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Okay now. I'd like to try something if any of you would be willing; I'd like you to try and tell me what you think the back story is behind the picture.....like, what you think is going on.....it doesn't have to be long or anything....I'll give you mine to start off:My idea is that of corruption; this picture shows Spock and Kirk as angels. Kirk has already fallen (hence the black wings....) and has been for longer than he remembers. He and Spock meet and they become friends, but Kirk begins to rub off on Spock and he starts to loose his innocence and wants to be with Kirk and be able to explore.....he asks permission to leave, but is punished....for leaving heaven isn't something that people ASK to do. He is injured and dazed so falls. The reason Kirk is crying is because he's worried (obviously) but also that he feels guilty...
Luckily in my version Kirk catches Spock before he goes SPLAT upon the floor.
……I’m so obsessed with Kirk and Spock right now….tis silly really coz I’d have no motivation to do anything like this with my own characters. Fufufufufufu~
OTHER AWESOME IDEAS OF AWESOME:
~Spock has been really hurt (phsically and emotionally) and is in the Vulcan version of a coma. Kirk initiates a mind meld with Spock and Kirk finds that in his mind Spock is just falling, falling, falling, so kirk flies down after him and tries to stop him falling but when he reaches him he realises that now Spock is dragging him down and he is falling too and he doesn't know how to stop....
~ Kirk asks Spock to save him from corruption- surely someone as pure and strong as him should easily be able to save just one dark angel. However, there is somehow a mix up and Spock's weak side is shown- making Kirk realise that he's not as indistructable as he pretends to be and that it's quite possibly Spock that needs saving not him.......
~ The angel wings are metaphoric; the black is because Kirk's not as pure as Spock... He admits everything to Spock; including the fact he loves him, which is tinting his wings more than anything (guilt and fear) and Spock just takes his hand, and tells him everything through his mind.....but Spocks not sure if he could deal with a relationship with someone who purposely brings out his emotional side so much.....
~ Their ship has been destroyed and they're dying - but they're dying together...
~ Spock and Kurt are angels, and obviously, angels go to heaven. Spock sinned and is going to down to hell. Kirk thinks "If he's going, I'm going with him," so they're both going to hell. Spock is bleeding because he got in a fight and Kirk is crying because he doesn't want Spock to go.
~ Kirk had been a rebellious angel in the need of exploration, and as he disobeyed God, he'd been cast away. Jim Kirk has been wandering through limbo, earth, space, and hell for years upon years now, alone. That is, until he meets Spock. This angel has been an obedient and loyal servant of the heavens for many a generation. As he meets the fallen angel, new feelings develop. The both of them meet often, now, until the two of them realize what the feelings were. Love. When the Lord discovers such, He becomes outraged. Love between two of the male gender is forbidden and looked down upon with great ferocity. Spock logically defends his feelings to no avail, and is struck down from the Heavens mercilessly. Kirk sees him falling, crying out in horror at the injuries of his lover. He does not know how to save him, nor if he can.
End- Happy: Kirk begins to panic, seeing the end coming near for Spock. He takes a deep breath, hugging his love close, and flaps his wings hard, grunting at the weight of the both of them. Slowly, he lets them fall back to the ground (wherever the hell that is.) Jim tends to Spock's wounds, finding that the other's pure wings were completely gone now, replaced with small, bare black ones. He frowns in guilt and as Spock awakens, they live in eternity with only each other, wandering the plains of existence.
Angsty: the already fallen angel is stricken with terror and worry. What was he to do? They were heading towards death quickly and surely. He knew his strength was not great enough to save them both, but he knew he could not live without Spock. And so, he brings them closer, kissing gently onto Spock's lips as they spiral down to darkness, with only each other.
~ they're on the ship when like any other episode something strange happens or comes aboard. Somehow they end up in some sort of virutal reality/coma situation (whether they know it or not) with some sort of alternate situation. While time barely passes on the ship, in their "world" time goes by. In their alternate world something epic happens that may or may not be related to what happens on the Enterprise, but it ends up with something like Spock is dying (Or Kikr thinks he's dying) and so on.
~Angels all have their emotions controlled, in order to resist the sins that go along with it. That is why Kirk left being an angel, Spock began to see the good in emotion, and for his punishment he was robbed of his emotions.
~Jim has just told Spock of his feelings when the ship's attacked. Much like his father did, Jim sends everyone off the ship on shuttles. But he, as a good Captain, goes down with the ship. A couple of years later rumors are going around in Hell (where Jim ended up in) that the Enterprise's captain has just died. Jim knows that Spock would have been Captain and that he's forbidden from going up to Heaven. He has a friend who got in for practicing magic to change his appearance. Once he's unreconisable he 'dies' and goes up to Heaven. Since no one has ever tried before nobody suspects anything. When he sees Spock he loses his concentration and everyone can see that he doesn't belong. When the Lord finds out he banishes Spock as well for loving Jim. Jim panics when they're falling because Fallen Angel's wings never work unless they're intentions are pure, but he tries anyway. They come back to the real world and hang out with the crew as ghosts until one day Jim masters the art of becoming real for periods of time, which he uses to be part of the crew again.
~ The wings can be seen as both metaphoric and real (so they would actually be angels). Kirk's are black because he has done a great sin by falling in love with Spock, therefore he had to be punished, was banned (from wherever) and not a real but an angel of a sin. With Kirk gone, Spock realized just how much his Captain meant to him and that he was, as well, in love with Kirk. Just as his love, the decision to punish and ban Spock was made and now he's on the verge of becoming an angel of a sin, the only thing keeping him from falling into this black pool of sin is Kirk, who has endured the pain of being an angel of a sin and can not let the same happen to his beloved Spock.
MOAR THANKYOUPLEASE.
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Comments: 144
ShiftingWinds125 [2010-09-09 16:31:31 +0000 UTC]
This would make an awesome Fanfic! This was beautifully done! I love it!
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jazzledoodle In reply to ShiftingWinds125 [2010-09-21 20:27:57 +0000 UTC]
Well thank you very much. ^^
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Aconitum-Napellus [2010-05-26 17:05:54 +0000 UTC]
Aha! I finally thought of a story inspired by this picture! I told you I would! But I'm not going to write it yet... The idea's going to sit on my harddrive and fester until I've got some spare room in my brain for another novel-length Star Trek story
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jazzledoodle In reply to Aconitum-Napellus [2010-10-27 16:00:12 +0000 UTC]
OH YOU FIEND YOU.
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Aconitum-Napellus In reply to jazzledoodle [2010-10-27 16:25:03 +0000 UTC]
Trust me, it'll be better that way I was thinking it wouldn't be K/S (probably much to everyone's disappointment
) but more of a very-close-Kirk-Spock-friendship thing, in which Spock sacrifices his entire career for the sake of Kirk
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littlebixuit [2010-05-25 17:35:57 +0000 UTC]
*Ahem*
The wings can be seen as both metaphoric and real (so they would actually be angels). Kirk's are black because he has done a great sin by falling in love with Spock, therefore he had to be punished, was banned (from wherever) and not a real but an angel of a sin. With Kirk gone, Spock realized just how much his Captain meant to him and that he was, as well, in love with Kirk. Just as his love, the decision to punish and ban Spock was made and now he's on the verge of becoming an angel of a sin, the only thing keeping him from falling into this black pool of sin is Kirk, who has endured the pain of being an angel of a sin and can not let the same happen to his beloved Spock.
*panting*
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jazzledoodle In reply to littlebixuit [2010-09-21 20:31:59 +0000 UTC]
AAAWWWWW. I especially liked the ending to that......I'm such a sap for hurt/comfort.
T___T I'm just sorry it took me this long to read it!! I fail, I know.
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littlebixuit In reply to jazzledoodle [2010-09-22 15:23:54 +0000 UTC]
I know, you've gotta love the whole hurt/comfort stuff. That's why I wrote it ^^
No problem for the late answer, I sometimes take months to reply to questions on ff.net as well
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jazzledoodle In reply to littlebixuit [2010-10-04 19:12:56 +0000 UTC]
I normally don't take that long though. >.> Or I didn't used to anyway but I went AWOL for a while and all the messages turned into some kind of black hole.
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BaiLiHua [2010-04-24 03:42:39 +0000 UTC]
A really marvelous picture, by the way. I forgot to mention that.
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jazzledoodle In reply to BaiLiHua [2010-05-03 20:33:16 +0000 UTC]
XD Why thank you ma'am. Too kind.
.....sorry about how late this reply is by the way.....I do appreciate you taking the time to comment......and re-comment.
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BaiLiHua [2010-04-24 03:40:48 +0000 UTC]
Okay, I'm just going to be entirely honest with you: I quite thought Spock and Kirk were playing some sort of sex game (Jim's idea, of course).
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jazzledoodle In reply to BaiLiHua [2010-05-03 20:31:51 +0000 UTC]
That has to be the best idea so far.
I'm kinda supprised no one said anything like that already.......probably too shy.
And you also rule because your comment really made me smile.
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trekkieandproud [2010-03-13 12:26:47 +0000 UTC]
Lemme think... Okay, I think I've got it.
Jim has just told Spock of his feelings when the ship's attacked. Much like his father did, Jim sends everyone off the ship on shuttles. But he, as a good Captain, goes down with the ship. A couple of years later rumors are going around in Hell (where Jim ended up in) that the Enterprise's captain has just died. Jim knows that Spock would have been Captain and that he's forbidden from going up to Heaven. He has a friend who got in for practicing magic to change his appearance. Once he's unreconisable he 'dies' and goes up to Heaven. Since no one has ever tried before nobody suspects anything. When he sees Spock he loses his concentration and everyone can see that he doesn't belong. When the Lord finds out he banishes Spock as well for loving Jim. Jim panics when they're falling because Fallen Angel's wings never work unless they're intentions are pure, but he tries anyway. They come back to the real world and hang out with the crew as ghosts until one day Jim masters the art of becoming real for periods of time, which he uses to be part of the crew again.
First thing I thought of.
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jazzledoodle In reply to trekkieandproud [2010-03-14 18:38:42 +0000 UTC]
G'AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAW. That's a really sweet little story.
AND IT HAD A KIND OF HAPPY ENDING! WOOOOOO!~
Slash cookie for you.
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trekkieandproud In reply to jazzledoodle [2010-03-14 21:59:31 +0000 UTC]
I like slash cookies!!!
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jazzledoodle In reply to trekkieandproud [2010-03-17 20:29:15 +0000 UTC]
I'd be shocked if you didn't.
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ShindouHikaru [2010-01-15 20:36:54 +0000 UTC]
Oh, I like! It's all, like...conceptual and stuff. Cool! Also, dying Spock ftw. Dunno what it is, but seeing a character dying is so fun. (.....Probably shouldn't have said that...)
Um, yeah, I've got no original idea for the piece. Everyone else pretty much has hit on my every idea, so...fail. Great picture, though! It's really cool to read how everyone interprets the pic. Good idea leaving it open like that.
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jazzledoodle In reply to ShindouHikaru [2010-01-16 16:20:15 +0000 UTC]
Why thank you.
.........I like it when characters are dying/really badly hurt.....but I never want them to actually DIE. Someone always saves them just in time.
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ShindouHikaru In reply to jazzledoodle [2010-01-16 17:26:25 +0000 UTC]
XD You're very welcome.
...........Me too. Plus, all the physical therapy/mental disturbance is fun. (Though can become really emo.) It's great when someone saves them, but it's also really great when they come out being blind, or having some other disability. Awful, but awesome. (*cough*Pike*cough*)
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jazzledoodle In reply to ShindouHikaru [2010-01-17 18:50:16 +0000 UTC]
My mind does not approve. XD Too angsty and I don't like it.....it has to be a very careful balance with me.
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ShindouHikaru In reply to jazzledoodle [2010-01-17 20:58:10 +0000 UTC]
Your mind doesn't approve of blindness/paraplegic-ness, etc., or emo-ness?
I dunno, I don't mind really awful things happening to characters as long as they don't overdo the whole 'wallowing in self-pity'-thing. *cough*badfanfics*cough*
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jazzledoodle In reply to ShindouHikaru [2010-01-23 13:29:21 +0000 UTC]
I dunno......it depends how it's written and stuff I guess....but I've read too many fanfics that are waaaaaaay too over the top emo.
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ShindouHikaru In reply to jazzledoodle [2010-01-23 16:03:06 +0000 UTC]
I agree. I love it when they kill characters off and cause unhealable wound-type-things, but when you throw in a grieving Peter-well, just shoot me now.
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BeachballOtaku [2010-01-11 23:41:27 +0000 UTC]
My idea: Spock seems like he is lacking in a soul, so I would say the same kind of story as you, but angels all have their emotions controlled, in order to resist the sins that go along with it. That is why Kirk left being an angel, Spock began to see the good in emotion, and for his punishment he was robbed of his emotions.
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jazzledoodle In reply to BeachballOtaku [2010-01-12 11:03:12 +0000 UTC]
AHHHHH!~ Nice idea, me likes. It's up now.
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BeachballOtaku In reply to jazzledoodle [2010-01-12 15:00:36 +0000 UTC]
hehehehe. Im not a writer for a video game development team for nothing. ;3
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jazzledoodle In reply to BeachballOtaku [2010-01-12 17:35:37 +0000 UTC]
Wow is that seriously your job!!?! That's sounds amaaaaaaazing. ^^
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BeachballOtaku In reply to jazzledoodle [2010-01-12 18:41:24 +0000 UTC]
^^''
Well we are always looking for new writers and artists so you should cheak us out. Our site is not fully done right now but you can find the link to our forums there: [link]
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jazzledoodle In reply to BeachballOtaku [2010-01-12 18:49:21 +0000 UTC]
Ahhhhhh, I see. That site confused me a bit at first, but I'll deffinately check out the forums.
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darcazrael [2010-01-06 22:08:22 +0000 UTC]
Oh wow, The picture is simply heart filling and I love the different versions of the backstory to this! DD= So sad but really nice TT^TT CAtch him Kirk! *flails* DX Nice job on the picture!
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jazzledoodle In reply to darcazrael [2010-01-06 22:21:44 +0000 UTC]
^^ G'AAAAAAAW THANK YA MY DARLING!~
*Flails also* I want Kirk to catch him too.
I luuuuuuuuuurv the hurt/comfort but I'm not into super angst. So no going splat on the floor.
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Raka73 [2010-01-01 17:56:16 +0000 UTC]
*Cracks knuckles* Ok, here we go...
Spock and Kurt are angels, and obviously, angels go to heaven. Spock sinned and is going to down to hell. Kirk thinks "If he's going, I'm going with him," so they're both going to hell. Spock is bleeding because he got in a fight and Kirk is crying because he doesn't want Spock to go.
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jazzledoodle In reply to Raka73 [2010-01-02 10:30:23 +0000 UTC]
G'AAAAAAAAAAAAAW!~ That was really beautiful!! ^^ I love that idea!! Short n sweet.
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Sweet--Tooth [2009-12-31 23:55:18 +0000 UTC]
this is soooo beautiful!!! OwO
reminds me of this fanfic i read about 'em when they were angels....
but i just plain love this
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jazzledoodle In reply to Sweet--Tooth [2010-01-02 11:04:55 +0000 UTC]
Seriously? Why have I never heard of/ read that before?! O_o
And thanks!!
Your kind words make me happeh. ^^
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PhotonTorpedo [2009-12-31 03:49:47 +0000 UTC]
There's something so majestically tragic about this picture. Good job! It makes me feel like crying ;o; Or, you know, making music videos ;D
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jazzledoodle In reply to PhotonTorpedo [2010-01-02 10:44:08 +0000 UTC]
^^ Thanks!!
Well I'd never want to make you cry!!
......so go make music videos insted. XD
Happy new year by the way!!
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PhotonTorpedo In reply to jazzledoodle [2010-01-02 22:43:28 +0000 UTC]
No problem! <3
YES. "I Know Him so Well" here I come~
All those ideas are so good. =O So inspiring~
This might sound a bit cliche but another idea is that they're on the ship when like any other episode something strange happens or comes aboard. Somehow they end up in some sort of virutal reality/coma situation (whether they know it or not) with some sort of alternate situation. While time barely passes on the ship, in their "world" time goes by. In their alternate world something epic happens that may or may not be related to what happens on the Enterprise, but it ends up with something like Spock is dying (Or Kikr thinks he's dying) and so on. Yeah it's cliche but...if no one uses it I will >D
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jazzledoodle In reply to PhotonTorpedo [2010-01-09 16:47:58 +0000 UTC]
OOOOoooOOoooo I like it!! I was actually wondering if anyone would come up with the virtual/alternate reality thing! Good job. ^^
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PhotonTorpedo In reply to jazzledoodle [2010-01-10 20:12:56 +0000 UTC]
Heehee XD Thanks =3 All it takes is a little...what was it, Stargate that already used that? D:; Or every other series...XD
But you know it would be perfect for ST ;D
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DawnoftheDusk [2009-12-30 19:51:09 +0000 UTC]
Q_Q Kirk's expression.
Alright, here's my shitty conclusion. ^^
(Btw, I like the metaphor idea. That's good.)
Kirk had been a rebellious angel in the need of exploration, and as he disobeyed God, he'd been cast away. Jim Kirk has been wandering through limbo, earth, space, and hell for years upon years now, alone. That is, until he meets Spock. This angel has been an obedient and loyal servant of the heavens for many a generation. As he meets the fallen angel, new feelings develop. The both of them meet often, now, until the two of them realize what the feelings were. Love. When the Lord discovers such, He becomes outraged. Love between two of the male gender is forbidden and looked down upon with great ferocity. Spock logically defends his feelings to no avail, and is struck down from the Heavens mercilessly. Kirk sees him falling, crying out in horror at the injuries of his lover. He does not know how to save him, nor if he can.
Yah. -cough- first thing that came to my mind.
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jazzledoodle In reply to DawnoftheDusk [2010-01-02 10:33:49 +0000 UTC]
That was NOT shitty at all!~ I loved it!! ^^
XD I don't know what to think about most of these.....I like them but they make me sad at the same time?! O_o
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DawnoftheDusk In reply to jazzledoodle [2010-01-02 23:29:53 +0000 UTC]
Awww, thanks, love. ^u^
I love stuff that makes me do that. :}D (Mustache, ftw.)
Emotions are fuuuuun.
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jazzledoodle In reply to DawnoftheDusk [2010-01-03 13:37:08 +0000 UTC]
Emotions confuse me. *SYSTEMOVERLOAD*
And moustaches are evil by the way.
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DawnoftheDusk In reply to jazzledoodle [2010-01-03 21:09:23 +0000 UTC]
Of course they are.
Especially Mirror!Spock's.
Except his was a beard.
But whatever.
xd
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jazzledoodle In reply to DawnoftheDusk [2010-01-04 10:42:08 +0000 UTC]
Pffft. Beard, moustache, IT'S ALL THE SAME. IT'S ALL JUST FACE FUZZ.
......or in mirror Spock's case it may be a tribble trying to mate with his face.....
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DawnoftheDusk In reply to jazzledoodle [2010-01-04 23:20:35 +0000 UTC]
Pffft. Obviously. What tribble wouldnt want to mate with that sex machine?
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jazzledoodle In reply to DawnoftheDusk [2010-01-05 17:18:43 +0000 UTC]
Who knows. Who knows.
ALTHOUGH, I think there may be something to do with Star Trek and stuff mating with peoples faces, coz Scotty had a moth mating with his......they tell me it was a moustache, but it was quite obviously a moth.
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DawnoftheDusk In reply to jazzledoodle [2010-01-06 03:00:28 +0000 UTC]
xD
Ohogd, Scotty's mustache made me shudder.
SHUDDER.
He was such a sexy Bamf in TOS.
(I love Scottish accents.)
Then... then /mustache/.
D:
Only Spock can have facial hair, thankyouverymuch.
(Unless it's Nu!Bones with scruff. >D)
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