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It wasn't exactly my intention for this page to be so far from the original, but I had to do some drastic changes in order to make reading easier, no mention the last pannels hinted at something about the music box that honestly, I have no idea what we meant by that ...although, perhaps the faces of Sneaky and Kaboom in this deleted pannel can give you an idea. Originally, Flippy said that "the box wanted to tell them something" which was so strange to me in this revision that I decided to simply change it to having a bad feeling himself (I don't know why the need to avoid the characters thinking for themselves 10 years ago )

Aside from that, we have discarded the use of OC's in this scene, for the same reasons we mentioned on page 2...except of course for General Rhino. This character, exclusive to Sweet Lullaby, is inspired by a comment made by Kenn Navarro (creator of HTF) regarding Mouse Kaboom being thought as a "big and burly rhino" in his conception, an idea Sweet Lullaby decided to adopt, so it could become the General of Flippy's troop. His dialogues are also one of the most changed aspects of this page, since in addition of being unnecessarily long, they used to give him an overly prepotent air that no longer fits the vision we have of him now, as someone whom Flippy and his friends could follow despite his big attitude: Someone strong, but indulgent, without being motivated by petty concepts or prejudices, but by the simple need to protect what is important to him.

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Artwork © / 2010 (2019 edition)
HTF © Mondo Media
Sweet Lullaby is created by and

Description

★ Please do not edit, reproduce or redistribute★

*For those who already know the story, try not to comment spoilers please.

It wasn't exactly my intention for this page to be so far from the original, but I had to do some drastic changes in order to make reading easier, no mention the last pannels hinted at something about the music box that honestly, I have no idea what we meant by that ...although, perhaps the faces of Sneaky and Kaboom in this deleted pannel can give you an idea. Originally, Flippy said that "the box wanted to tell them something" which was so strange to me in this revision that I decided to simply change it to having a bad feeling himself (I don't know why the need to avoid the characters thinking for themselves 10 years ago )

Aside from that, we have discarded the use of OC's in this scene, for the same reasons we mentioned on page 2...except of course for General Rhino. This character, exclusive to Sweet Lullaby, is inspired by a comment made by Kenn Navarro (creator of HTF) regarding Mouse Kaboom being thought as a "big and burly rhino" in his conception, an idea Sweet Lullaby decided to adopt, so it could become the General of Flippy's troop. His dialogues are also one of the most changed aspects of this page, since in addition of being unnecessarily long, they used to give him an overly prepotent air that no longer fits the vision we have of him now, as someone whom Flippy and his friends could follow despite his big attitude: Someone strong, but indulgent, without being motivated by petty concepts or prejudices, but by the simple need to protect what is important to him.

Previous Page | Next page

Artwork © / 2010 (2019 edition)
HTF © Mondo Media
Sweet Lullaby is created by and