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Page 5 of CaptainRedfox oneshotDone with my friend
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I agree with Sylvino, but the visuals can't be denied. It looks really great.
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The design is gorgeous and the story gets interesting, but the dialogues are so messy it can't be taken seriously. There are mistakes, incoherences, and flat-out "engrish" sentences... Damn shame, it's a nice oneshot project!
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Ok thank you!
It was done as a presskit and not suppose to being published.
Though i'm not a native speaker i'll find a corrector and then just reupload files.
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I'm sure it'll be great! Thank you for hearing me out
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