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Published: 2009-08-09 20:56:40 +0000 UTC; Views: 3704; Favourites: 65; Downloads: 33
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Sooooooooooo I read this story [link] (which is uber cute by the way
) and couldn't resist drawing this; Spock somehow gets turned back into a child and so Bones and Kirk look after him (Spock was cold so Kirk gave him his shirt 
)....then they find scars and think he's been abused......but I wont say any incase you want to read it. TIS SO CUTE. I KNOW I'M BEING ALL MATURNAL OR SOMETHING BUT IT IS.
I didn't really know what to do as a background......so I drew the inner workings of my mind. Only in my mind those little coloured blobs would be floating about.~
Anywho, I would quite like any critique you can throw at me.
Pwetty pwease?
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I totally didn't know you had a DA account!~
I may have to check you out.
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You won't find anything particularly interesting/good right now. XD
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FFFFFFF. Quit being so modest.
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XD Hopefully there will be more stupid doodles up when I get my sketchbook scanned.
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STUPID DOODLES ARE MAH FAVOURITE KIND!
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That story was sooo cute! XD And this picture goes with it well! Critique.. I don't know how to do that without sounding mean, but I LOVVEEE the background! 
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Why thank-yee ma'am.
PFFFFFFT. Don't worry about it sounding mean. I'm a pretty hard person to offend. (It's just that if people do tell me what's wrong with it then I can be better next time).
Heh, lots of peoples are liking the background 
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Well, I'm a science nerd as well as an art nerd, sooo here we go. XD
I told this to my aunt who is a wonderful manga type artist. If you can get the anatomy correct your works would be so much better. You're only fifteen, and it took me along time to master anatomy, so it's good to start learning the basics, etc. when you can. Even now I make a couple of mistakes, but I can catch myself. A good book to get would be How to Draw Manga: Anatomy. I used to be big into manga stuff, but the knowledge transfers into what I do now. I also study anatomy for science other than art so that helps. But that book is very good.
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....I'm sure my parents would loooooove 'How to Draw Manga: Yaoi'
Thankies very much for that! I seriously appreciate it, and it does help!~
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Aww that's adorable!
Critique.... hmm...
The creases/folds in the clothes look unnatural... (but i have no idea how to improve it. I suck at drawing clothes too...)
And Kirk's head is a bit long/tall.
But i can't find any other little things...
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Hehehehehe~ Thankies!
Pffffft. What can I say, the dude has a big head. Sue me.
Thanks! I appreciate that.....I'll try to work on it next time.....BUT HOW AM I MEANT TO MAKE THE FOLDS BETTER?!
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idk i'm no good at them either.
Just observe clothes in rl and look how the folds fall. and make sure they continue even if something in the foreground is blocking part of them
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Ooooooh. See, you do know what you're talking about!!
It's that I need to carry on even when they go behind something.
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Awww! So this is the picture you were talking about ^^ Very cute, I must read the story too! You drew this very well, the shadows are great.
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Hehehehhe~ Thanks!
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Why thank-ski-ver-ski muchly. ~
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Hehehehe~ everyone seems to think that.
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Awww this is so cute!!
I'm obsessed with baby Spock XD i love how you draw him.
The story is adorable too
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Hehehehe~ thanks!!
HE'S SO DARN CUTE. I JUST WANNA SMUSH HIM.
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Woah, this is good! Nice shadows, and I love the shine in spocks hair.
They kinda remind me of two parents who can't sleep at night because their baby is awake and screaming xD
the dude on the left would be the father (because he looks a little annoyed and tired) and the one on the right is the mother (because he looks tired and still caring...)...
I love the white lines around them!
And I looove the expression of the man on the right
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G'AWWWWWWWWWwww. Thanks!~
I liked the white lines too.....but they got kinda smudged or something so now it's not as good.
Hehehehehe~ Spock wouldn't scream...but they're both worried.
ONE BIG HAPPEH FAMILY.
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In a blindingly yellow sweater.
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That's a sweet story 
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Heh! Seriously? I've never seen the animated series....I'm very tempted to have a look-see on ebay....
Throwing critique is eeeeeeeasy~
Just think what needs improving and chuck a suggestion at me whilst my defences are down.
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It's cheesy, but there are some good stories that they couldn't do without it being animated. Shame there's no Chekov, though 
Nah, I still can't find anything really to critique. They don't look a lot like the original series characters, but the story's based on the film, and I don't remember well enough what they look like. Umm... Kirk's left arm is a bit off. There - how's that?
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Pfffffft. Of course it's cheesey! That goes without saying!
.....too bad I don't know anyone in the film making buisness.
I'd love to see a new version~
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