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Disclaimer: This is a work of satire and shouldn't be taken seriously.----/ end disclaimer
And it is finally finished! Now you too can make the best ever character!
Let me know if this tutorial is as helpful as the last ones!
I pity those on dial-up viewing this.
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What can I say that hasn't already been said? This is truly something else. It made fun of Mary Sues, though maintaining a fake innocent tone the whole time. It is a parody, I would call it. You have great style too, the pictures are very cute if you ask me.
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Could you please do a male counterpart? I am writing a fanfic myself and I want to know what I should avoid...I consider writing my only redeeming quality, actually. But if you are busy then no need to hurry, okay?
Well, keep up the good work!
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This was absolutely awesome, I laughed while reading this, I love how you were able to create a guide on what not to do while making characters and have it be so entertaining, I really hope that you decide to make a male version of this, because I would definitely read it, I love reading these sorts of guides, they're always so entertaining, looks like you have continued the entertainment streak, so for that, I thank you, anyway, what you did here was absolutely, positively hilarious, seriously, I'm still laughing a bit, I need a few more words, I know! Ninja Biscuit! Yep, that worked.
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Here is a one word summary.
THIS WAS SO HILARIOUS.
Oh wait, that was four.
My bad.
You put all of the possible mary sue combinations I could think of, including some I couldn't think of. And the pictures are just...so cute and hilarious.
The details were also nice. (Let's make the color scheme a million colors, make her/him use all weapons at once!)
Oh no I'm running out of letters!
Overall this was a fantastic little comedy guide,and I tip my rainbow sparkly flying invincible hat to you, my good sir/ma'am.
Good luck on your next art and stuff :3
-RainbowFuri
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Umm, you can do more than 100 words.
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Still.Β
I'm new to Deviantart.
I apologize.
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This was actually pretty amusing, to be honest. You were able to joke about what makes a Mary Sue in a very upbeat way. I actually had to unfave it THEN refave it again just to be sure that I could read it again soon. XD You were able to tell what makes up a Mary Sue and acted as if it was positive. This is pretty original in a way because it was teaching the reader about Mary Sues in a very lighthearted manner that grabs an innocently sarcastic way. I WOULD say that you should try to choose the font size carefully because some people have difficulty in reading it, but maybe I'm saying that that because I'm viewing this on an iPad and the picture looks blurry.
All in all, it was very amusing and entertaining. Keep up the good work!
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Lol, I absolutely loved reading this. You've got the details pretty much perfect, mocked Mary Sue's very existence, whilst making is nothing short of hilarious in terms of reading.
Then, to make it all a bazillion times better, you threw heaps of cute pictures in there too!
I reckon you should make a male counterpart for this guide as well, just for the sake of balance. This'll come in really useful for a part of a fic I'm writing. Thanks for taking the time to do so.
Damn, I need twelve more words... I LIKE PIE!
That'll do it! :3
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That was -- put quite simple --
Vision = 100%. Just 100%. There's nothing I can add to make it any better.
Originality = 100%. Come ON, people, was this not the BEST thing you have EVER read? It covered everything in a Mary Sue and yet was still somehow innocent... like the Mary Sue is before she kills the bad guy and becomes queen of the Happy Flower Fairy Realm.
Technique = 100%. It wasn't insulting to Mary Sues, because it was humorous and made light of the whole sittuation, even though technically this is a problem with the modern day OCs and so and so. I think that the truth and humor was portrayed exactly right.
Impact = 100%. I don't know about you, but it made a big impact on me. I should've thought this up LONG AGO. Darling, this is PURE GENIUS.
I loved that for some reason. Best 5 minutes of my life XD
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Just... perfect... XD
Also, I have a Mary Sue called Rainbow Heart Light... or Legend, for short...
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the metabolism thing is the story of my life
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thank you!
i actually want to create a Gary stu as a villein that creates a cult like following and decides that the hero is corrupt (and in comparison to perfection they are) and is trying to stop their "evil tyranny" while the hero has to find a way to possibly stop a ALL POWERFUL BEING!
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Look, I am OFFENDED! MY FRIEND IS CALLED MARY SUE!
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My Mary Sue is named Rainbow Kiity Kat Cupcake-Hime-Chan and she is an immortal goddess princess and is the most powerful being in the universe who can control all the elements,but she lost her memory and thinks shes mortal and her fake parents died so she was raised in an abusive orphanage,but when she grwe up she was the most beautiful popstar idol in the land and everyone loved her and she married Spongebob and lived happily ever after.
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Omg! My Mary- OC is Called Amethyst Lucy Reindeer Pinkfart Sparkle Unicorn Ruby Joy! Thanks for the tutorial!
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I love it. I despise mary sues. I know some people want their characters to be cool, but then there is "MY OC IS SO GOD."
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hey i was wondering if you could read this parody of a harry potter mary sue story and tell me if its funny Β
Hi im mary sue rainbow sapphire sparkle poo ,and im a new student at hogwartz .i am the daughter of sazzaar slytherin,but im the sweetest hufflepuff ever,i haz to go to hogwarts to discover an heirloom that my dad left beehind.im also immortal,cuz sytherin waz a vampire,and also im half unicorn animagus,and half werewol,vampire,mermaid.i have had to live with my mean mean aunt ad uncle Β and my mean cuzin.im at hogwerts rite now and all the boys love me cuz im tall cury and hve beutiful rainbow hair.harry perter looks at me awestricken Β and so does Β draco malfoy and they yell and fight about who gets to dates me and and i am just so sad cuznw every boy haz joined in the fighz about how they want to date me and im so sad bcuz i didnt ask to be buetiful and my hair turned blue cuz im sad and my hair reflects my emotions.so to gets my mind of it i t i get my fire bolt 3000 an fly around and then cedric diggory iz like hey u wantz to join the quidditch team and i was like ok cz he saw me doing loop de loops and flying like suuuuper fast,and i was lieke see u later and then i went to snapes class where i mades him smile cuz iwas da smartest girl in da cass even smarter the hermione grangre and he gave huffle puff 100000 points and then i went to transfuguration and i got aan a plus on transforming a cup n to a unicornand then i made friends with katie,wgho isnice and is less pretty than me,but our dornm was savotaged by hermionegranger cuz she was jealous ron had a crush on me and she put stink sap every wher but i used a spell to turn it into glitterΒ
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Awesome! Now I know how to make the "best" character EVER! And I'm the one to make Ocs
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When I make a character people question why he's a 52 year old man that is basically a spectator, I've wondered for a while.
Now I see why........
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Trying to eat itself to escape this x'D
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I love this so much!
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Richard: (Burns the sheet with a Fireball) This is a crime of humanity. LITERALLY!
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aWW, CAPS LOCK. wELL HEY, iT HAPPENS
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Ah, if only I could read this on mobile...
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I think she will never get diabetes even if she ate a lot of sugar, but gets cancer to make the hero save her....
and she can cure cancer with just a piece of paper she licked
(0 u 0)
sincerely yours,
Priscellia the shitty shitty shite shite..
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Β Thanks! Now I know how to create an awesome and cute charakter!
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As a person who creates OCs and tries to be reasonable with them, I wholeheartedly apologize. Creators of Mary Sues/Gary Stus disgust my kind too. Makes us look bad by association.Β
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HI PRETTY PRINCESS KIWI PUMICE CHINCHILLA HONEYSUCKLE MIRROR FEBRUARY CUPCAKE STAR NEKO WATASHINO SPARKLER POPPY INK DESUUU!
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This is a great tutorial. XD
I'm making a Mary Sue as a joke and these are the perfect guidelines to follow.
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same but mine is a Harry Potter OC
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uuhm, I think that I died a few times while reading that.
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That's a common symptom of reading any of the satire tutorial comics. Β
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meh, at least i have the benefit of not being able to die from doing stupid shit; me and Death had.... a bit of a falling out. heh, good for me that that prick wont take my soul anymore.
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She should fart to create an alternate universe.
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PERFECT CHARS DON'T FARTΒ
THEY'RE TOO PRETTY
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but their farts smell like candy
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Yes and they sound like all the instruments they play at once. But in a pretty way.
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dont insult alternate universes with getting them tangled up in the mess of barbed wire that is mary suedom.
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