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Published: 2017-01-09 14:22:32 +0000 UTC; Views: 34863; Favourites: 314; Downloads: 95
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Got a chance to be a bit more playful with the page layout here. Short of drawing multiple panels of Sonic fighting his way through the theatre, I can just have him thread his way through the whole page.
In hindsight, I wish I chose better panel shapes to complement the composition. I'm still pretty green at using Archie's free-floating page layouts, but I guess this was a learning experience. 
IMPORTANT: You might want to keep that whole 'prisoner' thing in mind for now. I'm telling you this because it will be a while before we revisit this plot point. In the meantime, do you want to guess who Lara-Le's secret prisoner is...?
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if you pay attention out of the dialog you can see the blue-stella of sonic and himslef running to show the momentum of the race and the events to the last panel
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it was at this moment that she knew, she f$$ked up
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Very beautiful imagery with sonic buzzing all over the page to arrive on the roof
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Um... for the same reason he isn't singing City Escape?
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Want to hazard a guess?
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My bet is it's either someone from the Iron Legion, or a Tasmanian Devil. Gotta be.
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The Iron Legion? I think Tony Stark would have a thing or two to say about that.
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Sorry! Meant Iron Dominion. Meant that. By the by - LOVE YOUR comic. I've only seen one other comic come close to this good (Archie Sonic Online), but this is by far the best. Looking forward to more in the future dude!
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My guess: wicked ol' scary-eyes himself, Dr. Finitevus.
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This keeps getting better and better! I love how you have Sonic running all over outside the frames!
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AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME
SONIC THE HEDGEHOG IS AWESOME
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Tomorow! Tomorow! a new page Tomorrooooooooooow....
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I find it hilarious that with all the cybernetic enhancements these Legionnaires have, they always resort to their guns. Lara-Le's eyes in the second panel feel like they should have emitted more of a "heh heh!" than a "ha ha!" kind of attitude -- maybe by narrowing them just a bit more. It really is surprising that Sonic would spend more time counting to five. I figured he'd feel 'one' was sufficient.
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That would be cheating. Sonic knows that others aren't as fast as he is.
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Expecting Lien-Da to reveal her new abilities in the next page! Hahah her face in the last panel! Good job.
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Well, if you ask me, the prisoner could be many people. The character I think would fit what was said in one of you're earlier pages could be Dr. Finitevus.
The reason I say that is because he could easily turn the tide of this little war. But I'm just guessing.
I hope my guess was intelligent. 
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Is it Knuckles,One of Tails' parents? Robotnik? Ken Penders?
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What would Lien-Da do if she got her hands on Ken Penders?
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Make him bring back all the characters he took and write better stories. Or, he'll spend "cuddle time" with a Mr.Trump plushie.
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Aaah, Team Sonic from Sonic Heroes. I recognise those lyrics. <3
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Did I ever mention how much I dog your coloring on Sonic's speed wake? If not, here it is: I really did the coloring on Sonic's speed wake.
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So you dog the coloring and you did the coloring. Thanks for clearing that up.
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Oh wow, I botched that up.
I really dig your coloring work.
There are not enough emojis in the world to express my embarrassment.
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WOAH I just noticed Sonic running through the background that's so cool
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I like Sonic running around the panels of the page. I think it's really effective at communicating that Sonic is "running around behind the scenes" while the Echidnas are plotting their evil plots. You get the sense of urgency that Sonic is catching up to them without a boring "frame of villains talking", "frame of Sonic running", "frame of villains talking", "frame of Sonic running"...etc. Very clever.
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Cheers. It's a useful trick to reconcile the flow of the page with the flow of Sonic's run through it.
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Excellent layout with Sonic moving in the background. I also like how the personalities show so much in their body language
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nah, she just underestimated his speed, (which is the dumbest thing to EVER do [unless you're The Flash])
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you are right so many characters on Mobius always underestimate his speed.
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another great installation ! i really like Lien-Da's expression and pose in the first panel a lot ^^
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Ever have one of those days where NOTHING goes your way? XD
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That's my life you're describing, pal.
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And just think, Lien-Da, if you managed to take over the Eggman Empire, you could enjoy this feeling every day.
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She probably got bored just dealing with echidnas all the time.
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