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Finally at time! One week submission rate is sometimes a bit difficult with a busy life ^^
Big bad Nigras becomes angry - poor Yves.
Oh please people; be critical and don't hesitate to give your honest opinion and tips to improve if you see them - especially my English grammar sucks.
Cheederians are enormous felids; a horse sized mix between an Oriental cat, tiger and Eurasian lynx - see here some refs: [link] , [link] , [link] and , [link] , [link] .
Special thanks to , as beta-readers, my cats Jayto, Neo and Nintu, the many other cats, tigers, Eurasian lynxes as models and of course all the people on DA for helpful tips!
Art, Cheederian species, character and story by me. Please don't copy and/or use it without my permission!
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I adooore that middle panel! The paw is just so 
BTW, I found some fonts that might interest you. I'll note you about them.
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Thanks! yeah even though Nigras appears as a rather hard guy, he has something terribly cute - and finally I seem to manage them really typical feline 8D
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Well that some comic ! I hope Nigras wont' kill Yves, he was just brainwashed !
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Hehe just see what's gonna happen next XD
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Amazing work - love how dynamic this page is, and Nigras, I have to say, is FREAKIN' GORGEOUS! 
Love the perspective and the visible claw sheaths on Nigras' paw, and I must say, I also love how you shade teeth - an odd comment, but they always look so natural and 3D.
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Thanks! yeah since I changed the cheeds claws I now have to draw all the details of the retractile claws too XD Good to hear that it looks 3D! that's where I'm aiming for - the trick is a lot of motion and radial blurring.
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Yes, their claws look great like this though! <3 I'm keeping my KD claws non-retractile though, since they need them when sprinting like cheetahs, plus they're able to manipulate the ends of their claws in terms of sharpness, so they don't have the problem of them going blunt.
And it certainly does - it works very well!
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Wow, it's great *_*
I like their expressions and dynamical poses. And the colors are so beautiful too)
Poor Yves, I feel sorry for him...
And, of course, I'm waiting for a next page)
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Thanks!! Yeah Nigras is pretty hard - but not how to say..extraordinary hard.
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Really? that's good to hear
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Top two panels are awesome, I don't feel so sure about the two bottom panels though. You're changing the point of view in them while it's almost the same perspective, that's a bit irritating.
Great story, I'm curious what will happen next
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Thanks for your opinion! keep doing that. I see yer point - I was a bit playing around with perspective and see what its doing XD
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I will!
You're welcome, I hope my thoughts will be helpful.
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Sure they are! Keep doing that!!
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You're so crueeeeel ;_; How can You make such interesing comic? You have oryginal style of art, which great works in graphic novel 
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Lool - I just dive into the middle of a dramatic scene XD
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Hehe he doesnt - just be patient and see what's gonna happen XD And yeah Nigras is a huge impressive male XD His son Ferrus becomes even stronger (stronger than Stian too)
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phew I saw. WHAT! hum, no wonder I see where Ferrus gets his lack-there-of in the looks department! *say WAHT! lol no offence!* Nigras looks...very Interesting one of the most 'interesting' looking Cheederians I've seen other than Niver and that head sketch of Fury.
Hum I will not put out further comments about Ferrus for the moment anyway you already got my comment/question about him on paper!
Random: OH MY GOODNESS I SAW THE AFRICAN CATS MOVIE AND CRIED MY EYES OUT WHEN LAYLA DIED! *heck I'm not exactly a Lion fan either* but I cried and cried. Kinda reminded me of Stian I guess...you know?
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It feels too soon that Nigras would want to kill Yves.
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hehe just wait what's gonna happen XD
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I'll always be waiting
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Omg, soo much DRAMA!!! D:
But the speach bubbles are much better now
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Thankies! Drama for sure this chapter!
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Nuuuu! Mercy! She was raised by the creatures! What is she supposed to think?! MERCY!!!
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Lol who do ya mean with she? Yves is a male actually - even though he doesn't look very masculine and is rather small for a cheederian ^^ - but you will see what's gonna happen
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I mean she as in the white one, forgot her name. XD
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That's a he, called Yves (a french male-name) XD
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XD and this whole time i thought he was a she!!
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haha lol - he doesnt loke very masculine and he's pretty small for a male. Also, he's a fine build southern European Alpine type while he's now among much bigger Russian cheederians XD - that doesn't help either XD
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Russian cheedarians?! -Cuddles them all-
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Yep - except for Yves are all the other cheeds on this page Russian.
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I Love Russian Accents.
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haha same here - I've once had a genious Russian teacher at the university with a very heavy accent.
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I only have one friend with a Russian Accent....
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Looks really good.
If I have anything to say it would be that maybe instead of 'Why is it forbidden to speak with Hyenas if they ask me something?' maybe simply 'Is it forbidden to speak with Hyenas if they ask me something?'. That would be my only comment.
Other then that, layout is great, drawings as always are excellent and still really eager to see what's coming. So great job mate
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Thanks for the tip at least - but I don't get it completely 
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Or divide the "why" into Why? and then make the next a full sentence.
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I don't really get it
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So amazing!
I love this comic!
Your drawing style are beautiful.
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