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Page 3 of CaptainRedfox oneshotDone with my friend
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S uma soiti. Vsye eti stranichki bezumno krasiviye.
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Look at what you did and look at what I did before! [link] Such coincidence! 
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Beautiful. When's the comic coming out... How can it be acquired/Purchased?
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Great stuff! There are a few wording mistakes though. I love the coloring!
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I'm digging the art a lot, but the lack of proper translation is very noticeable.
I'd be willing to re-word every page, if you'd like. It's not much dialog and I really like the art.
Cheers!
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If you have time to edit the dialogues - you're welcome!
Just PM me when done.
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I was going to comment on the grammar, but it seems the lady is capable of sorting it out.
Superb drawing and colouring. I like the style.
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As much as I love the art I can't help but notice that the script needs just very slight tweaks; mostly to do with the dialogue which is a bit 'chokey' (it loses fluency sometimes) and lacks some punctuation in places- basically it could do with a good editor, other than that everything else is brilliant! : )
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I had only a couple of hours to translate it from Russian and adapt for balloons
and yes, we're not native speakers and need a good editor )
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I'm a native speaker but I grew up in Ukraine and my Russian is fluent, so I definitely know where you're coming from. Living in England does help on this front.
If you don't find anyone I'm always willing to help you out )).
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thanks!
that's a really big problem for both of us, as we use English language only for translating our comics and never use it in our work\everyday life e.t.c.
so if you are willing to help, we'll be most appreciated! ^_^
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I'm lucky enough to be fluent in both at a really comfortable level. It's actually even easier for me to translate from Russian to English because I use English much more (but always have my mum at hand to help with Russian grammar, which, as we both know, is evillllll!).
If you need any editing or translating, just let me know!
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thanks a lot!
[link] this is russian variant of the dialogues
if you see any mistakes, feel free to send me amendments. Thanks!
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I'll be having a good lookie-over these tonight and translate tomorrow morning. I did my bike test today and 6 hours of riding has killed me, so I'll get back to you once I've had some sleep xD.
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