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Published: 2009-12-07 20:12:01 +0000 UTC; Views: 3980; Favourites: 148; Downloads: 0
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The breathless pauseStatuesque in capture pulsing to the rhythm of the unseen
Lost in an empty space where the rhythm turns into fire
A wild fire
A burning fire
An insatiable fire
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~watchstock : Torso Stretch 4 <- Male figure
`mjranum-stock : Leap of Faith - 2 <- Female figure
~blOntj : Old Dark Room <- Room
*B-SquaredStock : Room 4 <- Used the wall for the floor texture
`FantasyStock : Brown Hotel Wallpaper Texture <- Wall texture
~Valynia : Tutorial: Water Ripple Effect <- The awesome tut that helped make my ripples in the puddles
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love the colors, the poses, the lines. are there more to this set?
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yes, I have one other in the set but been meaning to do more. Pause is the better of the two though (in my opinion 
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I featured (kind of) this wonderful piece of yours {here }.
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Hello, you're amazing piece of art has been featured in the news-article of Here's the link to it: [link]
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! I am so sorry I never replied to you! .. thank you so much for the feature!
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This piece leaves me without words, it is very expressive. Bravo!
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Thanks
I'm well fond of it myself
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Hi, I've featured your beautiful picture in my journal: [link]
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Ahhh ... one of my first pieces I really enjoyed and loved the end result of! Thank you so much for the feature
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Thanks
A lot of figuring out where drips would go on this ... I'm thinking of doing something similar to this in a few days and hopefully it turns out alright!
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This is a very interesting concept and, even though the leaks from the characters' members to the ground look a bit unrealistic, the bi-directional flow of the image, both of the liquid downward and the silhouettes aiming upwards gives the composition a remarkable fluidity.
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Thank you very much
I wasn't particularly sure on how to get the leaks right, so I have to agree that there is an unrealistic appearance to it
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Very impressive! The liquid on their bodies and the background is so well integrated, I thought this was mostly a photo at first.
The streams of liquid flowing off their bodies and the puddles at the bottom are slightly more obvious: I think what would help there is a little bit of transparency and making the streams narrower.
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funny that I tried that and it just didn't get the look I was aiming for ... I think the more thick paint like feel worked a bit better though, tried it a few times on light transparency but meh! just didn't work
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Hmmm...how about having it more concentrated in the middle and less around the edges?
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hmm ... well there's a thought I never thought
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Try it out! (Quick Mask might be really useful for this one.)
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This is a very original concept and very well executed. 
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This amazing piece has been included in Daily Deviation Suggestions for July 2010 - a collection of deviations I suggested to be featured as daily deviations. I want to say that your work has deeply touched me so I hope you will also like the feature and perhaps leave me a comment. Thank you for sharing your glorious work with us!
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Thank you so much ... that means loads to me
You have truly made my day ... if not my year with what you said
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Hey, don't mention it! It's funny that it takes me almost nothing to suggest someone's piece for a DD but it still can really please that person. It fascinates me.
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Stunning! The colour and texture of the paint effects are just gorgeous. Instantly drew me in.
The only flaws I can see are in the background, the floor seems separate from the wall since the floorboards are a lighter colour while there's shadow on the skirting board. Maybe you should make them both a more neutral tone. I think maybe the darkness to the left of the picture should be less intense as 1) it seems a little abrupt and 2) the text is a little hard to read. More of a gradient would make this look nicer.
The models, though, you've got perfectly.
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hmmm ... think you're right, I will give it a shot to see if it works out
Thanks for the crit
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