying Pinkie,) Pinkie also noticed the string on the ground, which lead her to discover the flying pinkie that had descended from the sky (a means of conveying sorrow, as being down or fallen,) hence the feathers that fell off around her. Sorry if it wasn't clear for you.

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KaiSundethor In reply to ExplosiveGent [2013-03-13 01:24:32 +0000 UTC]

Oh hey, that makes a lot of sense.


There are just too many details to comment on. Like how the first sight of the sad Pinkie is shaded by an off-screen cloud, constrasting subtlely against the ambient brightness.

Or like how instead of a sheet of paper, Applejack used a chalkboard, which can be re-used again and again and again.

Totally missed the one about the green leaf turning into a green feather.

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Mikisakiiro [2012-03-18 21:40:05 +0000 UTC]

I'm a little bit comfused by this one.. but that's okay. it's still awesome

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wolfwarrior24 In reply to ??? [2012-03-18 06:13:48 +0000 UTC]

Goodness, this one looks AMAZING. I almost forgot about this series entirely, but I'm so glad to see that you haven't- lest an idea waste away to foggy memories.
But boy am I anxious to see what you do with Applejack. I'm sure you've gotten more than a handful of people cheering for the next one, for whoever is their favorite; but seeing your take on our rowdy Earth Pony pal's take on free time intrigues me more than seeing Twilight relaxing for a change, or Fluttershy doing whatever calms her nerves. And with your artistic style, I'm sure whatever you decide for the other three will turn out fantastic. Keep up the great work!

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Drakno [2012-03-18 00:06:13 +0000 UTC]

WE DEMAND THE NEXT PART TO CONTAIN TWILIGHT SPA... cough cough, sorry, the traditional royal Canterlot voice takes it's toll at my voice lemme try this again
Huh? It's fine if I don't use the royal Canterlot voice? Well ok then I can't wait to see the next part of the series, if possible it would be awesome if it was Twi's turn, she is my second favorite after Rainbow and since we have already seen Rainbow....... also cause AJ and Fluttershy are my 2 least favorite....... HEY, WHO THREW THAT?!?! OUCH!! I AM SERIOUS YOU GUYS THATS NOT FUNNY STOP THROWING STONES AT ME FOR SAYING FLUTTERSHY IS ONE OF MY 2 LEAST FAVORITE PONIES!

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cipherpie [2012-03-17 04:45:53 +0000 UTC]

Power Levels over infinity!

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vacaciones11 In reply to ??? [2012-03-17 03:41:39 +0000 UTC]

I didn't know this was a series, I love this comic, this last one is specially emotional, and pinkie is Pinkie! always saving the day with a smile!

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Ekibit In reply to ??? [2012-03-15 19:49:46 +0000 UTC]

Twilight! What does your scouter says about her power level?!

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TerraHv1 [2012-03-15 06:11:43 +0000 UTC]

I can honestly imagine her seeing everything like this. It makes sense...

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Dishdude87 In reply to ??? [2012-03-12 19:22:46 +0000 UTC]

"It's true some days are dark and lonely, and maybe you feel sad. But Pinkie will be there to show you that it isn't that bad."

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China-China [2012-03-11 12:18:09 +0000 UTC]

Hidden by Owner

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China-China In reply to China-China [2012-03-11 12:21:34 +0000 UTC]

whoops saw your journal after this, would like to apologize for the drug reference

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CrossoverFiend [2012-03-11 05:14:37 +0000 UTC]

Sweet Celestia...

I am literally rendered speechless. Words are insufficient and impotent. This is ART.

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IDK-youTellMe [2012-03-11 04:25:40 +0000 UTC]

I don't know what the fuck is going on
But I love this so far.

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OhThereYouArePerry [2012-03-10 06:25:21 +0000 UTC]

This is high quality stuff. I look forward to seeing the rest!

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OhThereYouArePerry [2012-03-10 06:24:31 +0000 UTC]

This is good stuff. I look forward to the rest!

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BadWolf-Spire [2012-03-10 02:33:05 +0000 UTC]

The strings confuse me...?

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My-Magic-Dream In reply to BadWolf-Spire [2012-03-17 22:21:23 +0000 UTC]

Same... what are they supose to mean?!

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PrincessMuffinArt In reply to ??? [2012-03-10 00:38:55 +0000 UTC]

Aww!

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vernes [2012-03-09 14:50:06 +0000 UTC]

ExplosiveGent: First part of this song, use it in an infinite loop, produced by the pinkie-pie swarm: " UnanimousDelivers - Pinkie Trigger: Corridor of Cupcakes"

Just the first part.

Reminds me a bit like the creepy soundtrack loop in the Anime: Akira, when the 3 psychics bring the toys alive in Tetsuo's (?) hospitalroom.

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Xidphel In reply to vernes [2012-03-13 18:30:22 +0000 UTC]

Corridor of time?
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vernes In reply to Xidphel [2012-03-13 20:17:03 +0000 UTC]

No idea what it's based on, just that it sounds perfect for that scene.

Wouldn't mind seeing it animated.

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Xidphel In reply to vernes [2012-03-13 20:46:30 +0000 UTC]

Around the midway point, you reach an island in the sky called Zeal Kingdom "Where dreams come true".
If it weren't for their queen, it'd be perfect.

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KhangleXX [2012-03-09 10:55:24 +0000 UTC]

Where ever do you get these quotes from? Did you write them yourself?

They're so poetic and add to the piece so well. Please keep up the amazing work.

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ExplosiveGent In reply to KhangleXX [2012-03-12 10:41:05 +0000 UTC]

Honestly, after finishing a comic I only spent about ten to fifteen minutes trying to sum up my feelings of it into a little quote. After working on the same piece for a month or three I think you sort of already know what you're going to say about them. You're the first person to ever comment on them, thanks, I'm happy to know you like them

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JamesAlpha [2012-03-09 01:46:00 +0000 UTC]

Does anypony else think that when looking at this, the Blue-Jay exploded? he probably didn't but that's what I think... anyway... REALLY good stuff

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XxberrysxX In reply to JamesAlpha [2012-03-09 03:37:15 +0000 UTC]

lol exploded blue jay xD i didnt even see it! lols

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Blue-Nementh In reply to ??? [2012-03-08 22:52:45 +0000 UTC]

I am always hunting for good takes on the Mane Cast in their off hours, and this entire series has been a joy. But this is probably the strongest take on the essential Pinkie that I have ever encountered. I will be looking forward to the rest of the series.

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StandardBronyBrowser In reply to ??? [2012-03-08 21:02:35 +0000 UTC]

My God... Here Pinkie level... It's OVER 9000!!!
But seriously, freaking awesome. Just like the other two which I, er, didn't actually realise you'd done... I'm watching you 8)

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JuliusScipio In reply to ??? [2012-03-08 17:15:04 +0000 UTC]

This was actually pretty beautiful. I love the apothesis/post cupcake pinkie. This whole comic is so strange and... hm. I'm not sure what to call the vibe I get from it. Whatever it is, it's delightful.

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LTblackcoat [2012-03-08 11:46:12 +0000 UTC]

...noth said.

(brillant work by the way)

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HeartinaRosebud [2012-03-08 07:31:09 +0000 UTC]

Hey, this is sweet

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Zjonni In reply to ??? [2012-03-08 06:27:17 +0000 UTC]

This makes me wish I had a monitor 8000 pixels high and 700 pixels wide just so I could have it as my desktop. The energy in all three of these so far has been just simply amazing.

It makes me really curious to see what you will do with Fluttershy, since that energy and focus seems antithetical for her.

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HereticalRants In reply to Zjonni [2012-03-08 06:49:27 +0000 UTC]

This sentiment is natural. You are not alone.

Brb, building preposterously-proportioned monitor.

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Zjonni [2012-03-08 06:20:29 +0000 UTC]

This is gleeful. Looking forward to the rest.

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Geo9955 [2012-03-08 01:06:21 +0000 UTC]

PINKIE PIE HAS GONE SUPER SAIYAN

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mousewrites [2012-03-07 20:08:17 +0000 UTC]

This is gorgeous.

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