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Ultra Magnus and Marissa Fairborne discussing mutiny. From Maelstrom - 9 full B&W comics and a few thousand pages of fan-fiction. M for violence and language.
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Excerpt from Maelstrom Chapter 11 - Sneak
Maelstrom 12 Sneak
Maelstrom Part 12
Sneak
This chapter is part of a very long series. If you want to follow what's going on I strongly recommend starting at the start! https://illmatar.deviantart.com/gallery/98749
The small, cloaked shuttle flew in low over the mountains surrounding Metroplex. No alarms sounded - the security codes had all been bypassed and no living eye marked its presence. It landed in a small clearing a few short miles from Autobot City, barely passing between the branches safely. A plagiarized cloaking field mimicked the surrounding area and shielded the ship's energy emissions. The pilot reflected he could probably have set the ship down right on Metroplex's landing fields with little chance of discovery, but he was too paranoid to allow even a slim chance. Discovery would cause... complications. Once the ship was shut down, cloaked as well as he could manage, and armed with motion sensitive security lasers he left it, slipping into the night as if he were a pa
"I have to! Someone HAS to get to the bottom of this! I won't sit by and let it happen!" Marissa hissed. He saw a tremor run through her body from head to toe.
"Of course you won't," Magnus smiled at her. She was raging at him, but not really at him. Her determination always made him pleasantly amazed to know her. He wished, as he often did, that half of the people under his command had that much force of will. He doubted the 'Cons would last a week if they had.
She suddenly realized she was taking her frustration out on him again, and forced herself to relax. "Sorry...I'm really tired. Now, what's bothering you?"
"Nothing," Magnus stated decisively.
"Uh-huh," Marissa said.
"I'm serious," Magnus said.
"Of course you are," Marissa agreed with a smile.
Magnus grumbled.
Marissa waited.
Magnus muttered.
Marissa waited.
"I don't know what's bothering me exactly," Magnus blurted without meaning to.
Marissa smiled slightly and waited.
Magnus sighed, and looked to the stars for strength. "I really don't, that's the problem."
"What do you mean?"
"It's all kinds of little things. Optimus has me worried for one. He holed up when Rodi vanished but now that Rodi's back, Optimus STILL isn't out much. I used to know how he was, what he was doing, what he was planning. Now - nothing. No communication at all. Kup feels the same. Rodimus is even worse than Optimus in a way. He'll talk to you, but by the time he's done talking I always feel like someone's trying to sell me bad energon. Trying to control a conversation with that boy was always difficult, but since he's been back I feel he's taken it to a whole new level."
"Do you think something is wrong?"
"I don't know. Kup is worried though - he thinks something is different about Rodimus, and Arcee and Springer say he had some kind of traumatic flash-back when they went out the other day. Rodimus told THEM it was from the memory of being made human. I don't know, but he frightened them badly. Even Springer was visibly shaken."
"You're kidding! That must have been some memory then! Do you think Rodi's hiding something?" Marissa asked.
"I ALWAYS think Rodi's hiding one thing or another," Magnus said, "but I doubt it's too serious or Optimus would have done something about it."
"OK. So lets see, that covers Op, Rodi, Kup, Arcee, and Springer. Now, what's bothering YOU?"
Magnus scowled at her, but decided not to repeat futility. "Something's wrong in Metroplex," he said grudgingly.
"Something's wrong with Metroplex?!"
"No. Something's wrong IN Metroplex...I think," Magnus said vaguely.
"You think?"
"Yes! I think!" Magnus snapped, sounding defensive.
"You don't KNOW?" Marissa asked, astounded.
"No. I don't know. There I said it. Something is wrong in my city and I can't figure out what it is. I've called so many inspections already I think the Autobots are ready to mutiny. Nothing seems out of order but I KNOW things aren't right. It's very subtle, but it's MY city, and something is off."
"Ok, Big Guy, OK. I believe you! What do you think it is?"
"I'm not being paranoid!" Magnus said.
"I never said you were," Marissa soothed.
"You thought it!" Magnus accused.
"No I didn't," Marissa said peevishly.
"Really? Why not? If someone came at me with those remarks that's what I would think," Magnus said.
Obviously I am a Transformers fan-girl. The art is mine. The characters are Hasbro's.
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Comments: 43
Dev-Dev14 [2015-05-23 15:01:04 +0000 UTC]
Can I have a link? To the story, I really want to read it.
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illmatar In reply to Dev-Dev14 [2015-05-24 03:09:54 +0000 UTC]
Thanks for the fave and for asking. If you want the beginning of the whole thing you start in this folder, which starts the story off with the comics I originally did.
illmatar.deviantart.com/galler… The rest of the issues are in folders to the side of my main gallery.
If you just want to read that particular section then it's chapter 12 "Sneak" in this folder.
illmatar.deviantart.com/galler…
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toyphototaker [2011-06-09 15:14:10 +0000 UTC]
Excellent job with the animation. Love the night-time glow.
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loaves [2010-07-11 08:16:02 +0000 UTC]
I really hope you have a link to your story. It is well written from what I have sampled here. And of course the art is great. It really is nice to see the transformer interacting with a human that isn't a romantic kind of thing. It's fun to do the fan girl drawing but this is really cool as well!
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illmatar In reply to loaves [2010-07-11 12:42:39 +0000 UTC]
Thanks! All of it is in folders in my gallery, but it is all rated M.
Thanks! I'm glad you like it.
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loaves In reply to illmatar [2010-07-13 13:11:30 +0000 UTC]
I read M stuff all the time so no sweat for me. I draw the line at pronography and cruelty
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illmatar In reply to loaves [2010-07-13 13:48:50 +0000 UTC]
Sorry hon. I'm sure you have read things way more intense than what I write, but I am a teacher in real life and I put the blocks up because I'm an old geezer who can't help herself. Wait till you're 18 - you probably won't even care by that point.
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Gamma-V [2010-03-07 18:54:27 +0000 UTC]
I love the details, the vibrant red and blue on Magnus's armor, and the glow of his optics.
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TK-Productionz [2008-06-25 18:14:54 +0000 UTC]
Nice work with the colors!! It really helps to convey a solid aspect of detail!
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illmatar In reply to TK-Productionz [2008-06-25 18:33:25 +0000 UTC]
Thanks! I'm fond of that illustration.
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The-Diet-Elf [2008-05-13 01:08:49 +0000 UTC]
You've gotten me interested in this fic of yours. -goes off to read-
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illmatar In reply to The-Diet-Elf [2008-05-13 01:56:36 +0000 UTC]
Careful - may cause nosebleeds. Start with the comics - they are in folders in my gallery. Have fun - or feel free to let me have it if you don't.
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Koontah [2007-11-28 02:34:48 +0000 UTC]
I hate you. Your colors kick my ass. I'm coming out there to Florida sometime soon and chain you to your desk just so you can teach me how you do it.
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illmatar In reply to Koontah [2007-11-28 10:41:56 +0000 UTC]
I have Kai's power tools....although I like the OLD version much better than the new (but still outdated) version I have.
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Cloudstreaker [2007-11-14 01:08:40 +0000 UTC]
Oh my goshhhhhhhh!!!!!!! Look at that hottie!!! *huggles* It's loooovely! How'd you color it?! Jeez your drawing ability makes me green with envy ^^! I love the fact that you put Marissa in there too ^^ OHHHHHHHHH my gosh, how ppppppppreettty!
Love it love it love it!
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illmatar In reply to Cloudstreaker [2007-11-14 02:08:21 +0000 UTC]
Hahaha...I'm glad you like it. I'm glad you like it. I drew it by hand, scanned it, and colored it in Photoshop. It's an illustration from one of my text stories which is un-elegantly named "Sneak."
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Cloudstreaker In reply to illmatar [2007-11-14 21:41:26 +0000 UTC]
It's so pretty I'm jealous of people who can color in Photoshop. I tried it once, I just don't get how to do it. HOW man! Someone SHOW me! (Someone told me a long time ago, it's layers, that didn't make any much more sense than just doing it on my own
)
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illmatar In reply to Cloudstreaker [2007-11-14 21:47:06 +0000 UTC]
Darlin' I had Photoshop for years...and thought I knew how to use it. Then I needed some credits for school and took a Photoshop class. (Told myself I was just gonna earn some credits the easy way.) HAH! Man...what an idiot! I learned a LOT.
As for layers...think of them as clear pieces of glass you can use to paint on each object separately so that if you screw up one thing the others are immune. I use them a lot, but they aren't needed every time.
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Cloudstreaker In reply to illmatar [2007-11-14 21:48:09 +0000 UTC]
Hmmmmm.... I took a Computers in Art class. But they never showed us how to do that Lousy professors *grumble grumble*
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illmatar In reply to Cloudstreaker [2007-11-14 21:58:20 +0000 UTC]
There are books too but most of them are written by geeks when really they need to be written by teachers.
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illmatar In reply to glimmer17 [2007-10-20 12:31:10 +0000 UTC]
Mine too. Rodimus is my all time favorite which makes me laugh because the guy I married IS Ultra Magnus. You should see his hand writing. It looks like a type writer. Thankfully he is another TF fan so he appreciates my problems spending money on toy robots.
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rodimusjackie In reply to illmatar [2013-08-21 22:00:29 +0000 UTC]
Roddy is my fave too n magnus second
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