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...Yves is not alone anymore. Some of my very old characters are back. Especially Thaldo (last panel) has never appeared on DA, but I have him since 2002 and he hardly changed...I was very obsessed with him and now I understand why.
- btw: Sasha is a female, even though it's a name for men in Russia ^^

Oh! and please let me know what you think about the gradient in the speech bubbles - I tried to play a bit with it ^^

Cheederians are enormous FELIDs (lynx - oriental cat- tiger hybrids) - no NOT wolves!!!! Some people still seem to think...but this cheed is a mix between these felids: [link] , [link] , [link] and , [link] , [link] .

Special thanks to , as beta-readers, my cats Jayto, Neo and Nintu, the many other cats, tigers, Eurasian lynxes and hyenas as models and of course all the people on DA for helpful tips!

Art, Cheederian species, character and story by me. Please don't copy and/or use it without my permission!
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FelisGlacialis In reply to ??? [2018-02-01 17:12:06 +0000 UTC]

tadam tssssh

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Toilet505 [2015-01-04 00:18:33 +0000 UTC]

Wait,how does Sasha Β know his names yves?

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FelisGlacialis In reply to Toilet505 [2015-01-14 10:32:00 +0000 UTC]

That means they have met before

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Toilet505 In reply to FelisGlacialis [2015-01-27 00:02:26 +0000 UTC]

I know now it's just that I didn't know that he was spying for the hyenasΒ 

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Toilet505 In reply to Toilet505 [2015-01-04 00:20:17 +0000 UTC]

Is it CUZ yves was forced to be a spy by the hyenas?

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Alphaheart [2012-11-04 13:46:23 +0000 UTC]

The last panel, acces should be access.

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FelisGlacialis In reply to Alphaheart [2012-11-15 17:50:51 +0000 UTC]

*changed* thanks! Good that you pick up some mistakes!

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akeli [2012-09-16 20:35:20 +0000 UTC]

Wow, very impressed! Your comic is gorgeous! The fur and color choices are excellent - it's one of the most well drawn comics I've seen in awhile. The only problem I have is the text.. it is very hard to read, and makes it difficult to understand the story, which I would love to immerse myself in. I realize that you are trying to make the text fit in with your style and artwork, but a comic is meant to be read as well as looked at. Otherwise, this comic is fabulous! Looking forward to more.

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FelisGlacialis In reply to akeli [2012-09-17 20:31:22 +0000 UTC]

Thanksn a lot for your comment!!! - and for the compliments and suggestions. I actually struggle a bit with the text. I'm indeed trying to find a balance between my style and a readable text, as for being original and deviating a bit from the classical (but best readable) white bubbles. I'm not satisfied with it either now - do you have a tip maybe? I'll try a dark text on lighter bubbles and see how that comes out - but I have to say that I feel a little bit nooby with comics, still - playing around with effects. Tips and critics are always welcome

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kohu-arts [2012-09-15 19:11:20 +0000 UTC]

The detail in these faces = so much win. ;; Gorgeous, gorgeous work in the shading. <3 I can't wait to see more!

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FelisGlacialis In reply to kohu-arts [2012-09-20 22:34:21 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!! I hope that I can update on sunday

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TheHighPhilosopher [2012-09-11 20:54:25 +0000 UTC]

NICE!

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FelisGlacialis In reply to TheHighPhilosopher [2012-09-17 20:31:33 +0000 UTC]

takk takk!

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Duzloo [2012-09-10 16:40:32 +0000 UTC]

Middle panel is awesome
I really want to stroke their manes but I'd rather not because they look so huge

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FelisGlacialis In reply to Duzloo [2012-10-11 13:42:35 +0000 UTC]

better not hehe

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Duzloo In reply to FelisGlacialis [2012-10-11 15:10:07 +0000 UTC]

Ah well, then I have to look at their shinyness and just love the fluff

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Vannjaren [2012-09-10 16:29:46 +0000 UTC]

Gorgeous work - Thaldo reminds me a bit of a lynx, maybe it's his colouring or something, and is the black Cheederian with the thick mane Atilla?
Love their fur, and I'm interested to see what happens next, whether Yves will be discovered for his spying...

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FelisGlacialis In reply to Vannjaren [2012-10-11 13:43:48 +0000 UTC]

sorry - very late answer...but the maned one is a Russian called Nigras. Attila appears later on, but I gonna change him back to how I saw himat the first sight; with slightly different mane ^^

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Vannjaren In reply to FelisGlacialis [2012-10-11 15:49:21 +0000 UTC]

Aww, that's ok - and haha, I'd figured that out by the next panel anyway. And haha, I'm excited to see what changes you've made to him!

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SueaNoi [2012-09-09 14:12:02 +0000 UTC]

I like Thaldo's hair. XD

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FelisGlacialis In reply to SueaNoi [2012-09-20 22:34:43 +0000 UTC]

Same here! Kinda nerdy haircut

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El-Ricado [2012-09-09 08:33:08 +0000 UTC]

Love it! <3 <3 Will be print version in future?) I really want have comic book of your novel.

And i am from Russia, i want to say Sasha - it is a name for men and female.) It is a short name for Alexander (if it is a men) and Alexandra (if it a female). That is why it is okay if your female is called Sasha

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FelisGlacialis In reply to El-Ricado [2012-10-11 13:46:22 +0000 UTC]

Oh ok thanks!! Good to hear that from a native Russian hehe! But will indeed make printed versions of this one - and maybe sell already a kind of intro sketchbook of the world 8D You get to know it via my page and whatever promotion methods XD

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UmbraLynx [2012-09-09 08:20:35 +0000 UTC]

I love this novel so far <3 And for the speach bubbles - for my taste, I rather read them when they're more transparent ^^

And in Germany Sasha also is often used as a Men name

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FelisGlacialis In reply to UmbraLynx [2012-09-17 20:33:09 +0000 UTC]

I like the transparant effect too, but it makes it a bit mroe disturbing and hard to read according to most people - so I'll try to find a balance between readable text and nice visual effects

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UmbraLynx In reply to FelisGlacialis [2012-09-18 13:15:08 +0000 UTC]

I'm sure you'll find a good way

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RiverRaven [2012-09-08 21:53:53 +0000 UTC]

Oh wow hoe gaat ie hier uit komen 8D spanneeeend!!
Dat gezicht van Nigras is echt.. eng en grappig tegelijk O.O en Thaldo is idd n heel mooi mannetje.

Over de tekstwolkjes: qua gradient zijn ze erg goed te lezen. De volledige blz is echter niet zo groot, waardoor de allerlaatste tekstwolk (van Thaldo) wat kleine lettertjes heeft en ook de 2 eerste wolkjes van Sasha en Yves..

Maareehh, ik vlieg mn bed in, want morgen moet ik hier om 6:15 vertrekken wil ik het vliegtuig naar Trondheim halen 8D 8D!!!

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FelisGlacialis In reply to RiverRaven [2012-09-17 20:32:20 +0000 UTC]

Haha, ja boom en impressive tegelijk!! Ha ja die miniscule lettertjes - k ga ff kijken wa k daar aan kan doen...misschien alles groter maken in die ondderse panels

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Nyrhai [2012-09-08 21:32:31 +0000 UTC]

Lol, my name is Sascha in dutch it is a girl's name XD

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FelisGlacialis In reply to Nyrhai [2012-09-08 21:43:19 +0000 UTC]

haha en gezien k ook van NLse kom af ben (maar niet meer in NL woon) - intrepeteerde ik Sasha ook as vrouwen-naam. Mooie naam overigens!

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Nyrhai In reply to FelisGlacialis [2012-09-10 09:50:28 +0000 UTC]

XD dat is grappig! maar noorwegen is een heel ander land dan nederland... Waarom emigreerde je daarheen?

en dankje ^_^

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FelisGlacialis In reply to Nyrhai [2012-09-17 20:26:18 +0000 UTC]

Gezien ik weidse natuur nodig heb - Nederland is mij veel te vol met z'n 17-miljoenen op een miniscuul postzegeltje

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Nyrhai In reply to FelisGlacialis [2012-09-18 08:55:27 +0000 UTC]

Dat is wel waar... ik wil zelf emigreren naar Engeland ^_^

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Agent36496 [2012-09-08 20:12:45 +0000 UTC]

Now I know how it feels when one can't read my hand-writing. It's hard for me to read the dialogue. Can you put subtitles in the description at least in the future?

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FelisGlacialis In reply to Agent36496 [2012-10-11 13:44:38 +0000 UTC]

Sorry for the late answer - but good that you pointed it forward. I hope it was already better readable in the next pages?

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Agent36496 In reply to FelisGlacialis [2012-10-11 18:19:46 +0000 UTC]

I could read it better, yes.

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FelisGlacialis In reply to Agent36496 [2012-10-11 20:28:57 +0000 UTC]

good to hear

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Lyrak [2012-09-08 20:00:27 +0000 UTC]

I think perhaps the last line would be "nor did you get access". Right now the phrasing is a bit unusual.

The gradients are kind of interesting. A bit easier to read than the ones in previous pages, I think.

I LOVE the face on the big guy in the middle panel.

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FelisGlacialis In reply to Lyrak [2012-10-11 13:44:07 +0000 UTC]

I fixed it - sorry that I didnt answer, but I appreciated the suggestion!!!

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Mudstar-Sibera [2012-09-08 19:53:31 +0000 UTC]

ooo...I like that lynxy looking tan on in the background at the top! he/she looks sorta like Mineuh! and oh...I am suspisious of secret mettings that have gone on under the water between Yves and Sasha! aw! makes me wonder how they already know each other? I guess more time passes between the panals than I thought. Oh that makes me wonder a lot! And her dad...I love that hair around his face that's really Unique! I kinda see Nucaya in him in the face a bit too...the shapes of their muzzels.

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FelisGlacialis In reply to Mudstar-Sibera [2012-10-11 13:47:14 +0000 UTC]

Yeah there is a lot behind the scenes hehe - that lynx-one is Tsjaiko btw...he's got to say something later on too XD

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Mudstar-Sibera In reply to FelisGlacialis [2012-10-11 13:51:52 +0000 UTC]

hey! it's 6 or 7'oclock pm where you are right no huh? I'm on break! I go to work at 3am in the morning so my break is also early! ooo....Tsjaiko is a cutie *aw Thaldo is too* Sasha's just soooooo pwettty! *spelled it like that on purpose...*

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FelisGlacialis In reply to Mudstar-Sibera [2012-10-12 10:23:32 +0000 UTC]

3 pm in the morning? that sounds like during the night!! omgomgomg -how do you survive hehe - I often stay awake til 3am in the night, but not go out of my bed

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Mudstar-Sibera In reply to FelisGlacialis [2012-10-12 13:36:43 +0000 UTC]

it is TERRIBLE because I am NOT a Morning person! AT ALL! *ask River and Rubi lol* Thankfully we work alone and I have a thrity miunet drive in music or quiet to help me ease awake and I wont explode at anybody. But boy I am cranky when I get out of bed when I first wake up *ever* or ESPICALLY if I have to get up early...oh I am ill as I dont know what! But...see this job, I can take college classes for free and I still get payed for work, so...I know ten years from now it was the smart choice even though the first three thoughts I have in the morning are:
"I HATE this job I HATE getting up in the morning!"
"Thank you Jesus for giving me a job" *bad econemy, hard to get a job so must be thankful...*
"I cant WAIT Till they move me to Night shift!"

Yes we will soon be jerked into night shift, I'm a night hawk *like you I see!* lol so...the job I do currently goes against my natural habits. -.- annoying but hey I get a paycheck!

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WarriorapprenticeKat [2012-09-08 18:54:31 +0000 UTC]

So cool! Love the different poses!

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FelisGlacialis In reply to WarriorapprenticeKat [2012-09-17 20:25:18 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!!

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WarriorapprenticeKat In reply to FelisGlacialis [2012-09-17 21:00:45 +0000 UTC]

sure

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Grender [2012-09-08 18:17:35 +0000 UTC]

Kitties, kitties everywhere !!! . That middle panel is pure awesomeness ^^.

As for the speech bubble, they're a little hard to read, at least for me XD. Since you use white letters I think the background should be a little darker, just my opp tho.

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FelisGlacialis In reply to Grender [2012-09-17 20:25:07 +0000 UTC]

He's suddenly surrounded by a lot of cheeds -who come veryvery close! Thanks for the suggestion - I hear it from more people - I'll try to fix it and play around with it...I'm still a bit kinda noob on making readable graphic novels ^^ Suggestions are very welcome!! Don't hesitate to be critical!

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nightgirl7 [2012-09-08 18:03:06 +0000 UTC]

Opapa! Another page
Is Sashok here male or female?

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