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CageyJay [2017-06-30 01:45:19 +0000 UTC]

Excellent use of multiple planes and warped patterns to create massive depth! Truly, that's amazing. If you hadn't commented that this was a warehouse, I would have thought it was on the flight deck of a derelict at night. It looks that completely spacious.

The only thing that smacks of visual dissonance is that hunk o'junk back in the background behind the scanning plane. You did so many nice things with the mix of thick outlines to set off the subjects and no outlines to create a sleek environment... and then there's that piece of environment that's in the background with thick outlines, attracting too much attention for what it is. I see why you did it, to employ another "depth" cue, but I would *really* recommend either using thinner lines for it, or adjusting the color of its lines more toward the background color.

Otherwise, this picture is a truly perfect application of your style. Awesome work!


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Omnivault [2017-06-24 05:01:56 +0000 UTC]

Looks like a screenshot from a cartoon.

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Istrandar [2017-06-22 10:21:41 +0000 UTC]

Hi ! I am from
First of all your lines are really cool !
your use of line weight is really effective but I think you can still improve it !
For exemple by making the line thinner where the light come from (there the lines near the blue light).You could convey more shapes by doing this !
In the same way making the line weight vary more on circular robot could show more his round shape.
Adding some shadows on the scrap metal could be great too.
I think you could have improved the piece by making the background a little bit darker and the metal scrap darker too so we focus more on the scanning robot and the facet he is scanning. Actually i think too much of the focus is going to the foreground metal scrap.

Also i find that this robot design is really great and simple !

As a last thing (this one is more personnal and it may not eventbe a great idea), you could had some light effect on the robot ey and bloom where the light hit the metal.
On photoshop you can do it by making a layer copying into itthe part you want and bluring them. Then by trying different effect you can do something looking cool and sci-fi !
But it may not fit you style.

Anyway, have a nice day and keep making great art

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DekuLink9909 [2017-06-21 14:42:16 +0000 UTC]

Very nice, the little bug camera reminds me of the little Wakfu sucking robotic bugs in Wakfu. Toatally forgot what they are called  

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DSegno92 [2017-06-21 13:04:22 +0000 UTC]

I know this is not too much, but I like how you gave centrality to the obliquous triangle of light, and kept everything organised and shaded according to it. Personally, I find it not so easy to put a geometrical shape in perspective, nor using the light this way

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WardenMamaBear [2017-06-21 12:38:57 +0000 UTC]

This is very well drawn
Keep up the great work!

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foxythepiratesanss [2017-06-21 11:43:49 +0000 UTC]

nice the lil robot looks cute, so does the big one :3

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