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FelisGlacialis β RoC Theory of Mind p43
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Bit drawn in a hurry - and it looks a bit like a snowy mess with that snow on the mountains....
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Yes - especially when they stretch themselves
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I can just imagine XP
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Can you tell me how do you draw snowflakes ? I really like them. I noticed they are different size, shape and opacity is different also isn't it? Do you do them all manually? Can they be made using a combination of custom brushes?
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His paw in the last panel! Β O_O Oh my gosh! Β That is just awesome! Β I love the perspective of that panel!
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The bottom drawing is stunning. Love the perspective.
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as if his life depends in it haha - it does actually XD
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Hope they will be fine. It's been a while since my last comment. But I'm always following it, even without comments.
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Thanks! hehe np! you know I've often no time to aswer them - but I read theam usually
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Beautiful page as usual 
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Thanks!! I've the plan to learn 3D animation soon
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Sounds amazing - I can't wait
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Amazing work - it might have been drawn in a hurry, but I think the cliff looks great - realistic rock shapes and you can really see the way the snow is building up.
Love the perspective in this one, and I love how you've drawn Yves' claws in the bottom panel - you can really tell how he's trying to cling on, gorgeous drawing! <3
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Thanks! yeah i find snow ans mountains still difficult, even though I love drawing it.
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You're very welcome!
And you might find it difficult, but you're really brilliant at it!
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lovely so far!
last panel looks like the part of lion king where Scar makes Mufasa fall...
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Bit I think - Dunno how it looks exactly - have not used it as reference.
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Interesting page! loved the perceptive in the last panel! those claws!
i dont think the snow looks messy of bad it looks pretty good!
oh damn snowy rocks! hope Yves can climb them!
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Thanks!! Ha yeah thankfully I have cats to study claws XD
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Uh oh! I see the pursuing hyena in the last panel!
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Very nice! I love the stones that are falling form one panel to the next!
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Thanks! little bit extra dynamic effects
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oh and might I add I love the little detail of the proper...way the fur around his does looks as it is pressed against hte stone? Particulary the paw that is farther away the way the fur is curved really gives the impression that he is holding on tight aside from the deathgrip with his claws and straining in his toes great attention to detail as always
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ha! I love the way he's looking up in the top main frame...like "Your kidding? You seriously expect me to climb that?! WTFluff?!"
but but....
YVES OH MY BABY PLEASE DON'T FALL DONT FALL! NO NO NO! I WILL CATCH YOU SWEETHEART! PLEASE DONT DIIIIIEEEEEE!
lol perhaps you were looking at some of Mufasa or Simba holding onto the rockwall for refrence? lol maybe not but it came to mind here it looks awesome.
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Ha yeah I dunno how that scene looks already (long time ago I watched TLK) - but anyway nothing like that happens XD
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Lol still cool and u did a great job!
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Wouldn't it have been awesome if in slide 5 there was a hyena or cat with glowing eyes looking up at him XD
Awesome page!
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What an idea - thanks!! Maybe I will fit that in anyway or change the fourth panel here
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Lol I meant fourth panel heheh ^^ and no prob, it looks great!
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NP
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Thankies!
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The perspectives are wonderfully outstanding! β₯
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Don't fall down!
All those flying stones... they scare me, especially with the last panel.
Love how you did the perspective and Yves' claws! Very realistic!
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Thanks! yeah bit of a cliff-hanger haha
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