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FelisGlacialis — RoC Theory of Mind p35
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Time to loosen the reins a bit and give the story more 'visual effects'. Zoom on the crystal-system - a 'condenser'
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Cheederians are enormous felids; a horse sized mix between an Oriental cat, tiger and Eurasian lynx - see here some refs: [link] , [link] , [link] and , [link] , [link] .
Special thanks to , and for the critical view on the storyline, world and art and the whole team of English speaking reviewers!!! I also have to thank my cats Jayto, Neo and Nintu, the many other cats, tigers, Eurasian lynxes and hyenas as models and of course all other people on DA who gave me useful tips and critique.
Art, Cheederian species, character and story by me. Please don't copy and/or use it without my permission!
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Comments: 37
i am so happy there is romance in it! ^^ i just love romance!!!!! <3
sorry , i'm a teenager... that has been into that theme lately lol
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Hehe np
Yeah some romance is always welcome - especially in a story that is gonna get quite...dramatic.
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ooh! i am looking forward to it!
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Hi! I'm with a co-worker Gabriel and he loves your art and your comic and how real your art is and he thinks you are pretty too! He's here to say hi! 
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Beautiful! My favourite page so far.
The colours and movement are just gorgeous!
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This is amazing! I can feel the motion of the characters! O.O
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Thanks! Ha that's good to be 'in the story'
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Thanks! Ha yeah they have to hurry XD
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omg, this looks awesome. I love cheederians when they're running. And the fluffy tail in the end *O*
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Ha yeah especially Yves has a fluffy tail tip XD But most cheeds have a fluffy tail XD
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This new page looks really great *-*
I love the colors and their dynamic poses)
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Thanks!!! Yeah it was a rather difficult page because of the lighting 'experiment' - but I'm happy with the result
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Thanks! I like to play with motion blur but its difficult not to mess it up ^^
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I love the blurring effects on the trees and landscape! Just beautiful!
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lovely. I kind of like Yves's expression in the middle frame he looks happy despite the serverity of the situation. But I hope he enjoys his time with Sasha...hum I know you are busy but you MUST listen to this! ha and just TRY to tell me it's not perfect for them I dare you! [link] I am going to make a video of this once i have enough 'running away' pictuers. I think this song also works nicely for Noiro and Fury or even Noiro and Nucaya
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Ha yeah - even though it's difficult to understand it directly ^^ - Ha and he surely enjoys every minute with Sasha XD. I think he's pretty used to tense situations XD
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that's sad though... but so is the life in the wild huh? where this bitter law rules the land "Hesitation can be the end of you, or those you care about."
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Nice use of the light difference from the last page to show the 'direction flip' in this one without confusing the audience 
Oh, a crystal~
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Ha good to hear!! Also thanks for the crit on the previous page - I didn't answer yet because then the message disappears from my message box and then I forget to look at it
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I'm always happy to give critique to those who want it C: And don't worry about answering all of my long-winded comments xD So long as they help in any little way, I'm happy C:
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i hope they live happy ever-after but most likely they will be spotted and then they will have to run for there life's and keep at it tell they are able to fight back on even ground which is unlikey
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it's just chapter one....
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true but i hope they get to raise a family
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Ya will see what's going to happen.
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